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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 109)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrinda.diva

awesum loved it nd plzz dont s stop giving long updates ...
 
Okay - I will continue with the long updates.  Don't complain if I start 2 bore u!
 
 
Originally posted by zil1111

A really nice update manyata and udayveer are so cute
 
Yes Dear ...  Manveer are cute   ...   & absolutely adorableEmbarrassed!
 
 
Originally posted by sirjee

Waooo superb specially driving part...plzzz continie soon
 
  Hug    Hug
 
 
Originally posted by milhan

fab fab fab...plz don't do anything to uday it'll rip my heart out!!!
 
If anything happens to Uday  ...  it'll rip my heart out too Cry.
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

lovely update, can that person please stop watching them? Hope Udayveer stays safe
 
In the next chapter, u will come to know why  "THAT PERSON"   is always watching themAngry.
 
 
Originally posted by san.gar

nice updatet loved all the scenes with core of the heart.
 
You're TOO kindEmbarrassed .
 
 
 
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To :  Vrinda , Zil1111 , Sonia , Milhan , Shonali & Sanya
 
 
       
                   
 


Edited by ...navina... - 21 November 2012 at 6:17am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
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hey navina...Hug
its me... finally mai aa gayi...LOL
m sorry for commenting late yaar but kya karein got busy with some stuff...

coming to ur update...
do i really need to tell u?????Confused
 tht the update was amazing nd awesum as always...
great Thumbs Up  ,,,,,,u r a Star yaar... 
i just love ur ss like hell,,,,,, i just keep waiting anxiously for u to update it as soon as posible which u post after literally tadpoying us very muchUnhappyLOL
well i just love everything in ur chap,,,,frm the beg ill the very end  it was just...AWESUM
specially all theese scenes...Wink
 Who could refuse that gorgeous face, dreamy eyes, perfect nose, high cheek bones and kissable lips?  Oh do go on , Princess , he smirked.  That perfectly sculpted body, sexy wash-board abs, bulging biceps , not to mention  that big , fat ... ... Big , fat  ...  WHAT?   Big, fat  ego of yours,
man,,,this dialogue nd scne,,,,, u really took my breath away...LOL
thn their romantic moment gt disturbed whn manyta saw that scar...aww...poor me...LOL

thn this scene...i really liked it
What I don't understand is : Why were u interfering with me when u were out on a date with Jai?  First of all Princess - I wasn't out on a date with Jai.  Secondly - u intrigued me when we met at the beach, that's why when I saw u at the club - I just had to get to know u better.  U didn't want to know me better  ...  u only wanted to get ME TO BED WITH U!  Uday smirked.  You're right Princess, & guess what :   I EVENTUALLY DID!!! 

nd thn i just really fell of my bed laughing crazily as soon as i read this sentence...ROFLROFLROFL.
 If Jai & i got married  ...   she might have been happy, but I  ...  I WOULD BE  EITHER HAVING AN AFFAIR OR  I WOULD BE  IN THE ASYLUM.  

thn came the most fav scene of mine of this update nd tht was  whn UDAY thought of giving  special  tutions to his princes...myomyo my,,,, haaye tht was so  Blushing ...so romantic yaar...Day Dreaming
nd this sentence of manyta literally killed me yaar ,,,,,,, i went completelyBlushing  reading it...
Uday - that better be your gun I feel against my behind.  He leaned in towards her ear & whispered :  So,   IS  THAT WHAT YOU'RE CALLING  IT  NOW? 
haaayeee...Blushing.

trust me navina,,,tht driving lesssons scene was really mindblowing yaar...it was great
,,,kaash even i could gt such haindum nd dashing tutor like uday  who could teach me driving like tht...Day DreamingWink
never mind...vaise mine so called  tutor is also not tht badWink,,,he is also kindaa goodlookingBlushingWinkbut uday se toh kam he hai...LOL
newys...
wht i dont like in ur update was tht majnu spying on manveer nd tht too at very wrong timing...AngryDead wth is his problem man,,,,is he sleep deprived or what...jab dekho manveer ke private moments ko live tv ki tarha dekhta rehta hai...LOL

now i m really looking forward to read ur next chapter...as u said its gonna be very "HOT",,,,cant wait it yaar...
nd u better make it hot ok...like the chapter u posted "heaven nd hell"...tht was the most hottest update tht u had given uptil now , 
i m alreday having goosebumps thinking about tht scene...
 but this time plz dont make majnu spy on manveer such intense , intimate nd  personal moments yaar...
nd the rest of the update was MINDBLOIWNG"

love you navinaHug 
fr giving us all such a wonderful ss to read nd 
plz plz plz try to update next part soon

nd 
yeah always remeber tht  i can never get bored of ur story,,,i will always be interested in reading ur story till its last chapter as it has become one of  the most fav story of mine...
ok
love u...Hug


Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 19 November 2012 at 11:41am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi



Navina that was an awesome chapter..and specially i love the way you give even the minute details of evrything..Last time the info of Horses and this time the driving lessons...And I loved the SPECIAL TUTIONSEmbarrassed...WAISE KOI MUJHE IS TARHA SIKHATA TO MEI ABHI TAK SIKHCHUKI HOTIDay Dreaming...


and the last art was emotional and scary...with that Akash looking at their love making..I feel like blowing him up with an atom bomb..Uske liye to woh bhi kam hota..Angry..

Thanks for giving such an entertaining chapter and making my weekend delightfulClapHug
 
 
Thanx  Gargi Star .   I give TOO MANY details - that's when the chapter becomes so longOuch  ...   But if u enjoyed it ; THEN I'M HAPPYBig smile.   Hum sab ke nasseeb mein Uday jaisa teacher nahi heinUnhappy.
 
Atom-bomb on AkashShocked  ...  Gargi Dear - u are a very violent person!!!Evil Smile
 
Thank you for the lovely comment   Hug    Hug
 
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetshab

awesome update navina!

I love it when princey gets childish and stubborn *winkkii*
Hmm yuvrani manyata's spl driving lessons :P
Loved it

Cont soon :)
 
Thanx ShabStar.
When our Prince gets into 1 of his moods   ...  IT'S TOO CUTEEmbarrassed!!!
Don't u wish , U WERE IN HER PLACEWink.
 
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanarasheedroxx

Gr8 job navina di Thumbs Up
Yuvraani manyata k driving lessons toh rapchik the ROFL
Loved the updateHeart
Thanxx fr pm di
 
 
Thanx SweetyStar.
Haan nai toh!!!!   Waise, asli instructor to main hi hoonLOL.
EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Welcome for the PMSmile.
 
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Tannu-

lovely update

aww cute ManVeer... <3

cont soon :)
 
 
Thank u Dear  Hug
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by psp.pari

awesome, loved it
continue soon
 
 
Thank You   Hug
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

wowww,aisa rmntic drving tuitions aj tak kisi ne bhi nehi paya hogaa,veryy much rmnticc and intrsting!!!!! udayy,u r veryy naughtyy!!!!!! and i love their romnce!!!!!! uuff yeee stalker kaun hai,peeche pada hai!!!!!!! hmmm will be waitng for ur next update!!!!!!!Smile
 
Pia ... aisi romantic driving lessons sirf mere SS mein milegi Wink!!!!   he is mischievious - BUT WE LOVE HIM LIKE THATHeart!!!!  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed!!!! Stalker bohot jald saamne ayengeAngry!!!!  Next update - Saturday!!!!
 
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aliya666

loved it loved it loved it                       ...AWWWEmbarrassed
navina awesome update                                        ... Thank u   Hug
no words i really love manveer in your ff               ...   U are too kind, AliyaBig smile
uday is such a sweetheart                                      ...   Manyata is NO LESS Wink
thanx for pm                                                                ...    You're Welcome Smile


Edited by ...navina... - 19 November 2012 at 10:35am

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