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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 103)

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MAHI1198

WOW SORRY FOR LATE REPLY...
MY XAMS WERE ON...
AWESUM AWESUM...
LUVED IT NO WORDS...
 
 
No problem Mahi ,
I understand that it was exam timeOuch.
BTW - u were not late!
 
Thanx for the compliment  Hug  .
 
 
 
Originally posted by huma12.

love it niviii i read it last night but cant cmment becouse of network problem
 
 
Thanx Dear   Embarrassed   ...   Don't worry - THERE'S NO NEED TO EXPLAIN!!!
 


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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanarasheedroxx

[ SIZE=4]Navi di this ws awesome Clap Clap
Loved it to d core Heart
i never expected dat uday would make love in such a situation and dat too in a bathroomWink uday is such a flirt apni biwi se hi flirt
awee he is designing a room fr d baby i really liked dat scene
karva chauth ka vrat dono ne rkha well dis sounds romantic
the nurse and the patient Tongue
Happy diwali to u too bt ye ap diwali pe kehne vo bhi update k saath i noe i sound mean bt hum toh aise hai bhaiya   Wink
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Thanx Sana   Hug .   Glad u loved it.  Any normal person won't be able to make love after going through such an ordealOuch ...  BUT THIS IS UDAY!!!!Embarrassed  ( he can do anything & everything Blushing) . At least he is flirting with his own wife - & NOT THE NEIGHBOURS WIFELOL.   Uday is preparing for his daughter's arrival Day Dreaming.  Since it is Karva Chauth season - I THOUGHT I SHOULD INCLUDE IT IN THE UPDATE Wink.  Actually it should be : THE POOR NURSE & HER DEMANDING PATIENT Approve.  
I know the greeting was lame  ...   BUT MAIN TOH AISI HI HOON BHAIYYA!!! Cool
 
 
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
hey hi navina...Embarrassed

wow,,,,what an amazing nd awesum update ,,,,,,yaar...
totally manveerlicious...EmbarrassedDay Dreaming
i just loved this update,,,,,frm the beg till the end,,,it was bang on...Embarrassed
loved the romance b/w manveer,,,nd the make out session was beautiful
even in tht condiion,,,uday couldnot resist his princess charms...
amazingClap
plz update next part soon  dearBig smile

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

OMG Amazing update Navi ClapClap, loved it. Manyata as the nurse and Uday as the naughty patient, and as u said the chapter was too much hotter and manveerlicious . 

 What if -  we have a baby boy  ...   THEN WHAT?  Then we are returning it.  Arre, aise kaise?

gosh this line cracked me LOL, so it means Manveer r gonna have a cute baby princessEmbarrassed.
And will be waiting impatiently for the name EmbarrassedEmbarrassed, And the Manveer spinach cream scene was just so cute, loved itTongue

Thanks fro the pm navi, and yes teh entire GAJAR was tasty and sweet Wink

  
 
Thanx Chitra  Hug .   Uday as the naughty patient -  IS AN UNDER-STATEMENT!!!  Wink
 
So glad u found  that line hillarious  ...   I had to add in a bit of humour Approve.
 
Yes - they will have a baby girl   ...   BUT - it will take a while . ( SHE WILL ONLY MAKE HER ENTRY IN THE NEXT BOOKBig smile).    I am also waiting impatiently for the name Shocked   -  I HAVEN'T THOUGHT OF AN APPROPRIATE NAME YETOuch.   Whilst writing that Manveer/Spinach scene , I couldn't stop smiling   ...  I'm so happy that u felt it was cute.
 
Welcome for the PMSmile.
 
The GAJAR KA HALWA   will be even better Blushing Day Dreaming   ...   coming in 2 chapters time Wink!!!
     ( I KNOW I'M SOUNDING CONCEITED    ...   MAAF KARNALOL)
 

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snowdream

gr8 update navi..
enjoyed to bits...
sry dear for the late commenting i was updating last ni8 whn u updated ...
please update soon navi...
 
Thanks KrishnaStar.
Awww - so sweet of u Embarrassed.
There's no need for apologies - I UNDERSTAND COMPLETELY!
I'll update this weekendSmile.
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

awsomeee...fantastic superb gr8 update navi dear...
awww...kissi wala scene is soo...cuteee...hawww...bathroom me bhi romance...ufff...ye uday bhi naaa but that was hot...hot hot...i m loving it parapara...aur bichare dr.uncle ko bhi pata chal gaya lolzzz...awww...uday ne manyata ke liye karwa chauth ka vrat rahaa...how sweet...

Princess - your place is not at my feet.  It's here (he indicated his heart).  Your place is CLOSE TO MY HEART.  Both hugged.
aur itna chutku sa update next timelamba update karna and thanx forPM.
 
 
Thanx Sweta Star   ...   seems like you mentioned every sceneShocked - I'm glad u enjoyed it.      "CHUTKU SA UPDATE" Confused -  Arre  mujhe toh 3 ghante laggai, is update ko post karne meiOuch.
 
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Hi Navina di.
 
How are u ? u still remember me na? I dont come to da forum [ u know y] but i still read this ff on me fone. LOve it lots  n lots.  U told it will end in Decmber.  It will end with baby , right?  I cannot waitEmbarrassed.
 
Happy Dewali to u.  I wish dewali was everyday, then I will be at my cousins house and she will let me use her lappy to come to da forumLOL  n give my comments.
 
I send u Pm  ; u didnt answerCry
Update da next piece soon. 
Keep up da very good workBig smileClap

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

The update was fabulous navina...
i really loved manyata as nurse and uday as her patient...
 
 
Her love for uday is increasing day by day. The scenes
 
 
between manveer were written beautifully this update was
 
 
manveerlicious. Uday managed to flirt even in that
 
 
condition. Loved it to the core navina great work.
 
 
 
Thanx Sarah  Hug   . I figured that after 2 very dramatic chapters , I should leave this 1 with just the 2 of them Blushing. I knew no-one would mind if I give the villain a break Evil Smile.  So glad u enjoyed the update Approve.
 

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