MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 105

SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome double update!! So now since you have more than 35 likes you have to bring Uday back :P Plzz do continue soon and thanks for the pm :)

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Softy17

@Softy17

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update navina👏👏👏
that jerk killed uday😡
pls bring uday back
thank god manyata killed that akash
bdw update was awesome fantastic loved it
continue soon

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Uday Lovie

@Udaylovie

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

navina 40 people liked it .

please ab to uday ko vapas leaao ...

please how will maanyata live without him ..?

Edited by vrinda.diva - 11 years ago

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malikmehreen95

@malikmehreen95

Newbie

Posted: 11 years ago

update was superb dear..its good that you killed akash or aryan but plz dont kill uday..and also dont do memory loss..plz and update soon

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791771

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

NAVINA!

NAVINA !

O MY GOD😲

O MY GOD 😲

Itna zor ka ghatka lga dia humko ye kia kr dia!😭 mera uv 😭 kahan gya wo kuta kamina sand sala na-mard pakash uurrgghhh!😡 😡😡 😡😡😡 oooiieennn meko rona a raha hai hayye raba abi to sirf 6 mahenay hue thay or or or or tumne mera uv ko mar dala 😭😭 😭 😭😭 😭hayye ma lut gai barbad ho gai! bechari manyata us par kia guzar rahi hogi navi baby tumne to atomic bomb say bhi bara dhamaka kr dala! wo night to remember kia hume is shock ko sehnay k liye doze tha! tufaan anay say pehlay ki shanti! 😭 😭 😭 meko to bht bht rona a raha hai! koi balti lao nahi to yahan tsunami a jae gi 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭! hayye mje chakar a rahe hain🥱🤢! uday ko wapis lao wapis lao wapis lao! abi abi abi abi! meko uv chaheye😭 😭 😭 lao na usko!😭 haye ma mar gai🤢

Edited by -Zina- - 11 years ago

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update navina...
sorry couldn't read the previous chapter because iam not comfortable in reading extra adult stuff so i thought not to read it...
ok now these two chapters were fabulous really they were written beautifully ...
Yay the best part was Akaash death iam so glad manyata killed that psychic...
but the sad part was uday got dissappeared but iam glad you said u will bring him back ...
seriously the last note made me happy again...
navina u have got 46 likes now so you better bring uday back i know you will
love ya😊

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Yikes😲 ... so long comment Anu😕!!!!

I gave a double dhamaka :

   ... in the 1st - UDAY DIED😭

   ...  in the 2nd- AKASH DIED😈

I have 3 chapters left in this story ...   in the last 1 ... I'm still deciding whether to kill Manyata OR NOT😉!!!

Anu - if u want me to keep Uday alive ... u better start praying that I get 35 LIKES 😃.

Manyata had to FINISH OFF the job , her husband left . And I think , she did it really well 😎.

Here's the link for the pumpkin graphic:

http://www.grinzy.com/glitter-text-generator-2.php?type=83

U just fill in the text that u want!!!

Hawww Anu ...   u are blackmailing me 😭 !!!

MAIN TUJHE DEKH LOONGI😈 ( Haan nai toh😉)

Thanx a lot for commenting 🤗   .

Ab tumne double dhamaka wala update diya hai toh

long comment banta hai boss😆

Well I guess neither You nor I have to carry through our

threats

U got more than 35 like !!!

I Sincerely hope You will bring UV back again

*crosses fingers*

P.S.

If normal blackmailing doesnt work

then I will resort to Emotional blackmial😉

Haan nahi toh !!!

Edited by anushruthi - 11 years ago

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

@thejazzgal

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Double update.. whoooppiiie 😛

u knw what U updating this sooner came as a shock to me :P but "Shauk Hai Shock Lagne kaaa" 😉

yey 45+ likes where as u said if u get 35 likes..😛

navina ji 1 more like to get 50! ⭐️ Blackmailing Does Work!!

coming ti the Update!

Awesome! Fantastic Update .. aww!! but UV ??

i knw UV is ALIVE!😉

or u wnat US to Black MAIL u to bring the Prince back alive!

i knw koi sad ending nahi honey wali 😉 but plz OYEE no Look Alike plzzz

we / I love ManVeer which is UDAYVEER n MANYATA

oye hoye!! finllay mr. Impotent id DEAD!!!

M k hubby ka Adhura kaam M ne pura karr diyaaa 😊

abhi no chances ki woh wapis aaye.. kyun k rajat ko keh diya M ne tab tak uye Ash me turn na hojaye wahan se kahin nahi jana!!

Wish we got something like this in the Show!! but AlaS!

pheww!! ab se no Psycho Impotent in M's Journey 😊

i want J backkk 😛

loved ManVeer Scenes

Edited by thejazzgal - 11 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel
awsm...both the two updates was grt...whn m collapsd i thought m pregnent hogi...bt koi na..nd pls bring back m's halkat...bechari m..

Thanks Ravneet 🤗 .

Well, she MIGHT be pregnant ;

but the doctor coudn't make it out because it is still VERY EARLY😉.

I'll bring him back ... but - ???? 😈😈😈

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll
hey navina fab chapter😊
something tells me uday wudnt hav died.. or that u wont kill him😉
btw am extremely glad that manyata killed that psycho..😆
continue soon.. pls bring back uday in d next chapter..
relly cant wait for him to be back.. after all our uday is immortal😆😆

Hey SOW 🤗 .

Ooo ... looks like u have a lot of faith in me😳. Yeah - U ARE RIGHT!!! I wouldn't kill him. In fact I can't . Akash is gone FOR GOOD this time. He is nothing but ash right now . Sorry to dissappoint u Dear ... but it will be a while before Uday returns to Manyata😲. I agree ... HE IS IMMORTAL😃!!!

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll
and ya congrats once again for becoming a goldie🤗🤗

Thanx (AGAIN) Sow 🤗 .

Looks like VERY SOON u will also be a GOLDIE😳.

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