MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 78

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: aliya666

me first
lets party
it was really wonderfull update loved it and
manyata and uday were red hot in bathroom
update soon and thanx for pm

 
 
Thank u Aliya ๐Ÿค—  .
Not only in the bathroom - they can get started anywhere โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‰.
 
 
 
Originally posted by: sirjee

waooo diis chap is ur best work navina...

 
 
Thanx Sonia  โญ๏ธ    ... it means a lot to me!
Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
comment edited on page 99 a special one for a lovely update do see and tell me if u like it! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: zinayrules

comment edited on page 99 a special one for a lovely update do see and tell me if u like it! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

  
 
I did see it Zainab ๐Ÿ˜Š.   I LOVE IT โค๏ธ ...  and I love you for taking the time to give such a precious comment.  U have made my day !!!  I feel so special๐Ÿ˜ณ  and my head has tripled in size since I read  it ๐Ÿ˜†.  
 
THANK U SO MUCH    ๐Ÿค—  .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ...navina...

  
 
I did see it Zainab ๐Ÿ˜Š.   I LOVE IT โค๏ธ ...  and I love you for taking the time to give such a precious comment.  U have made my day !!!  I feel so special๐Ÿ˜ณ  and my head has tripled in size since I read  it ๐Ÿ˜†.  
 
THANK U SO MUCH    ๐Ÿค—  .


that's nothing in front of your effort deary! love u too...i am glad to know i made your day special! actually this update has a magic its wonderful! it was a very special update for me! ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago


Navina..it was an awesome episode...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Very nicely done..๐Ÿ‘


loved it and enjoyed each part to the core...๐Ÿ˜›


Great job baby and thank you for keeping your promise...๐Ÿ‘






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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Sorry can't like using my phone
U did an awesome job navi * claps*
The whole chapter was so super duper awesome
The update was fantastic
Awesome
Fabulous
Wondrous
Out of the world
Romantic
Intense
Lovely
Hot
In the end it was a full power pack update
Thanks for keeping your promise ( I know how hard it is lol)
I loved uday and his flirting
Uday designing the baby room was so awww
The hot steamy shower was fab as usual and my favorite part * embarrassed*
Manveer keeping karva chauth for each other was so beautiful
Thanks god the villian was out
Doctor uncle asking what happened and manyata manveer embarrassed was so nice and funny
Manyata shaving uday was so nicely written
The update rocked
U rock
Your knowledge on medicines rock
Loved this part
Please update super soon
Thanks for such a wonderful update
I am your fan
Can I your autograph
Keep it up
Great job navi     

 
 
No problem Saira ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...  I know that u will come back just to LIKE the update.  Thanx for all 11 compliments๐Ÿ˜ณ.  It was power-packed ( BUT OF A DIFFERENT KINDโ˜บ๏ธ) .  I surprised myself when I was able to keep my promise.  ( U KNOW RIGHT FROM THE BEGINNING WHENEVER I GAVE A DATE , I ENDED UP BEING 1 DAY LATE).  I also love his flirting   ...   when I write these scenes , I can just imagine him doing it.   Uday is getting things ready for his baby girl .   U DIDN'T HAVE TO TELL ME THAT - i knew the shower scene will be your favourite๐Ÿ˜‰.   I think it's very important that Manyata keep a  fast for Uday's long life ... especially when there's a villain lurking out there๐Ÿ˜ก.  I decided to give the villain a break for  Diwali .  Doctor Uncle should've known better than to ask a question like that ๐Ÿ˜’  ...  OUR POOR COUPLE HAD TO BOW THEIR HEADS IN SHAME๐Ÿ˜”.  Lucky Manyata didn't do more damage to our Prince's face with that blade๐Ÿ˜•.  Actually Dear - U & YOUR COMMENT ROCK!!!. 
 
Thank u for this long and wonderful comment   ๐Ÿค—   .  
( I WON"T BE GIVING AUTOGRAPHS NOW  ๐Ÿ˜ฒ    ...   TRY AGAIN LATER  ๐Ÿ˜ˆ) .
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsomeee...fantastic superb gr8 update navi dear...
awww...kissi wala scene is soo...cuteee...hawww...bathroom me bhi romance...ufff...ye uday bhi naaa but that was hot...hot hot...i m loving it parapara...aur bichare dr.uncle ko bhi pata chal gaya lolzzz...awww...uday ne manyata ke liye karwa chauth ka vrat rahaa...how sweet...

Princess - your place is not at my feet.  It's here (he indicated his heart).  Your place is CLOSE TO MY HEART.  Both hugged.
aur itna chutku sa update next timelamba update karna and thanx forPM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was soo soo rmnticcc!!!!!!! lovedd uday ringing dat bell and asking for kiss,thenn nursewala episdee!!!!!!! bathrroom part wass veryy veryy passionatee,doctorr part wa shilarious,manyata was soo blushiongg!!!!!!!! loved itt!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update

Loved it
Nursey wifey
And stubborn patient:P
Hayy i love manveer <3

Cont soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
[ SIZE=4]Navi di this ws awesome ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Loved it to d core โค๏ธ
i never expected dat uday would make love in such a situation and dat too in a bathroom๐Ÿ˜‰ uday is such a flirt apni biwi se hi flirt
awee he is designing a room fr d baby i really liked dat scene
karva chauth ka vrat dono ne rkha well dis sounds romantic
the nurse and the patient ๐Ÿ˜›
Happy diwali to u too bt ye ap diwali pe kehne vo bhi update k saath i noe i sound mean bt hum toh aise hai bhaiya   ๐Ÿ˜‰
[/SIZE]Edited by Sanarasheedroxx - 11 years ago