MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 72

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Omg this chapter was fab! Without any romance it was purly romantic. Navina u r amazing writer i could visualize each and every scene of this chapter. There r less writers who can write so beautifuly that u feel like u r watching iy i know last time i said something like this too but seriously wenever  i read ur update one thing which comes into my mind is wow! I loved the way manyata handled the press the way she make them realize their mistake was great. Manveer were amazing but the best part was that u didn't killed uday and i love you for that thanks for not dragging the hospital scene! I love you for this beautiful update :)

Originally posted by: puggyy

 👏 👏
 

   I would love to see her new role 

  Am so excited for ur next update and manveer 😊

you better make sure the fan / air-conditioning is working !!!

Originally posted by: ...navina...

 

 

Forgot to say something  ...

 ... for the next update - 

you better make sure the fan / air-conditioning is working ☺️!!!

 

( hope u are still excited about the next part and hope I didn't scare u too much )  😆😉.

 

Originally posted by: puggyy

     I don't get u navi ??? Any suspense ...don't harm anyone ...I'll need ac only wen it is full of suspense ...hint plsss

U will need the air-con because  ...    update is going to be NAUGHTY AND HOT!!!! 

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

navi i forgot which page i had reserved 

so can i comment here 

or can u please tell me which page it was 

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hey navi 😊 sorry for the super late comment but here hurricane sandy has really tossed our lives just got my power back , and just now read ur update . And need I say how much of a good writer u r ! As usual I loved the update 👏

Now navi I feel from the shoot out episode u have taken this ff in a whole new level. We all by know know that manveer were destined to be 2gether and they love each other more than anything in this world. UV is a prefect character , now with this new climax I see u giving a whole new definition to Manyata . I can see the hidden tigress coming out . Now navi I want u to take this asshole Aryan to a whole new level of evilry. I mean he dared to hurt our prince I mean I want u to define Aryan and his disgusting nature so that we as viewers can hate him even more plus with every passing second even Manyata can know how wrong she was in falling for this paskash 😡 I mean I know in the previous chapter u hav made M regret her coldness and hatred towards UV, but now I want her to be even more great full for having UV in her life, I want M to fall for UV even more now .

Thanks for the PM navi and update soon 😃

Absolutely right  ...  I have changed the course of my SS  and I am strengthening Manyata's character now ; in preparation for the future.  U know Chitra, at the start of this SS   - I had planned for Aryan to do numerous dispicable deeds  ...  but most of my readers have begged me to end off  his part immediately. I am quite confused at this stage😕 as to how I should proceed.  But I do have 1 question for U :   IS IT POSSIBLE FOR U TO HATE ARYAN ANY MORE THAN U ALREADY DO???