MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 56

NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Navi dear plzzz...fast...i m waiting...

Sorry Sweta ... I took a supper break, that's what took so long!

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Wowww...that was awsomeee...lolzzz...i knew it ye koi uday ka pet hoga...hey ram majnu is back kamina pichha kyu nahi chhodta...beautifully written...OMG...love that last scene let make baby ...update soon and thanx for PM.

Thanx Sweta 🤗.

U knew it was a pet 👏 ... I'M IMPRESSED!

Hmmm ... Majnu is back🤢. Every love-story has to have a villain😡.

I'm not surprised that u loved the last scene😳.

Welcome for the PM.

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

RESERVE😳

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hey dear hi yaar...🤗

must say tht was the update worth waiting for...👏

awesum man,,,just too good... u did a great job👍🏼

From the beginning till the end,,,it was rock on...

woah,,,,u really have so much knowledge about the horses yaarwell thts really good😃...

the last sentensce where manyta said " uday, lets make a baby"' awww, tht was so😳 and ☺️

but i really dint like u left manveer romance in b/w,,,,i so wanted to read more 😔

but never mind,,,,next update mei plz...us unfulfilled moment ko complete kar dena ...ok😆

reat of all...was just superb😃

thnxxx fr the pm,,,,nd continue soon

Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 11 years ago

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791771

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Posted: 11 years ago

its awesome!! kia update hai!

Princess - what are u doing? Why are we going in there? Princess - answer me ... Manyata, say something! Uday - let's MAKE A BABY!!!
ahahaha...these lines made me jump from my chair...🤣
and it was sooo hot!

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 11 years ago

uday and manyata moments were sooo rmnticcc and passionatee!!!!!!!!! manyata in western wearr,woww!!!!!!!! horses ke baarein mein hume bhi info ho gayi!!!!!!! manveer scenes always sparks!!!!!!!! waitmg too read mree,cntinueee sooN!!!!!!!!

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

beautiful chapter😊 i thought it must be a horse..😊
loved d ending☺️😆😆
pls update soon😃😃

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
AWWW UNBELIEVABLE
ALL THAT HORSE THING WAS AWESUM...
AND MANVEER IS ALWAYS AWESUM...
SO WONDERFUL UPDATE YAR...THNKS FOR PM...UPDATE NXT SOON...

Was it THAT good???

Thanx Mahi ... For such lovely comments 🤗

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll
beautiful chapter😊 i thought it must be a horse..😊
loved d ending☺️😆😆
pls update soon😃😃

Thanx Sow 🤗 , Yeah; u knew from the beginning👏

Not only u ... every1 loved the end😳.

I'll update this weekend😊.

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi
comment edited on Pg 69😊

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi
hey Navina...This was a great update...Loved the stable scenes and also you must have researched a lot about horses and their labour...really nice..loved it👏⭐️

Hi Gargi

. You know whenever I have spare time ,I spend it reading 🤓. Sometimes I read the weirdest things😕. This thing about horses I read a while back ... SO HAPPENED; it came in handy now😆.

Thanx 4 commenting 🤗

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

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Posted: 11 years ago

res😉😆

🤗

so here comes me...😆

Superb and fantastic update...worth waiting👏

seems like Akash fiasco is gonna be started soon

and then the interesting part...like we all got confuse so did Manyata...someone is going to have UV's baby😆

thats was just so hillarious and cute...jealous and hurt M and UV enjoying it😉😆

and the whole ranch scene...seriously you know alot about horses...how come??🤔

that was your best part in this update you wrote it brilliantly...⭐️

and then comes the final part...lets make baby☺️

no comments lolzz...😆

now how should I say waiting for the next update...u know it very well😉😆

do tell me hum kaha say parhana shuru karain😳😆

Thanx for the pm and sorry for late comment🤗

love ya🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira
RESERVE😳
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hey dear hi yaar...🤗

must say tht was the update worth waiting for...👏

awesum man,,,just too good... u did a great job👍🏼

From the beginning till the end,,,it was rock on...

woah,,,,u really have so much knowledge about the horses yaarwell thts really good😃...

the last sentensce where manyta said " uday, lets make a baby"' awww, tht was so😳 and ☺️

but i really dint like u left manveer romance in b/w,,,,i so wanted to read more 😔

but never mind,,,,next update mei plz...us unfulfilled moment ko complete kar dena ...ok😆

reat of all...was just superb😃

thnxxx fr the pm,,,,nd continue soon

Hey Nira ⭐️ ... Luckily you enjoyed it and found it worth your while, I ;however had a lot of doubts about this chapter. All that extra reading I do , became quite helpful when you got an update about horses 😉. Actually Dear, I think Manveer have too much of LOVING ... that's why I interrupted them😆. Next update will be mildly HOT

, but very soon I will have a chapter that's gonna be SMOKING

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THANX 4 COMMENTING 🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
God it was nice update but how u know so much about horses and their delivery stuff? this update was quite hot but i guess next would be way to hot do give warning;)

Thank u Sarah 🤗.

I read a lot about the most weirdest things u can think of 😆 , 1 of which is HORSES - that's how I knew of all the details.

Next part is not gonna be that HOT ,but it will have a lot of action.

SHOULD I GIVE A WARNING FOR VIOLENCE.

THANX 4 COMMENTING⭐️.

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