MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: adorable_rana

res res res😉

 
Awww Ruba...DID U FORGET U ALREADY RESERVED A SPOT😉😆
 
 
 

Hey navi...superb and awesome update👍🏼

I loved the shaitan scene...it was too funny and cute na😆

and uday is like getting so naughty yaar in your ff...☺️😆 that bachain scene😆

and akash return...now what😲???? on no worry UV AND M are already together😉😆

thanx for the pm and do update tomorrow huh...and a request do give me anticipatory warning when you will update that update😉😳

muuahhh🤗🤗

 
Hi Ruba...Thank you!
 
Shaitaan scene did come out quite nice😃...IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF!😆
 
Uday is NAUGHTY😳...wait till it rubs off on ManyataBlushing😉
 
BE VERY AFRAID OF AKASH!!! 😈😈😈
 
Welcome for the PM...2 weeks time Dear...NO EXCEPTIONS!!!
 
I was planning to give a warning for   "A NIGHT TO REMEMBER"  🤬
...I don't want to make anyone uncomfortable!!!
( READ AT YOUR OWN RISK ) 🤣
 
 
THANX FOR COMMENTING RUBA  🤗🤗
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: vampire12345678


ha ha navi
i live in a big villa opposite the sea 
my living conditions are really nice 
but if u come to tanzania u will see coachroahes are all around 
and i said my maid will bring them she lives in one of the slums 
at my place u will only find cats and dogs playing around



 
Big Villa  
 
U live in Tanzania???
That means u are MY NEIGHBOUR'S  NEIGHBOUR😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ...navina...

 
Big Villa  
 
U live in Tanzania???
That means u are MY NEIGHBOUR'S  NEIGHBOUR😆


yes  a super huge villa
some times its super fun sometimes it so bad as if to go from my room to my parents room i have to walk for 12 minutes 
ha ha neighbours neighour 

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: vampire12345678


yes  a super huge villa
some times its super fun sometimes it so bad as if to go from my room to my parents room i have to walk for 12 minutes 
ha ha neighbours neighour 

 
I wish I stayed in a place like that
...SO BIG...THAT U CAN JUST DISSAPPEAR!
 
TANZANIA'S  neighbour is Malawi;
Malawi's neighbour is  SOUTH-AFRICA!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ...navina...

 
I wish I stayed in a place like that
...SO BIG...THAT U CAN JUST DISSAPPEAR!
 
TANZANIA'S  neighbour is Malawi;
Malawi's neighbour is  SOUTH-AFRICA!!!


wow navi looks like u know the world map😆
in my house to play hide and seek is so fun
no one can find you before 30 minutes
me and sameeer always hide around when our parents are home


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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: mahi0809

comment updated pg. 46

 
Thanx 4 letting me know!
 
 
Originally posted by: mahi0809

A fabulous update!
Poor Unnati she is being traded like a slave for some deal.. Giriraj is unbelievable..hate him so much!
Loving Manyata and Uday's nazdeekiyan!

 
Thank you so much 4 always commenting.  🤗
It means a lot  to me.
Actually...when I saw that u didn't edit your comment,
I thought that u were dissappointed with it 😭
...and u were being too kind to say so!
 
And...DON'T WORRY ABOUT UNNATI
...I WON'T LET GIRIRAJ MAKE A SWOP WITH HER!!!😃
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey navina🤗 awesome update👏
d shaitan part was hilarious😆
is this the same aryan as dek??
and how come manyata doesnt ask more when uday says its nothing for her to worry abt..
luved d way uday tries to protect manyata's people by warning her abt the consequences😊
umm giriraj has come up with a contract or exchange for unnati's marriage too..??😡
lovely bro uday... supports her issy even if he has to go against his dad😊😊
haha uday s jealous coz of yudaveer.. lolz..
even i was thinking dat its a slight modification of uday's name when u urself penned it as uday's words😊

all in all gr8 update navina😊
ummm 2 weeks?? 😭😭 pls update sooner if possible😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

hey navina🤗 awesome update👏
d shaitan part was hilarious😆
is this the same aryan as dek??
and how come manyata doesnt ask more when uday says its nothing for her to worry abt..
luved d way uday tries to protect manyata's people by warning her abt the consequences😊
umm giriraj has come up with a contract or exchange for unnati's marriage too..??😡
lovely bro uday... supports her issy even if he has to go against his dad😊😊
haha uday s jealous coz of yudaveer.. lolz..
even i was thinking dat its a slight modification of uday's name when u urself penned it as uday's words😊

all in all gr8 update navina😊
ummm 2 weeks?? 😭😭 pls update sooner if possible😊

 
Hi SOW  🤗
...yeah ,it did come out quite funny
Akash is Aryan ...Exactly as in DEK! Angry
Well...I made Manyata more trusting of Uday...not like how she was in the show.
Uday is Manyata's  PROTECTOR & BIGGEST WELL-WISHER...
Unfortunately Giriraj in my ss is exactly how he was in the show,
    ( always scheming and manipulating )
I don't have any brothers...if I did...
...I'D WANT 1 LIKE UDAY...caring and protective!
 
Manyata THINKS   Uday is jealous of Yudaveer...WE KNOW BETTER😉
 
Yes Dear ...2 weeks...because it's gonna be a BIGGIE!!!
 
THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awww Ruba...DID U FORGET U ALREADY RESERVED A SPOT😉😆
and that was for posting in parts...for which we had to wait long na😵
Hi Ruba...Thank you!
Shaitaan scene did come out quite nice😃...IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF!😆
Uday is NAUGHTY😳...wait till it rubs off on Manyata☺️😉
BE VERY AFRAID OF AKASH!!! 😈😈😈
Welcome for the PM...2 weeks time Dear...NO EXCEPTIONS!!!
I was planning to give a warning for "A NIGHT TO REMEMBER" 🤬
...I don't want to make anyone uncomfortable!!!
( READ AT YOUR OWN RISK ) 🤣
THANX FOR COMMENTING RUBA 🤗🤗

Pleasure is mine...your ff is among my favorites😳

ok so its good...i will get a warning🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: adorable_rana

 
Pleasure is mine...your ff is among my favorites😳

ok so its good...i will get a warning🤣

 
Not only u Rubaa...everyone will be warned before hand...
And for that update...no PM's will be sent out,
...I'm not forcing any1 to read it;
but, it is a requirement for the story to move forward.
 
...otherwise...I WOULD'VE LEFT IT OUT!!!