MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 15

Originally posted by: navinahun

 

Oh no Fia...U won't be updating😭😭😭...I'm So SAD!

I do understand u Will be busy...BUT, please take time out to read my update.

I will be looking forward to your review of it !

Hopefully it will be UP TO THE MARK!!!

 

 

 

Yea I won't be
I will definitely take time out to read your update as I'll be keeping my cell phone with me during the function 😉 . I just won't be able to post my comment right away though. And I am sure it will be fantastic. Eeep I am so curious to read it 😳

Originally posted by: navinahun

 

Thank you!

Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavona😉

😉😉😉

Originally posted by: FireNIce

 

First of all, you are happily forgiven 4 giving us such an AWESOME chapter!!👏 And thanks 4 the pm!!😃

Aww, poor Manyata...she tried so many times to confess her feelings, but became the victim of misunderstandings!!😔

 

NOW- WHO'S LEAVING?

Dunno why, but that line cracked me up as I was trying to imagine all this really happening!!😆

 

She clicked her fingers in front of his face and then pointed her index finger at him: YOU GOT IT!

Okay, I just have one question...did you ever watch Choti Bahu?? My mom was an ardent fan, and I used to sit beside her and do my homework...it was better for her, as she could watch all her favourite serials while keeping a watch on me at the same time.😆 The lead actress there played a double role and one of them used to do the same action...your words reminded me of her. Anyway, enough of my useless banter...

 

Coming back to the update, Manyata's plan of confessing to Uday was soo cute!!😳 Thank god she didn't text or e-mail him...that would sort of kill the feelings.🤢

 

I was really glad Unnati told Manyata off in the two flashbacks...she had really deserved the rudeness and indifference at that point of time.😡

 

Wow, the reconciliation of Unnati and M was too good!!

M: UNNATI- I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR BROTHER & I NEED YOUR HELP!!!

This particular line is my personal favourite in this update...it is soo typical of Manyata!!😃

It was the same 2 things she had given Akash and she didn't want to do a repeat performance for Uday. Uday was much, much more special than Akash ever was.

True. I really didn't like the way Uday had at times been portrayed as a second resort 4 Manyata in the actual serial. Uday is WAY more special than Akash..and I'm not talking in terms of looks, it is the unending faith that his love will prevail that sets him apart from Akash, who used to become insecure at the mere sight of Uday😕...

 

WHOA..divorce papers!! That was an intial shock, but it soon subsided..because like Manyata, I too am confident that there'll be no divorce after the confession..😃

 

Ooh, Manyata's rushing off to Uday as she is scared of the imminent storm, ha??😉

 

 

 

 

  Edited by navinahun - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: afreshbegin

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavona😉

 

Originally posted by: navinahun

 

Bacha...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...

Thora intezer karo,

Saturday Ya Sunday...sab raaz khul jayenge!

SPOILER:  maybe,  they'll talk all night...😲.

                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...😕

                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...😕

                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder 😃

 

WAIT & WATCH...

😆

oye 😡yehi sab karaake mera dil math todna 🥺

woh pehle waali planning haina

The storm in the room; will be more ELECTRIC than the storm outside.

he he yahi karaan haan mein chup chap intezaar karoongi update ka par mein aisi raah dekh rahi hoon iska

Waitin for ur update dear...

Originally posted by: afreshbegin

oye 😡yehi sab karaake mera dil math todna 🥺

woh pehle waali planning haina

The storm in the room; will be more ELECTRIC than the storm outside.

he he yahi karaan haan mein chup chap intezaar karoongi update ka par mein aisi raah dekh rahi hoon iska

Waitin for ur update dear...

 

Originally posted by: maasoom2

i just read your all chapters and i just love them they are awesome, fantabulous and vry romantic...
actually i m a silent reader but after reading ur ff i couldn't control myself by expressing my view...
i m a die hard fan of maanveer... just luv ur ff...
pls pls pls cont soon...
waiting eagerly 4 ur next chapter...

 

Originally posted by: navinahun

 

Bacha...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...

Thora intezer karo,

Saturday Ya Sunday...sab raaz khul jayenge!

SPOILER:  maybe,  they'll talk all night...😲.

                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...😕

                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...😕

                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder 😃

 

WAIT & WATCH...

😆

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

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hahahahahahahah 

maybe,  they'll talk all night...😲.

                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...😕

                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...😕

                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder 😃

thise lines cracked me up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

 

 

Originally posted by: navinahun

 

Okay Saira...IF YOUR'E  DONE ...

STOP LAUGHING & GET OFF THE FLOOR!!!

I really like the Jai's murder idea...I think I'm gonna go with that!

I KNOW YOU WILL SUPPORT ME 100%