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Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil

OS||IDWTS*Promo-pg4*He was the only one...

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged


Hello people!!!!! Well, I had this concept in mind for quite a while and then I finally thought to put this on paper. I don't know how good it would come out but I think I have done quite well. Embarrassed


I really hope that you all would like it. Big smile

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I Don't Want To Survive

I Want to Live

 


This was the life he had always dreamt of, or at least it seemed like that. But the truth was far away from the reality. Initially he was happy, like really H-A-P-P-Y but as time flew, he came to know what a grave mistake he had made. No doubt he was successful, well placed, rich and respected but amongst all this there was one thing that was missing out from his life and it was his LIFE.

 

He was quite a good decision maker and almost all his decisions proved correct in the long run but he made a mistake, a grave mistake, after all he was just another human being who wanted to fight, to compete against the world and to survive as a winner and it was here where all went wrong, he went wrong. He had chosen to survive, not to live. Though at that time, he neither had the insight nor the foresight of the consequences of this rushed decision. He absolutely had no idea of what hell would break loose upon him due to that one decision whose penalty had seemed negligible in front of the great rewarding career that lay before him as the key to his survival.

 

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Dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jate hai,

Beete lamhein hamein jab bhi yaad aate hai.

 

These lines were so apt to describe his life. Some people just can't let go of their past, there can be many reasons but for him there was just one reason - the girl.

 

He had chosen the illusions of life and had wrecked her heart.

 

It is said that you should treasure the things that you have before time makes you cherish what you had. Now when he looks back he finds that his life back then with her was much more beautiful. Yeah, he didn't have a stunning black Audi R8 or a bungalow near the beach or an empire of thousands of millions but he had love.

 

He had love and he had the desire to live, to look forward to a life with her. But that one mad moment and that one mad decision ruined it all.

 

He misses those fights, those nok-jhoks, those hugs, her smile, her laugh, her intoxicating smell, her almond shaped big brown eyes, her silky long black hair, her soft cheeks, her pretty lips, her blush when he teased her, her. . . . .basically he missed everything about her, everything related to her, he missed her.

 

His life was full of everything that he had wanted but ironically it was hollow and empty. And the only reason he was still surviving, was tiny hope of finding her and spending the rest of his life living with her . . . . . forever and ever.

 

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This is his life. A story about the path from living to surviving and the undying urge to live and love again.

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So, how was it? Would be eagerly waiting for you likes and comments.

See you again, but not any time soon I guess...till then TC.

 

 



Edited by -Shwetasri- - 16 October 2012 at 11:37am

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
nice concept
pls update soon

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by seema.sharma86

nice concept
pls update soon

Thank you. But I won't be able to update soon...I am really sorry for the delay that I would make in advance.

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Can anyone please give me the link of the song - Beete Lamhein - so that I can play it over here with the OS? My link is not working.
Thank you.
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
here is the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sHHOLw2SnoA
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Nice one ... W8ing 4 ur nxt update :)
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
here is one more

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A7lHkA-IY0w
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Loved the starting.. looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 2:14am | IP Logged
nice starting
continue soon

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