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Manveer OS:- You Are My Melody (Page 5)

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 1:44am | IP Logged
awsum blossom payal...ekdom fatafati dost :D

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 3:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ARMaaneetAbhiya

awsum blossom payal...ekdom fatafati dost :D

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Sorry Payel di, tomar scrap ta puro miss hoye galo..ekhuni dekhechi ar ebar comment korte cholchi!!Wink Ei nao compensate korar jonno ekta LONG comment...LOL
 
 
You managed 2 capture the essecne of Kolkata AGAIN. Kolkata's traffic jam must be world-famous by now, ami shotti bolchi!!LOL Gawd, it takes an hour to reach my skul, even though it is just 5-6 km away.
And travelling through EM Bypass is a horror!!Shocked Don't be so confident that u will reach ur office in 3 hours UV, this is Kolkata, the city of Unpredictability, Bandhs and "MICHILS" (rallies that Kolkata is infamous for.).LOL
 
Manyata is truly one of a kind. She stands out from the rest of the crowd by not screaming and raving over UV, but just appreciates his music, like a true music lover. I just LOVED the way u portrayed Manyata as a regular girl. A main character need not be picture perfect to be admired and loved. In fact, it is the flaws that make the character more relatable and endearing...Star
 
He didn't know why he pronounced her name again while writing it down on the paper, "Manyata".
Hmm, looks like UV was trying to imbibe the name into his memory permanently!!Wink
 
In the first part of the story I didn't like UV at all. He seemed like another "jock" (read rich, spoilt brat). Angry
Then he added, "Udayveer Singh kise banna hai?"
At this point, I thought "How haughty!! Wish Manyata tells him off". And that's EXACTLY what happened!! UV reaction might have been indifferent, but in reality, her words HAD affected him, a LOT. This is what had caused him to make Manyata feel embarassed, even though he could have just shrugged off the mere thought of this "Plain Jane".Wink
 
Manyata and UV's relationship was shown beautifully, even though it had a rocky start. A true lover is always a best friend first...
 
Oh God, UV must truly have been flabbergasted when M professed her love for him!Confused But he could have responded in a much kinder way..I felt so bad 4 poor Manyata, her love was se pure and genuine that even UV could read it in her eyes.
 
My heart reached out 4 UV when he realised his love 4 Manyata and then realised that he had lost his love, maybe forever!! What a situation 2 be in!!Cry
 
I loved all the events that occurred after UV heard M's voice on the radio, as RJ Moniya. This reminded me of the climaxes in B'wood rom-coms.The phone convo was so emotional...and the last scene was TOO cute!! A pubic profession of love and that too on a radio station!!Embarrassed
 
Sorry again 4 the late comment, di!!Ouch
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by FireNIce - 31 August 2012 at 4:19am
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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FireNIce

Sorry Payel di, tomar scrap ta puro miss hoye galo..ekhuni dekhechi ar ebar comment korte cholchi!!Wink Ei nao compensate korar jonno ekta LONG comment...LOL
 
 
You managed 2 capture the essecne of Kolkata AGAIN. Kolkata's traffic jam must be world-famous by now, ami shotti bolchi!!LOL Gawd, it takes an hour to reach my skul, even though it is just 5-6 km away.
And travelling through EM Bypass is a horror!!Shocked Don't be so confident that u will reach ur office in 3 hours UV, this is Kolkata, the city of Unpredictability, Bandhs and "MICHILS" (rallies that Kolkata is infamous for.).LOL
 
Manyata is truly one of a kind. She stands out from the rest of the crowd by not screaming and raving over UV, but just appreciates his music, like a true music lover. I just LOVED the way u portrayed Manyata as a regular girl. A main character need not be picture perfect to be admired and loved. In fact, it is the flaws that make the character more relatable and endearing...Star
 
He didn't know why he pronounced her name again while writing it down on the paper, "Manyata".
Hmm, looks like UV was trying to imbibe the name into his memory permanently!!Wink
 
In the first part of the story I didn't like UV at all. He seemed like another "jock" (read rich, spoilt brat). Angry
Then he added, "Udayveer Singh kise banna hai?"
At this point, I thought "How haughty!! Wish Manyata tells him off". And that's EXACTLY what happened!! UV reaction might have been indifferent, but in reality, her words HAD affected him, a LOT. This is what had caused him to make Manyata feel embarassed, even though he could have just shrugged off the mere thought of this "Plain Jane".Wink
 
Manyata and UV's relationship was shown beautifully, even though it had a rocky start. A true lover is always a best friend first...
 
Oh God, UV must truly have been flabbergasted when M professed her love for him!Confused But he could have responded in a much kinder way..I felt so bad 4 poor Manyata, her love was se pure and genuine that even UV could read it in her eyes.
 
My heart reached out 4 UV when he realised his love 4 Manyata and then realised that he had lost his love, maybe forever!! What a situation 2 be in!!Cry
 
I loved all the events that occurred after UV heard M's voice on the radio, as RJ Moniya. This reminded me of the climaxes in B'wood rom-coms.The phone convo was so emotional...and the last scene was TOO cute!! A pubic profession of love and that too on a radio station!!Embarrassed
 
Sorry again 4 the late comment, di!!Ouch
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Thankz sister, thankz again fir this nice and long comment and don't be sorry dear, you gave me the best com,ment the way you analysed my story...the way you reach into my thoughts...I felt the real success!!!  And yes well said about our Kolkata's traffic jam LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 4:30am | IP Logged
just loved every bit of its...
i am in love with this os...
ur an amazing writer...

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
 ur update...Embarrassed
 
 
 
 
 
keep ing dear...Big smile
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Tama
 
 
 
 
 
NOTE:  SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM

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