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Kriyaansh FF : Laws of Attraction(Ch 1-19) (Page 67)

_sweetannu_ IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 2:34am | IP Logged
superb update.
Rey n kriya are equally effected by each other but damm...attitude of kriyaansh. .. .
Rey flashback was vry emontional.
Last scene of bedroom was too hot. Embarrassed
Loved it.

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Shit !!!!

OMGF !

This ws such a Hawty update Amy !!!

Seriously  you have burnt me to ashes !!!!

Such a Killer and  Bold chappy !!!

Yayieee !!! Finally  unki Gaddi toh aage badhi :P

Well ... main kaafi time baad comment kar ri hun due to my 10th and the coming boards !!!!

And u noe na Moms are so hyper and fussy at this stage !! Arggh !

So, plz keep me sending ur lovely PM's and i'll alwaz keep commenting whenever i get a chance to !!!

Thanq fr the PM's !!

Muaaahh !!!

-Sweets
aashi_arsha Goldie
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
Awesome :)
GayatriJethani Goldie
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Amy di its awesome...
Really NO WORDS...
i m breathless... wait first let me become normal...
in out 
in out 
in out

sach me di kya update tha... awesome mindblowing amazing and many many more
u can add as many adjectives u want but i guess they wont be enough
whole update was romantic and HAWT especially the last part
REY pov was written very nicely... so rey knew that she is doing all this for some purpose
just waiting to see when he will knew that... That day will be happiest day for him

And about that last part... NO WORDS 
me toh blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing
passion, anger, intense, and above all love which was flowing b/w them... 
u have explained it so well di... i was having goosebumps reading that part specially...
i dnt wanted this part to end... Disapprove
pls update next part very soon... 
eagerly waiting to know what will happen next...
and what kriyaansh are planning for each other... Wink

and want there confession too but in same way in which u r portraying them now...
more aggressive, passion and love...
just waiting for it...
update sooon
thnx for pm
GayatriJethani Goldie
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
take care di... ur health is more imp, and works come first... so update whenever u get time... but do it soon... bcoz its very difficult for me to wait... after u left the part at that moment...Embarrassed 

yogini64 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
They are getting hotter wid every update Blushing
their feelings,, aggression, passion coming out . . . . teasing each other in their own way- the wild romance Wink
both wanna win over each other,,, want to take revenge D'oh
wid their sexy style Cool
but I don't want any heartbreak Ouch
poor rey . .. . He was so damn shattered . . . . His world was totally crushed at her mentioning of that stupid bet Cry
& poor kriya- unknowingly she killed his heart & somewhere she got punished in return,, coz her heart could'nt get over him Stern Smile
wth . . . . Corridor me hi shuru ROFL
inko private moments ke liye area bhi clear mil jata hai . . . Sahi hai Tongue
gosh . . . . That scene in her room . . . . . They've tottaly lost it now . . . . . But mujhe bahot tension thi ki koi aa na jaye ROFL
she did that on purpose?
but luks like,, she was just lucky, that he came there n got lost in her Day Dreaming
both are egoistics,,, pata nhi inka kya hoga LOL
Keisha. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 3:50am | IP Logged
it was awesum seriously...
poor rey nt even aware of  kria's thoughts...
loved it update soon.
ArShaAngels IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 5:06am | IP Logged
awesome updte..!!..
just luved it..!!..
poor rey..unaware of kriya's intentions..!!..
both r egoistic..!!!...pata nhi kya hoga inn dono ka..!!..
waiting for the nxt prt..
updte soon..

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