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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 68)

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hi friends...


pt   18    END

khanak : i have to go...

swapna : u can go in my car...i would have come but i have to go to my dads office..

khanak : oh its okay thanks for ur help...

khanak got in the car and the car started to move...her cell rang...

khanak : hello...wat...no...where...

khanak cut the phone...

khanak : bhaiya...do u know this address xxx...

driver : s mam...

khanak : bhaiya please take me there ...please ...go fast bhaiya...

driver : s mam...

he drove the car fastly to the place...car stopped in front of a house...

she quickly got down from the car and she saw two to three people standing

outside the house...she quickly ran inside the house...

infront of a side room raj was standing...

khanak : raj...wat happened where is shantanu...

raj was standing silently with few more people and saw inside the room...

khanak quickly ran inside the room...she was shocked...

she saw shaan was lying in the bed with blood on his head and on his legs...

khanak : shantanu...

she kept her head on his chest and started to cry...

raj : khanak...dont cry...he came here to see how the cleaning works r going...

the fan in the above room was not proper it fell on his head...

he is really serious...i dont think  he can  ...so i called doctor here...

khanak : oh no...my shanatanu will leave me...no..shantanu...please ...

please open ur eyes and see me...shantanu open ur eyes...

i have come shantanu...ur khanak..ur wife has come please shantanu open and see

me shanatnu...her head was on his chest and tears rolled down from her eyes

someone standing there said pray to god ma...

khanak : ha..god will defiently listen to my prayers...god please god...

i want my shantanu back...if anything happens to him i will not live in this world...

shantanu..shantanu...she was crying on his chest...

she felt his body was saying...she felt someone is patting her head...

she raised her head and saw shaan was sitting in the bed and looking at her...

khanak also looked at him...

khanak : shantanu..u can get up...raj..come give a hand lets take him hospital...

raj...she looked around..there was no one in the room...

shaan : no need my sweet buttercup...

khanak looked at him confused...

khanak : shantanu u..u met with accident...

shaan : no...nothing happened...he smiled at her...

khanak : then this blood...

shaan : color powder...

khanak : u..idiot..studpid...started to beat him...

shaan : hey..khanak..hey no...

khanak : why this drama ...(she hugged him very tightly)

shaan hugged her back and he kissed her cheeks ...

shaan : then wat to do...after winning ur challenge then living with u

 i will became  an old man...

khanak  : ouch...

shaan : hey wat happened..

shaan saw her forehead bandage...

khanak : small accident...

shaan : baby...

he hugged her very tightly...

shaan : is it paining...

khanak : no...because of that only i understood u...

shaan looked at her confused...

khanak showed his dairy...

shaan : hey where did u find this...

khanak : swapna gave it to  me her car only hit me...

shaan : ohh...shaan kissed the place where she had swound...



khanak : u should have told me before itself...

shaan : when i read ur dairy i was happy and i thought of saying it

to u..but u was very angry at me...

khanak : umm..sorry...

shaan : it canbe accepted in only one way...

khanak looked at him questiongly...

shaan just touched her lips with his thumb..she lowered her eyes...

her cheeks turned red...shaan slowly moved to her face...

khanak : wait...then why did u went to icecream parlour with liya

shaan : to talk to her about love...

khanak : wat..she glared at him...and she moved a little...

shaan : dont think wrongly..comehere...

shaan made her sit close to him and he hugged her tightly...



shaan : liya is in love with raj...

khanak : wat...

shaan : s...when we came first day itself she took me to her room na...

she told me everything...then u started to question me about liya...

i was really happy that time...the i thought i want to finish all the work soon...

so that this trip should become our real honey moon...

later i met liya in icecream parlour and talked everything about her love...

then later i finished the office work ...when i came u was very angry...

i also became anggry because u was questiong me on hearing others words...

i lost control yesterday ...after kissing u...i was not able to sleep..

khanak : wat..i saw u ...u were sleeping peacefully...

shaan : no baby i did not sleep.

khanak : i also did not sleep..in these days u were sleeping near me...

but yesterday u slept alone i was feeling very sad..

shaan : buttercup..buttercup...after kissing u..and ...i was not able to control

myself..so only i went and slept alone...

khanak : ohh...

shaan : ummm...

he kissed her cheeks...eyes...



shaan : i want u badly baby so today morning i came and talked with raj...

(he recalled the talk with raj but he did not say the talkings to khanak

shaan : raj...liya loves u...after u say only i can talk with uncle and aunty...

raj : no shaan ..i cannot...

shaan : still thinking khanak...

raj : shaan...(looking shocked at shaan)

shaan : i know ur feeling raj...u should have seen her dairy too na...

raj : ha...she loves u...(looking down..)

shaan : look raj...if we marry who loves us..our life will be happy...

liya loves u a lot...u r really lucky to get her...

after a lot of talks raj was convinced...

shaan : thanks raj...i will talk with uncle and aunty...

raj : ummm...(smile)

shaan : raj...

raj : s shaan...

shaan : i need a help...

raj also agreed to help shaan...)

shaan : he also agreed to marry liya...

khanak : oh wow...

khanak hugged him very tightly and kissed his cheeks...



they heard a knock in the door...

it was raj standing there...shaan changed the dress and they all went

to kishans house and shaan talked with them and they convinced them for

liya and rajs marriage...

later at night shaan was driving the car and they reached the house...

khanak : why shantanu...we r here again...

shaan : this is our guest house...as i promised we r going to stay here...

khanak smiled shyly...

they entered the house...

shaan : khanak...

khanak looked at him with a smile...shaan scooped her in his arms...



he carried upstairs to a room...he entered the room...



khanak saw ...it was fully decorated with flowers...

khanaks cheeks turned red...shaan made her to stand ...

shaan stood near her cupped her face and kissed her lips very gently...

then the kiss turned to be passionate one...



shaan made her lay in the flowers very gently and slowly...



shaan gently carressed her with his hands and lips...

shaan was top of her...they both kissed each other very passionately



and they entered there beautifull worlds...


END...

hey friends...thanks for liking my story guys...my loads and loads of thanks to all my friends for hitting like button and thanks for commenting guys...thank u so much...

LOVE SHANAK...    :-)




Edited by niki_rbo - 08 August 2013 at 8:06am

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Aww lovely update niki...
But cant believe that this also came to an end
Please start another ff...
Ur ffs have become a daily dose for me...
Plzplz want another story soo
Will be waiting!!

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awww love love love it
it was an superb ending love it very much
and i love more all the pics u have used here matching perfectly with the senes that u have described 
pics dekhke i m dead 
plzz write new ff soon :)))

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Niki lovely update and ending
Didn't believe this story ended so soon
Love your stories. They are simple and sweet
When ever you get time please keep writing























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Posted: 07 August 2013 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Loved it di.. Big smile OMG!!! Shaan was acting all along with others to make Khanak confess!!! LOL

And finally she indeed confessed..Heart Raj and Liya..Nice!!!

The romance part with those ShaNak pictures are freaking hot.. Embarrassed Blushing

Thank you for writing an awesome story di..Big smile


Edited by poo_j - 07 August 2013 at 8:20am

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khanak : wait...then why did u went to icecream parlour with tina... A typo here Niki.. change the name to liya..

Hhmmm.. As expected he planned sort of accident to make khanak accept her love..
Nice ending..

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Loved all the updates...
Looking forward for more :))

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WOW ASWOME UPDATE DI LOVE IT

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