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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 60)

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:52am | IP Logged
omg...they r going to marriied..really looking forward how shan will steal her heart..

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 8:46am | IP Logged
updateee kabhiii

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
hi friends...thanks for comments guys...thank u so much...

pt   11

khanak was sitting with her cell phone...

madhavi : wat beta..did u invite all...

shaan came that time...he came and sat in the hall opposite to her...

khanak : ha mom i invited all my friends...

madhavis cell rang so she moved to her room...

shaan and khanak alone sitting in the halll...

shaan : so u invited all ur friends...

khanak : ha...(looking at her cell phone)

shaan : wat about raj...

khanak : ummm i called him too ..(casuall)

shaan : wat did he say...

khanak : he was happy on hearing that...he wished me...

shaan :he will not come to our marriage...

khanak just looked at him..and said he will come...

later they were all busy in functiion preparations...

(i am skipping all the rituals shaan and khanak r married now...

peoples come and wish them gave them gifts and took photos...)

khanaks friends came...they all wished them...

shaan : i told u na raj will not come...(whisper)

khanak : its not wat u think...he got job...he wanted to be there today...

so he did not came...he has send me gifts...do u get it..

shaan just shook his shoulder...

later at night...khusbhoo took khanak to shaans room...

that was the first time she was going inside shaans room...

even though she stayed in that house for 6 years she did not go to his room...

she saw bed was decorated with flowers...

she felt her heart is beating fastly...khusbhoo made her to sit in the bed...

khusbhoo : khanak ur things r shifted here in that cuboard...okay..

khanak just shook her head ...

and with a smile khusbhoo went outside the room...

khanak got down from the bed she opened the cubboard and

she took a nighty and went inside the washroom...

after changing she cameout she saw still shaan did not came..

she went and stood infront of the mirror...

she was wearing white nighty(as in rbo tum jao..song sequence..)

her hair was waving in air...in her neck she was wearing mangalsutra

and the chain that shaan put on her six yrs back...sindoor on her forehead partings..

a small daimond stud on her ear...and a pair of daimond bangles on her hand...

she was looking simply beautifull...

she heard door opening sound...she turned around...

he walked in ...he was in his morning wedding dress...

he looked at her no starred at her from top to bottom...

khanak : so...our challenge started now...(casually)

shaan : wat challenge...i dont know any challenge...i know u r my wife

and now our first night...

khanak : i know u guys will say like this...(angry)

shaan just looked at her smilingly...

khanak became more angry

khanak : u said u will win my heart first...

shaan : i think i have won ur heart...walked towards her...

she took a step back...until her back hits wall...

shaan : dont u love me khanak...(husky) kept his both the hands sideways of her face...

khanak felt nervous on hearing his husky talk...the way he said her name...

the beautifull airspray that was sprayed in room everything made something

to her..his closeness everything did something...

khanak closed her eyes for a second r so and she told to her heart...

dont fall for his flirt...he is very good in flirt ...

her heart said but he is the one who u liked a lot...

her mind that was long time ago...her heart how can u ever

u can forget ur first crush...her mind no no thats not crush...

i just liked him..her heart no..her mind just shut up...dont fall for his trap...

khanak : now u r going to move r not...

shaan : during first night no one will say to move...husky..

khanak : wat the hell do u want...(angry)

shaan : u only buttercup...just u...

khanak : me...? my heart r my body...?

shaan : both r same...

khanak : no for me its separate one...u can win my body but not my soul...

she turned her face away...

shaan moved aside from her...her face frowned a little but then she

made her face as if standing in anger... but shaan saw that small change

from her face...he started to laugh...

khanak : why r u laughing...

shaan : u told not to touch...i moved ...then wat for u whether i laughed r cried...

khanak became angry...she felt something...

khanak : i should cry...these r because of u...

shaan : wat..because of me...u should have told my dad that u r not intersted

in the marriage...u agreed because u love me...

khanak : wat no..i dont love u...(angryly)

shaan : u r lieing...

khanak : no i dont lie..its really waste of time in talking with u..i am tired now i am going to sleep...

she went and layed in the bed...

shaan : my first night became waste...he went and layed besides her...

khanak quickly sat in the bed..

khanak : hey hello why r u sleeping with me in bed...

shaan : oh shit..if i sleep in the sofa ... r u going to feel safe..

how much time will take me to come near u...

so shut up and sleep near me in this bed...

khanak thought if i get up from bed he will think that i am afraid of him...

then he will say i have lost the challenge...

so she layed down in the bed...and looked at him angryly...

khanak : if u put ur legs r hands on me during sleep i will kill  u ...

shaan just laughed at her...

khanak looked at him angryly and took another pillow and placed it inbetween them..

khanak : u should not comebetween this okay...

shaan : wow u have build the great wall between us...

he took the pillow and throwed aside...

shaan : u told not to touch ..i wont touch u do u get it...if u say r do

like keeping pillows and talk then i will throw all the things aside and

i will enjoy my first night...do u want me to have first night...

khanak quickly covered her with bedsheet till head...

shaan just smiled at her and he slept besides her...



next update on monday guys...busy with my kids work...takecare guys...

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
good that u skipped all the rituals niki :)
loved it very much
ohhh shan was so confident about raj he was right raj loves khanak
i love the first night Wink
niki plzzz clear this confusion why shan is behaving like this what does he want actually
waiting for monday :)))

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
WOW DI UPDATE WAS ASWOME SUPUB LOVE IT

wating for next part

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Nice update Niki
Shanak married  and loved their convo in their room
Khanks anger and shaans flirt
waiting for next update

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Lovely update niki...
Lol shanak first night scene was awesome...
Loved how shaan pulled khanak's leg...LOL
OMG he was like wat challengeLOL LOL
Hahha khanak fighting with her mind and heartEmbarrassed
Both sleeping on the same bed and khanak kept pillow in between and shaan throwed it awayEmbarrassedROFL
Loved it so much...
waiting for monday's updateBig smile

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Hai Niki,

As promised, I finished reading "LOVE"..
It was a cute story.. The way u have written it is nice..
The way u made them get married.. So its a love cum arranged marriage.. So sweet..
Tina was behaving like a real b****.. But good for her that she left decently when she came to know Shaan doesn't love her & thinks of her as a friend and sister only..
PM me after u complete the present story u r writing..

Love,
Ramzz.

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