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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 48)

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
i love the concept 
the first update and i really like the story 
khanak fat ha so how shan is going to fall for her very excited to know update soon :)

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
WOW DI UPDATE WAS SUPUB...

LOVE YOU NEW STORY AND CONCEPT. ASWOME .

I LOVE SEE HOW SHANAK WILL LOVE EACH OTHER .

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:27am | IP Logged
ooo u r back with the new story...yeah... so exicted 4 ur story...specially how they both fall in love...
update soon..

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
hi friends...thanks for hitting like button and thanks for commenting guys...
this update story few updates only...thank u for commenting thank u so much to all of u guys...


pt  2

sharma : beta why so early...

khanak : this is my first day to this new school...so i want to see how it is...(smile)

sharma : okay beta...sunil said his son shantanu  is also the class...u can ask him for

any help sunil said ma...

khanak : okay papa bye...

khanak went to her new school little bit earlier...

some students were also walking...she asked them where is twelgth standard

classes they showed her the way...khanak was walking very happly to see

her new class and to see her new classmates...

khanak : wow there is my class...

she walked very happyly to the class...

she has taken a step she bumped into someone who said WELCOME DARLING...

she was about to fall but that person holded her ...her specs has fallen down...

he was looking at her...she was also looking at him...her heart was beating fast...

this is the first time who was touching her...she butterflies r flying in her tummy...

there was  clappings and laughing. sound...

khanak : ouch...he has dropped her...

khanak slowly got up and looked at them...

two boys clapping hands and came to him and her...

boy : hey shaan superb...

shaan glared at them...

khanak thought oh he is shantanu...he is handsome...

shaan : shut up rahul...

rahul tried to stop laughing...

shaan : aman ..u told tina was coming...

aman : hey dude tina was coming i saw her at entrance...

shaan : how come this buttercup came...(shaan looked at khanak )

aman : i will go and see for tina...aman went out...

khanak was about to go inside the class...

shaan stood in her way...

shaan : hey buttercup wait...

khanak : i am not buttercup...my name is khanak...(adjusted her glass)

shaan thought oh that girls dads friends daughter she only...no way...

dad told she has come from delhi...i thought she must be good looking...oh no...

dad  she cannot be in my friends list...

shaan :no buttercup only suits u...

khanak was just starring at him...

shaan : wat starring just listen to me okay...

khanak slowly nodded her head and she was about to get in class...

shaan : hey buttercup wait..wat so hurry...

khanak stood there and just looked at them ...

shaan : wat is in ur hand...so it...

khanak : its dairy milk chocolate...

shaan : give it to me...

khanak slowly gave it to him...

shaan : ok now go inside...

khanak : my chocolate...

shaan : now its mine...do u get it buttercup...

khanak just shook her and slowly walked inside and sat in the first row...

aman came inside and told tina is coming...

shaan quickly ruffled his hair and stood with a smile...

khanak was just seeing wat is happening...

shaan : hey welcome darling...extending his hand with the chocolate

that he took from khanak...

tina : hey shaan so nice of u...thanks yaar...smiling at shaan...

khanak was looking at them...she thought she is very beautifull...

her face frowned...meanwhile other students started to come...

during the first class khanak was being introduced to other classmates...

second class was maths period...

maths mam : now ur going to have a test...now i am going to shuffle...

at shaans place...

shaan : hey rahul...did u studied...

rahul : s i studied...

shaan : thank god u should sit near me okay...

maths mam : rahul come and sit in khanaks place...khanak u go to rahuls place...

shaan thought ouch no way...i am sitting that buttercup...does she study well...

mam should have asked tina to sit near me...shit...

khanak walked to shaans place...she felt nervous...

shaan was just glaring at her...

khanak came and sat near him...

shaan slowly started to whisper to her...

shaan : look buttercup u should show me the answers...

khanak looked at him in shock

shaan : show me ur paper while doing...

khanak noded in no...

shaan : if u r not showing i will say u r coping from me...

khanak was shocked and she whispered if mam finds...

shaan : dont worry just keep writing this way okay...

khanak just nodded her head...

shaan copied some sums from her ...when mam does not see he will gently

press her legs with his legs so that she will show the paper...

that time she felt shiver ...this is the first time a boy is touching like this...

later in the afternoon last class was maths class...

rahul : mam will give test papers now na...

shaan : ha ha...

he thought oh no does she done the sum correctly...

maths came with papers...

rahul : wat order is she going to give man...ha last time from first mark she gave

so this time from last mark...

maths mam : shaan...

shaan thought omg i failed in this test...that buttercup...

shaan walked to mam...

maths mam : he got the first mark 50 out of 50..

shaan thought omg omg...omg...i am

all the students clapped hands for him shaan was in smiling...

maths mam : khanak ...49 out of 50

shaan thought wat i copied from her  but she ...

after class over everyone was going out...

khanak was keeping her books...

shaan : hey buttercup...

khanak turned and looked at him...

shaan : how u missed one mark...he took the paper that was on her hand..

he saw in one mark question she did not tick the answer...

khanak recalled that time...while she was about to tick the answer

shaan holded her hand...she became nervous and she forgot to answer

that question...

shaan : thank god u did not answer that if not mam would have doubted us...

rahul : shaan...(Shouting from outside...)

shaan : ha coming..he started to go out...

khanak was just looking at him suddenly he stopped in his track...

khanak looked down and started to arrange the bag...

shaan : buttercup...

khanak :ha..(looked at shaan )

shaan : thanks...(smile)he went out...

later at night in khanaks home...she finished her homeworks

she took her dairy and started to write...

dear dairy today i saw a handsome boy his name is shantanu...

he was the first boy to hold me ...his face was very close to my face...

he said welcome darling i felt nervous and i felt butterflies in my tummy...

but he called me buttercup i felt sad...

she started to recall the morning incident and then she started

to draw in her dairy...after some time she looked at it...

she smiled...u r looking handsome shantanu...


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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
this is really a cure beginning...a little nok jhok..which ultimatey made them fall in love...omg khanak in specs..she must be looking cute...nd yeah so happy u upadte so early..keep it up,,,beautiful update...:)

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Niki lovely update
Shaan and Khanak first meeting  and calling her buttercup and shaan thinking she is not friends list I felt sorry for khanak
Khanak with glasses cute and hope they become friends soon
waiting for next update

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Wooow auick update tho 
hope they become friends lool 
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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Loved it di..Big smile ShaNak first meeting in school!!! He was looking for Tina but bumped into Khanak.. Embarrassed

Awww..Shaan called Khanak Buttercup..I like this name!!! Big smile

Both came to know about eachother..Place got exchanged and ShaNak sat together.. Big smile Destiny!!! Wink Embarrassed

OMG!!! He copied whole paper from her.. LOL And when teacher gave paper he thought he scored least but instead he scored full mark!!! Smile

What Khanak got 49 out of 50!!! Shocked Oh..She fully got memerized by his look and touch.. Embarrassed

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di.. Smile

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