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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 47)

-pranjal- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki_rbo

hey friends...thanks a lot for hitting like button and thanks a lot for commenting..i really loved all ur comments...thank u so much...i have thought of next story..started writing first part...but it has limited number of parts still thinking...i need sometime after i write some parts i will start to update...

Such a  awesome News ...Yiippeee

Waiting Eagerly Big smile Big smile

niki_rbo Goldie

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 10:20am | IP Logged
                                      LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL

hi friends..this is a short story...few updates...hope u guys like it...i will update whenever i get time...
if any one wants pm u can like this update for those i will pm u when i update an update...
please leave ur opinions it helps me to add an scenes r modify scene...it helps me a lot...

pt 1

sharma : khanak...khanak beta...

khanak : s papa...

she quickly closed her dairy...and sat in the bed...

sharma : r u not sleeping...

khanak : i am going to sleep now ...u came...(smile)

sharma : sorry beta i was late today...

khanak : its okay papa...(smile)

sharma : how did u do ur physics test...

khanak : wow it was really easy..i will get first mark...(smile)

i will get nice mark in twelth exam...

sharma : i know my princess will get first mark...

sree : sir...holding a tray with glass of milk...

sharma got the milk from sree(servant) and extended to khanak..

khanak : no papa i dont want it...

sharma : get mark is not alone important u should be healthy na beta...

khanak : i am really very healthy..look at me...(frowned face)

sharma : why any said anything...

khanak was silent...

sharma : look beta u r beautifull...dont think of anyone saying okay...

khanak : no papa see i am very fat...

sharma : no u look gorgeous my baby...physical appearance

last only for time but heart is that matters...so my sweet little daughter

will drink milk ...(smile)

khanak : but papa...

sharma : beta first milk...

khanak got the glass of milk and drank it...

sharma : thats my sweet girl...patted her head

sharma : how is shaan studying ...

khanaks heart beated fastly on hearing his name...then it became little sad...

khanak : he is studying good...

sharma : goodnite beta...kissed her forehead...

khanak : goodnite papa...(smile)

khanak layed down in bed...her dad covered her with bedsheet...

khanak smiled at him...

sharma smiled at her and then took her glasses and kept it the table...

sharma switched off the light and went out...

after her dad went out she took the dairy and saw the front page...

khanak : good night shantanu...

closed the dairy and hugged to her chest and she recalled her past...

khanaks mom and dad r vidhya and sharma...

khanaks mom died after giving birth to khanak...

sharma and his mom took care of khanak...many told sharma to do

second marriage but he refused and he took care of khanak with his moms help...

khanaks dadi is really very good person she brought up khanak very well

but one small backdrop she used to feed her very rich and heavy...

from childhood khanak became very very bubbly...

at younger age everyone used to say ur looking bubbly and beautifull...

but later she was not able to reduce weight...

they were living in delhi...sharma worked hard and he became a very

good business man...he used to travel a lot but he talks with khanak and

he never misses any talk with her...khanak loved him a lot...

during a business peoples meating sharma met his childhood friend sunil

who was settled now in mumbai...his friendship now continued

as a business partner...sharma started a business in mumbai along with sunil...

sharma travelled to mumbai and he continued the business...

her dadi was her best friend ...her mom...it was going smooth in khanaks life...

khanak has entered 12 th standard ...one day her dadi passed away in her sleep...

she missed her dadi a lot...sharma changed his place on sunils advice...

he brought a house in mumbai and khanak and sharma came to mumbai...

and sunil joined khanak in the school where his son studying...

khanak got ready for school and she was excited to go to her new school...

those who want pms please hit like button here so that i will send pm whenever i update...
nikita :-)

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poo_j IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Wow!!! Loved it di..Smile ShaNak are in school!!! So cool!!!

Awww..Khanak is bubbly and she is having complex as she thinks she is fat!!! Ouch

She daily writes diary on Shaan.. Embarrassed

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di..Smile

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Maneesha_Shanak IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Aww super cute update update niki...
Loved it..
Lol khanak and shaan study in the same college...
Khanak is fat so shaan had definitely made fun of her...thats why she may be upset when mr.sharma took shaan's name...shaaan
Waiting for the next update...

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AP... Goldie

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Ohhh wooow cant wait for next part 
continue soon i kinda want shaan to fall for khanak, as ur shiwung us that khanak knda likes him, i wanna see that shaan also likes her but hasnt said anything lool

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-pranjal- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Awesome Concept Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap 

Khanak is little chubby and that makes her loose confidence, You have described her life till date beautifully. Clap  her Papa is her only World & not to forget her Diary which holds her every unsaid expressions and feelings. Smile Mr. Sharma is a great man love how he takes care of his gudiya, no matter how late he comes but he can't go to bed without meeting Khanak. Khanak now stays in Mumbai & studying with shaan Big smile both are in 12th standard Smile aweee thats means teenagers love story Day Dreaming 

I hope like others shaan isn't making Fun of her. hope they are friends & not silent admirers of each other, Smile too many questions in my mind 

Thanks a ton for starting new one ...Continue soon Smile

Waitinggg Smile


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heer_85 Goldie

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Nikki Clap as usual Awesome update  thanx for the pm
u started a new os lovely yaar 
missing shanak so much 
so khanak has a past n that must be shaan 
m dying to read the farther updates 
awaiting for the next parts Smile  

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sudhareddy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Niki nice ss
Shaan and Khanak are teenagers  
Khanak is bubbly and thinks she is fat   and may be she loves shaan  
loved this story

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