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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 45)

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Super cute Update Clap Clap Clap 

I am loving this Side of khanak. the way she is behaving & claiming unspoken authority towards shaan is described amazingly Clap Clap Onion Raita hehehe I remembered Khanak eating Raita & was awarded with Kiss from Hubby but this time khanak played trick on Tina & that Dumb bimboo didnt thought before trying i loved Shaan's reaction on that LOL  the way he was  first he & later riya ask her to sit away for awesome LOL a small incidence from Past was super cute. Cold coffee ...but why Shaan didnt agreed to have it this time? Confused i though he will say yes.  Fire on the mountain ki jagah game honi chahiye Jali re jali tina jali LOL Sorry for such lame joke ...But i just last part the way she hugged him amazing. 

please post next soon...this is getting exciting ...Please continue soon

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hi friends...


ch  20  END

next day morning everyone r sitting in the dinning table for breakfast...

shaan was coming down in angry...from his face its very clear...

khanak was serving food to kids...he came and sat down...

akshay : hey man wats up man...why r u so angry...

khanak looked at tina ..she also looked at khanak...

sunil : ha...wats up shaan...

shaan : nothing dad...he starts to eat...

his cell phone vibrated for a msg...he read it and he became very angry...

shaan : shitt...he switched off the phone...

akshay : wat happened...

shaan : some b*****  sending sms...

akshay : wat sms...

shaan : he is telling rubbish about me and tina...how come ...shit...

tina is like a sister to me...if i get that bloody ...he is defiently going to hell...

sunil : did u trace the number...

shaan : s dad...its unknown number from  XXX state...

sunil : come on cool eat first...

shaan : my mood is off...he was about to getup...

khanak came near him and holded his hand with a smile...

khanak : why r u not eating for that...we know about ur relationship

u both share..so why to worry about that cheap sms ...

shaan was standing dumbfold...he was thinking...damn wat is happening

my baby ...is it real r dream...his heart from yesterday u r asking this is real...

it is real...his mind does she forgive me...his heart s...his mind...no..still confused...

khanak : shantanu...shantanu...

he came back to reality...

khanak : first eat ...tina say to him...nothing to worry...(smile)

tina was looking very sad...and with a sad smile she said to eat...

tina could not eat further she started to recall last nights incident...

after the game tina was carefully watching khanak...

she thought khanak has forgiven shaan...she thought no...no...its becoming

night...i should do something...think...think...ha s..s...thats it...

after dinner shaan was looking very happy on seeing smiling khanaks face...

kids were drinking milk and getting ready to go for bed...

there was a sound from tinas room...tina was shouting aloud...

everyone ran into the room...they saw blood in tinas leg...

she has stamped in the broken glass...it was a small cut but tina has

created a big drama...doctor was called and first aid is done...

while elders were gone shaan and khanak and riya were sitting in tinas room...

tina : shaan u please stay with me today..its paining...

khanak : tina dontworry i will be with u...

tinas face was frowned and it became expressionless...

riya : ha di we will stay...

shaan : ha we all stay...

khanak : no shantanu...u stay with ansh...he will be afraid...

and u have office tomorrow...and riya u also go and sleep u r having meeting

in ur office na...i will be with tina...i will help her ...(smile)

riya : ha ...okay bhabi...its correct u stay with di..we will go...come bhaiya lets go...

shaan : ummm..takecare tina goodnight...(looked at khanak)

khanak just smiled...after everyone was gone...khanak locked the room and came

and sat on the chair and just looked at tina...

tina looked at her very angryly...

khanak just smiled at her...

khanak : tina watever u r doing is wrong tina...think good...

tina : i am thinking good only...

khanak : no tina...u have done mistakes...now please stop doing wrong...

tina : shit wrong...u r the wrong one..u r the one taken my place...

u stole my heart...everything is because of u...u go away...

khanak just looked at her and smiled ...tina turned her face to otherside...

khanak :  my sweet heart never thought u like that way...

tina looked at khanak...

tina : no he is my best friend...he has feelings for me

khanak : feeling is like a sister...

tina : no...no...shut up...shut up...(angry...)

khanak : its true that is only true tina...

tina : no..no...he shares with me everything...he likes me...h...(tears rolled down )

khanak : he likes u as a sister...its true...

tina : no...no khanak...(tears rolled down)

khanak : i can prove that...

tina looked at her through confused face with tears rolling down...

khanak  : s i can prove it..(confident)

tina : if u failed u should leave my shaan...

khanak just smiled at tina...

khanak : now first sleep okay...(smiled at her sweetly)

later khanak talked with a relative who is in XX state...he is really good man he helped

khanak in her plan..he who send messages to shaan ...lot of messages saying about

shaan and tina wrong...

khanak : tina eat ...(standing near her smiling)

all others have gone to hall..shaan tina and khanak r there in dinning hall...

shaan : hey wats up dude..why r u upset...hey tina why r crying...

tina : uh...she wiped her eyes...i miss my family...shaan ...uh...i am going tonight

back to america...

shaan : hey why tina...u told that u came to stay here for some months...

tina : no..shaan last night dad called me ..there is an important work there itseems...

so i have to leave tonight...can u help me arrange tickets...

shaan : ya sure...we will miss u...

tina : i will also miss u guys...

shaan : okay u pack things i will arrange other things...

shaan was about to go...

tina : shaan...

shaan : ha tina...(stopped from his tracks...)

tina : u r so lucky to have khanak as ur wife...

shaan just looked at khanak who was smiling shyly...

khanak : no tina...i am the luckiest person to have shantanu as my hubby...

with a broad smile went and holded shaans hand...

shaan was dumstruck...wat..wat did she say...omg..omg...she said that...

it is dream...it is real..dream real...

shaan : ouch...rubbed his hand...

khanak whispered it is real not dream...(with a smile)

shaan looked at his wife with a pleasant shock...

they both stared at each other...

tina : u can romance ur wife later first get me my tickets...with a smile...

shaan smiled and ruffled his hair and went out happily...

khanak entered tinas room...tina was packing things tears flowing down...

on seeing khanak ..tina started to wipe her tears...

khanak went near and hugged her...tina hugged her and she started to cry...

tina : i am sorry khanak..i am really sorry for all i have done to u and shaan...

khanak : shh...shhh...no tina...dont say anything...

tina wiped her tears and looked at khanak...

tina : thanks khanak...for not saying anything to shaan...

khanak : i dont want him to be hurted in anyways...i want him to be happy...

khanak : tina...

tina : ha...

khanak : promise me that...

tina smiled at khanak and holded her hands...

tina : i promise khanak i will also settle in my life but i need some time...

khanak smiled at her...they both hugged each other...

shaan came only at evening...and all were busy in talking with tina

and getting presents for tina...house was in full of joy...

at 10 o clock shaan  went and dropped tina in airport...

when he was getting back home it was going to be 12...there was no light in the house...

shaan : wat the hell happened...watchman...watchman...were did he went...

shaan opened the gate then went inside and parked the car...

shaan : why is it like this...there is no light..is all gone out...

shaan went and opened the door and it was dark...

shaan : why is it dark...mom...

lights were oned with a loud sound of shouting happy birthday shanatanu...

shaan was damn shocked...with a shocked smiling face he looked around...

house was decorated with white and pink curtains...

everyone standing before a table which has a big white forest cake...

khanaks mom and dad also came...kids were also standing...

shaan walked inside with a huge smile...

everyone wished him...

shaan : wat a surprise...

madhavi : its all khanaks idea...

shaan looked at khanak with a broad smile...

khanak brought a bunch of his  white flowers and wished him happy birthday...

they cutted cake and everyone was busy in eating cakes...

khanak helped dadi to go to her room...because dadi was tired...

khanak was coming out of dadis room...she was pulled with a force

khanak : sh...shantanu wat r u doing...leave me...

since dadis room was near steps and it cannot be seen from hall...

shaan quickly carried her in his arms and walked towards the room...

khanak : leave me...(shy smile)

shantanu : no i wont...

shantanu carried her to their rooms and he locked the room...

khanak : hey wat r u doing...ansh will come open...

she was about to open...shaan grabbed her hand and hugged her in a hugg...

shaan : no one will come...and ansh is going to sleep with his nana nanis room..

khanak : wat...

shaan : i made all arrangements...(with a grinning smile...)

khanak smiled shyly...

shaan : come one khanak do the next ...

khanak : wat...she tried to go from his grip...

shaan : my gift...

khanak : wat do u want...

shaan : cold coffee...(naughty smile)

khanak : uhh...(smiled shyly )..no...(stern face...)

shaan : hey why ...

khanak : yesterday ..u said u dont want it...

shaan : i told that because there r more other things like (he whispered in her ears)

khanak : dhat...kept her face in his chest and hugged him...

shaan slowly lifted her face ...

shaan and khanak : i love u...(smile)

shaans lips looked at her lips...khanak slowly closed her eyes and parted her lips

a little and shaan kissed her lips very gently...she kissd him back

kiss turned to be very passionate...they kissed eachother very forcely...

her hands around his neck and pulling him more towards her...

he hugged her even more tighter...they broke the kiss for breathing...

shaan carried her to the bed...khanak looked at him shyly...

he gently placed her on the bed and he lowered himself on her...

they kissed eachother very passionately...

shaan : shit...i forgot...

khanak : wat...while hugging him...

shaan looked at khanak...

shaan : baby how did u forgive...twodays back u were in full anger...

khanak : this is the time to ask...

shaan : no..but i want to know...

khanak : i got ur dairy...

shaan : wat is in that..i told the same thing only to u..i havent written extra in that...

khanak : budthal...

shaan : wat me...i am not budhal...

khanak : do u want icecreams...

shaan : wat...really...(smile)

khanak : ouch...uhh...sh...

khanak:wat r u doing...

shaan:shhh...wait...umm...

khanak:uhh...no..shh...u...

shaan and khanak :i love u ...

they both entered their  beautifull world ...



                          END




hey friends i hope u guys liked my simple story...finallly i completed the story...i was really worried whether i would finish the story...if i started a thing i should finish it...if story is hanging in a middle it will be very bad...thank god i completed it...

thanks a lot to all my friends who commented and hited like button...thanks for liking my simple way of writing...thanks a lot for commenting and telling ur views...i reallly loved ur comments..i read it again and again and it sometimes it helped me to add r modify some scenes...
and thanks to all my silent readers...sorry for not thanking individually...
my hearty thanks to all my friends for liking my simple story and simple way of writing...

now  a days i am not getting time to write ...for this story only i took a long time...sorry for delay updates...if i get any ideas i will update here in this forum only not in blogs...because i love this forum a lot...if i start new story i will pm u guys ...


          Thank You to ALL  SHANAK LOVERS...


 love  NIKITA  :-)




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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 1:04am | IP Logged
finally tina accept the mistake...nd iur old shaan is back really luv the ending nd plz keep on writing we luv ur stylle of writing,,,

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Wow superb update niki...
Finally khanak made tina understand that shaan treats her as a sister...
Loved how khanak made tina comfortable...
Aww cant believe that this story also came to an end...
Please continue with your magical FF's...
Will be awaiting for your next FF...
Hope you will start again...

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Niki lovely update and lovely ending
Khanak made tina understand that Shaan treats her as sister loved it
Please Keep writing when ever you get time

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Awww loved it babe 
whenever an idea pops by do let us know 
Im missing u on this forum :( 
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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Loved it di..Smile So its all Khanak's plan..Good..She made Tina to see the truth that Shaan think her as his sister..LOL Tina too understood and finally left to US..

Wow!!! Surprise birthday party for Shaan arranged by Khanak!!!Big smile So cool!!! Then ShaNak romance..Embarrassed Lovely!!!

Thank you for writing a fabulous story di..Big smile


Edited by poo_j - 04 July 2013 at 8:14am

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brilliant update NikkiClapGet back soon with d new SHANAK story... -saroj

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