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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 4)

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
hii nikiSmile...sorry a late reply...but loved ur Os...u r brilliant as alwaysClap

            i can imagine our yasharan in itTongue...shanak r so cute...missing their romance...noone can create same magic but u always successful to create same magic in ur FFs..plz keep writing like dis...i'm waiting for ur next FFSmile

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Niki how are you
missed your ffs very much and missed you
lovely OS  and romantic
keep writing










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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by loveYM

hii nikiSmile...sorry a late reply...but loved ur Os...u r brilliant as alwaysClap

            i can imagine our yasharan in itTongue...shanak r so cute...missing their romance...noone can create same magic but u always successful to create same magic in ur FFs..plz keep writing like dis...i'm waiting for ur next FFSmile

thanks a lot yaar...next ff...i got an idea but lot of scenes needed..thinking about it..and am having work..so time is also not suitable...if i write only weekends i can write..i will try...
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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sudhareddy

Niki how are you
missed your ffs very much and missed you
lovely OS  and romantic
keep writing




thanks a lot sudha...i will try my best to write whenever i get time...
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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
hey friends..this is my second os...i have taken after they have a kid...

shanak r having a son called nikil..he is three r three and a half yrs old...

here is my second os...



its night 9pm in khandelwals house...

shaan and akshay r talking in the hall about the new project...

khusbhoo went inside her room along with her son aryan...

khanak took nikil inside their room...

inside the room.,...

khanak:nikil come lets sleep...

nikil:mommy..lets play for some time...

khanak:wat..now...its 9 pm beta...

nikil:please mommy..i am not sleepy...

khanak:uhh...ummm...(with a smile)

nikil went and hugged khanak with joy...

khanak:wat to play now...

nikil:mom shall we play angry birds game...(its in plastic with instruction cards)

khanak:umm ok...

khanak went and took the angry birds game that was brought last week...

they placed it down..they both sat down  on the floor near the bed...

khanak:u r going to build it r i...

nikil:uhh..mom u...(with a sweet smile)

khanak:ummm...ok..but no cheating...

nikil:ummhmmm...(with a naughty smile)

khanak:u r smiling just like ur dad)

nikil smiled for that too...

khanak started to build  it according to the card they have given...

khanak:see nikil u have two red bird chance and one yellow bird ...

nikil:mommy i want that black bird too...

khanak:umm...but only once...

nikil:ummm red color bird five times...

khanak:wat..no...onlt two times...

nikil:please mom...only once..(keeping face  innocently)

khanak hugged and kissed him...and said yes...

nikil started the game...but he missed to hit those pigs...

khanak:u...los...no...nikil..

nikil has hit everything with his hand...

nikil:i won...

khanak:u cheated ...i won...

nikil:no mommy i won..(with a smile)

khanak was about to hold him..nikil stood up and got on the bed...

khanak to stood up and she tried to catch him..

khanak got on the bed and got hold of nikil..

and they were both lying on the bed...khanak is holding nikil...

khanak:i told u not to cheat..but u...

khanak started to make him giggle...

nikil started to laugh...

nikil:mommy stop...(laughing a loud...since khanak is making him giggle)

shaan entered the room exactly at the same time...khanak did not see it...

he closed the door silently and watched their play...

he was smiling at them...he saw khanak..her saree is moved apart a little...

making a view for shaans  eyes...he just starred at her...

khanak:will u cheat again..(with a smile..making nikil giggle..)

nikil saw shaan who was standing near the door..

nikil:papa come and help me...

khanak:even if ur dad comes i am not leaving u...(witha  smile)

shaan with a smile moved near them...he quickly layed besides khanak...

and he placed his hands around her pulling her away from nikil...

his hands now passing through her waist and resting on her stomach...

khanak:sha...shantanu..leave me...

his hands gently raising above her stomach...

her hands left nikil...khanak turned around exact time making shaan on top

of her...nikil moved away...he smiled and nikil came and layed 

on shaan..making shaan to rst on khanak...khanak was laying there on shock...

nikil:mommy ..mommy we won...(still resting on shaans back and making

shaan completely rest..lay on khanak)

khanak:uhhh..u both get up from me...

nikil:no mom..papa u dont get up...

shaan:as u wish my son...(winking at khanak)

shaan gently rested his head on her neck..no below her neck...

(nikil could not see wat is happening down...he was top of shaans back)

shaans hand gently touched her waist...and it started to move down wards...

shaan started to insert his hand inside her inskirt...

khanak:ahhh...shaa..shantanu stop...nikil ...(whispering)

shaan:he cannot see us he is just laying on my back and he cannot see down...
(whispered)

khanak:nikil...i will get 3 c

nikil:3...(looks exicted)

shaan raised his head and saw khanak in confused look...

nikil:sure mom...

shaan:hey...wat is 3 c...looking at khanak...

khanak:s 3 c tomorrow...

nikil got down from shaan...shaan did not expected this...

khanak pushed him with a force...khanak got up...

but shaan holded her hands before she could get up...

nikil went and sat on shaans stomach...because shaan was 

lying on the bed...shaan pulled khanak...khanak layed near shaan..

shaan:wat is 3 c...looking at khanak...

khanak:nothing...with a smile...

nikil:papa it is 3 chocobar icecream...(with a smile)

shaan:wat icecream...

nikil:umm..we have lot of short forms...(with  a smile)

shaan:ummm..then me and ur mom also should have some short forms...

looking at khanak naughtly...khanaks cheeks turned red...

khanak quickly released from his grip and entered washroom...

nikil:papa lets play bike game...

shaan:ummm...with a smile...

shaan holded nikils hand who was sitting on shaans stomach...

shaan was laying on the bed...and started to make a sound like bike...

and shook nikil a  little bit...and nikil enjoyed with a smile and laugh...

khanak came out of the washroom...nikil saw her...

nikil:mom u also come and sit..lets have a ride...

khanak:me...looked at shaan...then smiled at herself...

she quickly went and sat behind nikil..who was sitting on shaans stomach...

now khanak sitting behind nikil...making shaan to mourn for two reasons..

one she is sitting behind nikil on his stomach...another proviking his aderline...

and now he wants to make her to be his in everything...

shaan looked at her..she smiled at him naughtly...

khanak:come on bike go faster...go...smiling at shaan...

nikil:ha go faster...(he could not understand wats going on)

shaan:nikil..do u want a brother to play with...

nikil:ha papa..i want...(exictement)

khanaks cheeks turned red...khanak stood up and she walked towards wardrobe...

inorder to avoid his eyes...she was blushing a lot...

shaan:u want brother r sister...

nikil:ha...brother..no sister...no brother..uhh...both...(loud with a smile)

khanak turned around and looked at them in shock)

shaan:no worry beta...ur wish granted...smiling at nikil and he looked at khanak

khanak shook her head in no and her cheeks turned red...

nikil:when do i get them...

shaan:for that u have to wait beta...

nikil:how long..(little sad)

shaan:some more time...and u have to listen to us...

nikil:umm..ok papa...(little frowned)

shaan:first u have to sleep...

khanak turned around and started to do arrange the drees..(she was acting)

nikil:umm..ok...mom come lets sleep...

khanak:ha..she move near bed to aly beside nikil...

shaan took nikil and placed him on his chest...and now khanak was lying 

besides shaan..that is shaan is like between them...

khanak kept her hands on nikils back...

and she placed her head on shaans arms...

shaans hand engulfing both of them...

shaan and khanak and nikil:good night...


hey guys do u guys like it tell me guys...


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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Wow Nikki second os
it was awesome, shaan and his besharmi
i loved the os as usual all games u add in ur ff n os r superb,
please Nikki continue ur os want few more parts
want Nikil bro n sis lolzzz

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
lovely
was very cute

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 5:38pm | IP Logged
wooow niki loved it... cantr wait for u to started writing a ff, but take ur time so that up can thing of an fff and come back with a bang

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