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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 31)

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
good comeback nikiBig smile
hope your doing well now..Smile
im sure in the next update shaan tells that he was just claiming the cakeTongueLOL
loved it nikiEmbarrassedSmile
waiting for next update soonBig smile

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 5:17am | IP Logged

awesome niki..

so dey r married nw...umm khanak was so tensed abt her wedding will it be western or traditional..

god he kissed...she will be hell shock..

waiting fr nxt!!!!

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hey friends...how r u guys..hope all r doing good...sorry for delay..loads and loads of work busy in that...so only guys...sorry for not thanking individually...thanks..thanks...load and loads of thanks to u all of u guys...thanks for hitting like button and thanks for telling ur views...thank u so much...

pt  10

he was holding her face and he kissed her fully and was taking the piece of

cake that was in her mouth...

he moved his face a little away while eating the cake...

khanak was looking shocked...

shaan : it tastes yummy...

khanak was just starring at him...

ansh : mumma...mumma...

door was opened...ansh was standing with khusbhoo...

khanak came back to reality...she quickly stood up...

khusbhoo came with a smile...

khusbhoo : ansh see ur mumma is here only...khanak he was asking u...

ansh came and hugged khanak...khanak hugged him back...

ansh : mumma i was searching u...(little worried...)

shaan : ansh...

ansh : ha papa...went and hugged shaan...

shaan : lets go upstairs...

ansh : ha papa...

khusbhoo : khanak shall we go upstairs...

khanak :ha...

khanak was thinking while going to function hall...how dare he...he kissed me...

he told me he will wait..but now he..he...she can feel his lips on her lips...

she felt her lips something different...i should talk to him first...

while entering the hall...she saw her parents are worried...she went to them...

khanak : mom...dad...wat happened...

latha : u tell her...

sharma : beta...uh...let ansh be with us...

khanak was shocked...she was standing still...

khanak : papa...no...ansh is my son...

latha : beta..u r his massi...

khanak : no mom..tears were forming in her eyes...

sunil : sharma...

sunil and madhavi was standing near them...

sunil : ansh is our grandson...

madhavi : he will be with us we will take care of him...

tears were formed in sharma lathas and khanaks eyes...

sharma holded sunils hand...tears were formed...

madhavi patted lathas shoulder gently...

they were not able to talk...

shaan : mom dad...ansh is our first son...he will be with us...we will takecare of him...

dont worry...came and holded sharmas hands...

shrama and latha smiled with tears in eyes...

sharma : khanak beta...

khanak went and hugged her dad with tears flowing from her eyes...

now bidai started ...they reached khandelwals home...after all the rituals...

in the hall...elders were in the room...khusbhoo was feeding tarun...akshay was

talking with some guest in another room...

ansh : mumma i am sleepy...(laid his head on her lap)

khanak thought sleepy...where where...where...to...her eyes seareched for shaan..

he was coming out of kitchen...he also saw her...he walked towards her...

he sat besides ansh...

shaan : ansh...r u sleepy...

ansh : s papa..(still his head in khanaks lap...)

shaan : come lets go to our room...

shaan stood and carried ansh in his arm...he was about to walk...

khusbhoo : shaan wait...

shaan stood and looked at khusbhoo questioningly...

khusbhoo : khanak...u also go with shaan u will also be tired na...

khanak was sitting still...she thought wat go with him...omg...no...

khusbhoo: khanak...

khanak :uh...ummm...

she stood up and walked behind shaan ..and she was thinking...

wat if he...she saw flowervase near the stairs...shall i take it and go...

shit...wat am i thinking...i should talk to him...

khanak :uh...(she hit behind shaan...)

shaan : be carefull...

khanak just looked at him and she said to herself i will be carefull...

shaan : ansh...this is our room...

ansh : wow...its big...wow so many roses...

ansh went to bed...and holded flowers in his hand...

khanak was standing in the entrance of the door itself...she was standing still

on seeing the arrangements...in her mind omg..omg was echoing...

ansh : mommy..look here...why r u standing there come here mom...

shaan : i think ur mom wants me to carry her like u...(smiling at her)

she looked at him angrly and marched inside the room angryly...

khanak : no need of others help...i have my own legs...

shaan just shook his shoulder...

ansh : papa why lot of flowers papa...

shaan : ask ur mom beta...(sitting near ansh in the bed and looking at khanak with smile)

khanak :ahh...(looked at him mouth wide opened...)

ansh : for wat mummy...tell me ma...

khanak :uhh...uhh...

shaan : come on tell him khanak...for wat...(looking at her intensely)

khanak  felt her cheeks turning red the way he looks at her...

khanak : uhh ansh...this is ur papas room na so he only knows it...

(she sat other side of ansh with a smirk..ansh was sitting middle of them)

ansh : ha papa its ur room...

shaan : no..no...its our room okay...shall i tell khanak...(looked at her passionately)

khanak can not able to look at him the way he looks at her she felt shy...

she looked down...

shaan : its for welcoming ansh...

ansh : for me...for me papa...(went and hugged shaan)shaan to hugged him...

khanak saw them hugging each other...

ansh : ur the best papa in the world...i love u so much...

shaan : i too love u so much...(looking at khanak...there eyes met eachother...)

shaan : okay ansh lets sleep...

ansh : ummm...

shaan : ansh u sleep middle of us...okay...

ansh : umm...okay papa...mom u also sleep...

khanak : no u sleep i have to change my dress...

shaan : i will help u in that first lay beisdes him...

khanak : wat...

shaan : ansh is tired so let ansh sleep..so lay beisdes him...

khanak : ohh...

(she thought i did not hear properly...i think i am tired...)

she layed besides ansh and she closed her eyes...after 10 r 15 minutes so...

she opened her eyes and saw ansh was holding shaans hand and sleeping...

shaans eyes also closed...she slowly got up from the bed and

she walked towards the closet...and she took the night dress...

(there was room for dresses separtely)

shaan : u should have called me...

khanak was startled and she turned around...shaan was standing there

with his arms folded to his chest...

khanak : i found my closet..

shaan : no not that...

khanak : then...(questioningly)

shaan :  i will help u in undressing...

khanak : wat...

shaan :  i told u that i will help u in undressing...

khanak : ahh...(looked at him in shock and horrified...)

shaan just looked at her for few minutes then he started to laugh...

khanak was looking at him in shock...

shaan : i was just kidding...

shaan : khanak...let me first talk with u..i have to tell u...

khanak : shut up...will u just shut up...(little louder)

shaan was shocked now and he was standing still...

khanak : u r playing with me...how dare u...

shaan : khanak...

khanak: let me first talk..(louder)

shaan stopped talking just looked at her...

khanak : how dare u ...i thought u were a gentleman...

but u r not...u r the same the old shantanu...play boy...playing with girls...

u never change..u ..u...

shaan : finished...can i talk...

khanak turned her head with breathing heavily...

shaan : wat made u think that i am not a gentleman...

khanak did not look at him when there is no sound she looked up and saw ..shaan

was seeing her only for answers...

khanak : wat r u looking at...

shaan : answer khanak...

khanak tried to move to get out of the closet...

khanak : move...

shaan : first answer me...

khanak : u want answers ..then hear it...u told me u will wait until i am ready...

shaan : s...wat is wrong in that...

khanak : then why u did that...

shaan : wat...wat did i do...

khanak : when i was eating ...(turned sideways...)

she  turned her head and saw shaan was still waiting for her to complete...

khanak : when i was eating...eating black forest cake u...u   

shaan : u...u...

khanak : u kissed me...(finally met his eyes...)

shaan : oh thats the problem...okay...when i came to meet before marriage...

do u remeber...

khanak thought how can i forget i remeber everything that was with u...

shaan : u told me i want time for consumating marriage...s r no khanak...

khanak : s i told u...and u also accepted my condition and u said s na...

shaan : s khanak ..i told i will wait for consumating not for kiss...

khanak looked at him in still...

shaan : khanak...khanak...

khanak :uhh...

shaan : do u get wat i told...

khanak : no..how come...(she looked down...)

shaan : come on tell...

khanak : it will lead to other thing...

shaan started to laugh...khanak looked at him confused...

shaan : u think kiss will lead to love making...

khanak : uhh...umm...wont it happen...

shaan : no khanak...it wont happen...

khanak : how do u say that...

shaan : because i have self control...dont u have self control...

khanak  : i have self control...(angrly)

shaan : so u have self control..(moved little closer)

khanak :s i...

shaan did not make her complete the sentence...

his one hand holded her chin and lifted her face...and the other hand

went to her waist...gently smoothed her waiste and tugged her saree

that was inserted in her saree skirt...and he kissed her  lips...



hope u guys like it..please leave ur views whenever u get time...i really love to read ur views that makes me to add r edit updates...thanks a lot guys...



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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
wooow niki its been ages, how are you???? 
lovely update love shanak lets see if she has self cotrol or not LOOOL 
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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
WOW DI UBDATE WAS SUPUB.. LIVE IT   Smile

i love convertion between shaan ansh

omg shan againg kiss khanak

ASWOME UBDATE !!!!

AWATING FOR NEXT PART     Day Dreaming


DI FOR YOU Clap Clap   Heart and miss you so much

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
niki missed u so much and love u :)
loved the update
haww i thought shan abhi chodega nahi when he came to the closet and said that
wow smart shan how smartly and teasingly he gave back khanak her own promise that she took from him hahahhhaaa
ooohhh lets c how much she has self control 
hope u update soon :)

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 10:08pm | IP Logged

Lovely update..Smile Poor Khanak..LOL Ansh is too cute..Shaan wants to say something but Khanak kept on talking..Embarrassed Must say Shaan is very smart and the kiss..Blushing

Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update di..Smile


P.S: How are you??? Missed you..Hug

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
loved the Update  Clap Clap Clap 

Wish khanak will understand shaan soon he isnt a playboy he loves her truly Smile ansh is super cute. Loved their nok jhok LOL

waiting for next Smile take care of your self dear Smile

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