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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 27)

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki_rbo

hey guys..today i am going out...i havent started writing the next part...sorry guys..i will try to post tomorrow...

 Enjoy Nikki Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 12:22am | IP Logged
hi friends...thanks a lot to all..thanks for commenting and thanks foor hitting like button...
thank u so much for liking this simple story and simple way of writing...



pt 7

khanak : lemme talk with u first...(without turning and looking at him she started 

to talk standing near the window...)

khanak : ansh is very important to me...i love him very much...

i wont give up ansh for anything ...he is first in anything to me...

then...uhhh...i want sometime for...(consumating marriage)

""" I WILL WAIT...I WONT FORCE U..."""


khanak turned around and she was shocked...there shaan was standing there

khanak : shant..shantanu u...

shaan : s..i am ur fiance...(looking straight at her)

khanak felt nervous and she was about to talk...

shaan : why r u nervous...r u afraid of me...

khanaks anger raised ...

khanak : no..no...i am not nervous...

shaan : so u r afraid of me...(smile)

khanak : no...(turned her face)

shaan : then u r afraid of marrying me...(laughed heartly)

khanak looked at him in anger...

khanak : no..i am not afraid of anything...

shaan : so u r not  nervous on marrying me...

khanak : s...

shaan : then u r willing to marry me...

khanak : s...(looked shock...)

latha : beta...(looking smiling having a tray with coffee)

khanak thought omg...omg..wat did i say...i am willing to marry him...

shit..shit...he made me say it...shit whenever he is near i am nervous...

since from college...

ansh : mommy...look look chocolate...toys...

ansh came in with joy...

khanak : who gave this...(smiling at ansh)

ansh pointed at shaan...

khanak glared at shaan ...

khanak : ansh i told u na..dont get anything from strangers...(looked at shaan...)

shaan glared at her..his jaw stiffened...

ansh : mom..nani..told to get it..so only ma...(little sad..)

shaan : ansh...(walked towards him...kneeled before him...)

ansh looked at shaan ...

shaan : i am not a starnger ..i am ur friend na...that day we both played car race na...

ansh : ha..ha...(little smile)

shaan : now i am going there r u coming with me...

khanak thought wat taking him with u...

ansh looked at his mom...

khanak : no ansh ..we came now only from park...

shaan : there is nothing wrong..u have holiday today na ansh...

ansh : ha mom today is holiday na..

shaan : ur mom is ...(looked at khanak)

khanak just glared at him...

ansh : mom come lets go with my friend...

khanak : wat...no..i am not coming...and u r not going...

shaan just smiled at her...

ansh : mom lets go...(started to pull her hand)

latha : ansh ...ansh u go with him...(smile...)

ansh : nani...mom...

latha : mom will not say anything...

shaan : thanks mom...ansh lets go...

shaan carried ansh in his arms and they both walked out of the room...

khanak was standing there in shock...her son going with him...

and he called her mom as mom...

khanak thought how ansh go with him..how..how did he change him...

every 15 minutes r so khanak made her mom to talk with ansh...

after two calls r so..her mom scolded her and she went with her work...

then khanak took the phone and hit the recall button...

a ring went..she cutted the call...she did this for two times r so...

then she was about to hit the button it rang...

khanak took the reciever and kept in her ear...

khanak : hello...

shaan : he is fine...i wont bite r eat him...want to talk with him...

khanak : i did not call u...how  can u say this...u only called me...

shaan  laughed and said..i am talking from cell there is caller number...

khanak :tch...

shaan : ansh...ur mom...

ansh : hello mom...(smile)

khanak : ansh...where r u...(little nervous)

ansh : in mall..its really fun mom...mom i played car race...

mommy i won bingo...mom i am going to play carrace again...

khanak : takecare...

shaan : sure...

khanak became shocked...she thought she was talking with ansh

but ansh gave the phone to shaan...

khanak quickly cutted the call...

after one  hrs r so...calling bell rang...

khanak went and opened the door...

ansh was standing with toys and shaan was standing with another two bags...

khanak quickly bend down and hugged ansh and started to kiss him..

khanak : why this much time...i missed u...(still in the entrance)

shaan : we missed u too...

khanak looked up at him started...she quickly stood up and walked in 

along with ansh ...shaan followed them...

shaan placed the bags in the sofa...

ansh : mom look this...took a bag and showed toys...

ansh : mom is this nice..papa baught me this...

khanak was again shocked...she looked at shaan who was just looking at her...

khanak thought damn within  an hour he brainwashed ansh mind...

shaan : i did not brainwash him...(smile)

khanak :ahh...(looked shocked quickly compossed...)

khanak thought he is reading my mind r did i split it out...

shaan : where is ur mom and dad...

khanak : they went out...(looking at ansh)

sharma : beta...u guys came...

shaan : s dad...

shaan : mom this is for wedding...gave a pack to latha...

latha got it with a smile...

shaan : open and see it mom...

latha opened it and saw...khanak saw it in sideways...

it was a beautifull wedding dress double color white and pink...it was 

very grand dress...

shaan : okay mom dad its time...

latha : beta u can eat na...

shaan : no mom i have important office work...

sharma and latha : ok beta...

shaan : okay ansh ...bye...

ansh : u can stay with us na papa...

shaan : within a week i will be with u...(kissed ansh cheeks 

and looked at khanak...khanaks cheeks started to burn red and 

she felt  a fear in her heart...)




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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
loving it niki..
continue soon :)

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged

Superb!!!Clap Such a cute update..Shaan and Ansh became so close in short span of time..Smile In one week ShaNak marriage..Party Khanak is already nervous..LOL

Looking forward and thanks for writing di..Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 3:08am | IP Logged
awesome Nikki Smile
lovely pained how Aansh and shaan get close 
khanak said yes when shaan start quiz lolzz LOL at one point khanak said yes at willing to marry shaan LOL lovely part 
shaan and Ansh went to mall and khnaak kept calling and cut the phone 
shaan call then and sweety khanak talked to Ansh nice Nikki 
they came back and Aansh called shaan papa 
khanak became shocked LOL
love bonding of shaan and Aansh in a short time 
wow!! wedding within a week 
looking forward for next part and see how shanak come close 
update soon 

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Awsome cant wait for khnak nd him to get married lool
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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
loved it niki
i just want shan to clear out everything then only khanak can marry shan happily and willingly :)
i hope it happens soon
update soon :)

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged

lovely nikiii...so khanak said yes whn shaan asked questioning lolz...

ansh called shaan papa grtt..

i hope der misunderstanding clear our soon..


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