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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 22)

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
so sorry dear couldn't catch ur updates...
just finished reading it ... very eagerly waiting for how their past has went
very interesting...

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
so sorry dear couldn't catch ur updates...
just finished reading it ... very eagerly waiting for how their past has went
very interesting...

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Awesome Nikki Clap Clap i loved it Smile
u penned Khanak's mind and heart thought very well i loved it Clap
she started to avoid him but then felt to be near him 
wow!!! shaan gave her  card written my life 
i loved the writing in the card Nikki Big smile she accept his feelings and wore white like he wanted 
can't wait to know what happen then and how they separate 
did khanak's parents find a guy for her and she couldn't refused them not to marry 
update soon Nikki 


Edited by heer_85 - 25 December 2012 at 1:58pm

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
that was super cute
they both love each other and even confessed it
at least he did and she was wearing a white suit so its was quite obvious that its a yes
em curious to know wht happened and y they are not together
update soon

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
awesome update nikki

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
hi friends...thanks for hitting like button and telling ur opinions thanks a lot guys...

pt 5


khanak smiled at it...next day morning khanak came to college

wearing a white salwar...she was going to her class...(as usuall she was late to class)

she saw shaan who was standing on the steps...

she was blushing a lot she slowly raised her head and saw 

he was looking at her with broad smile...she looked down...

meanwhile some students came that side so khanak went to her class quickly...

later at the canteen...khanak was sitting with nisha ...khanaks heart started to beat

fastly...she became very nervous..shaan was walking towards them with a smile...

shaan : hi guys...(looking at khanak sitting besides khanak)

khanak looked down...her cheeks were started to burn red...she did not look at him...

nisha : hai...wat senior pink shirt...boys dont wear these colors...(circling his eyes...)

shaan : i love this color now a lot...

nisha : oh...khanaks favorite color is pink...(started to eat her icecream)

shaan : is it so khanak...

khanak : uhhh...looked at him startled...

he was looking at her with a broad smile...

he slowly bend near her and whispered ...

shaan : so u like love marriage...

khanak just starred at him...shaan smiled at her broadly and winked at her...

khanak quickly lowered her head...

for a week r so..shaan and khanak met during the lunch break they 

just stared at eachother and there eyes talked a lot...and they had 

lot of study works so they r busy...

one day in the canteen...as usuall shaan came and sat along with khanak and nisha...

nisha : khanak do u want icecream...

khanak : no...

nisha : shaan ...

shaan : no..i dont want it...

nisha : lemme get one for me...nisha moved to get icecream...

shaan : khanak...

khanak : ummm...

shaan : do u have any important work tomorrow...

khanak : i have to check...why..wat happened...

shaan : i want u to spend time with me tomorrow...

khanak : wat..why...

shaan : because tomorrow is my birthday...(its true...his birthday is tomorrow)

khanak : hey..u r saying now...advance happy birthday wishes...(with a smile)

shaan : ummm...

khanak : wont u celebrate in college with friends...

shaan : no...this year i really want to celebrate with u...

khanak : how can i come...if my pare...

shaan : its okay...(little sad but smiled)okay bye khanak ...i have a project work..

shaan went from there and went to lab...

next day morning in shaans house...

shaan was sleeping in bed...he heard calling bell sound...

shaan : shit...(sat in his bed...took his cell...it was switched off...last day

night itself he switched off...)uff...i have to get it...(last night he gave the 

servants next day off...)

he slowly got down from the bed...calling bell rang continuosly...

shaan : coming...coming...(yelling)(bell is ringing...)

shaan : who the hell is it...(opened the door...)

khanak : happy birthday to u...happy birthday to...happy birthday my dear shantanu...

(smiling broadly at him...shaan was standing there still...)

shaan was wide opened...he checked her out...

she was wearing a beautifulll white saree...having a white rose bouqet...






khanak  waved hands before him...shaan came back to reality...

shaan :uhh...am i dreaming...pinched her hand...

khanak : ouch...shantanu...

shaan : oops...sorry dear...

khanak : we r not going in...r u want me go out...

shaan : shit...sorry...come in...come in...

they both went inside...she gave the roses to him...

he got it with a smile...they both sat in the sofa...

shaan : how did u know my address...

khanak : i am shantanus lover..i will know everything...(with a proud smile)

shaan looked at her surprised...he smiled at her broadly...

khanak : oops i forgot...

khanak went to the exit and took a bag that was outside...

khanak : this is for u birthday boy...(extended a box having shirt)

shaan : i am really surprised...

khanak : i am also surprised...

shaan : wat...

khanak : why u switched off the phone ...i was trying last night a lot...

and why there is no one in house...looked around the house...

shaan : uhhh...i was upset that u will not come...so only...and 

i gave servants a day off...i really wanted today to be alone...

and my parents out of station...my bro and bhabhi r in states...

khanak :ohh...

shaan stared at her again...

khanak : hey hello...birthday baby go get dressed...

shaan : s madam...(did a salute and went to his room)

when shaan came out of his room to the hall he saw khanak was

standing with a white cake...shaan smiled at her...



shaan : wow...wat darling all white...

khanak : its ur favorite color...(smiling at him...)

shaan : u made my birthday very special thank u...

khanak : first lets cut cake...i am hungry yaar...

shaan : ummm...okay...

khanak sang birthday song...shaan cutted the cake...

and he took a small piece and gave it to khanak...khanak got it with a smile...

then she took a piece and she gave to him...both smiled at eachother ...

they were having a piece of cake in plates and they r eating...

they r sitting in the sofa..with little gap...

khanak :uhh...shantanu...

shaan : ummm...(looked at her)

khanak : do ur parents know about us...

shaan : no...urs...

khanak : no...

shaan and khanak : when do u plan to say...(they both bursted in to laugh)

shaan : after finishing the exams...(looked at khanak)

khanak  : ditto...(looked at him...)

khanak started to feel nervous...as shaan has moved an inch closer to her...

she just starred at him...his hands slowly raised towards her face...

his index finger gently touched her corner of her lips where cream was there

he gently took it in his finger and then took his finger to his mouth and licked it...

shaan : its tastes heavenly...(looking intensly at khanak)

land line phone rang...shaan took it...

shaan : thanks mom...cell...no charge...ummm...takecare ...

he cut the call...within a second another call came...

shaan : hello dude...thanks man...birthday is going awesome...ummm thanks...

shaan cutted the call...and again a ring came...he unplugged the line...

shaan : all r disturbing my mood...

khanaks cheeks turned red...she quickly lowered her head ...

khanak : shall we look around...(got up...)

shaan : ummm...he also got up...

shaan : first ...to my room...(smiling at her)

khanak : no..to garden...(blushing a little...)

they both went to garden shaan showed her flowers and they talked a while and 

they came back in...shaan took her to a room...kids tables and chairs...

khanak : wow...the room is cute...hey...

she moved to the wall ..there was beautifull baby pic...the wall is with that baby

pic in different poses and different dresses...

khanak : shantanu..this baby is cute...looking so cute na...

shaan was just smiling at her...her hands on the wall in the kids cheeks...

shaan : is he looking  cute...

khanak : ha...so cute...(kissed the baby cheeks on the wall)

shaan : if u see the baby wat will u do...

khanak : now..i will give him a tight hug and kiss...hey shantanu

is ur brothers son...?(asked innocently)

shaan : no...u want to see now...

khanak : s...

shaan : he is standing just infront of u...(smiling at her..)

khanak :ahhh...

shaan : u told if u see the kid...ummm...(looked at her intensly with a smile)

khanak started to blush and she turned otherside and acted as if looking around the room...

shaan : u r a lier khanak...u say one ...and u dont follow it ..(whispered near her 

ear from back of her...khanak started to blush a lot...

khanak : r u hungry...lemme make u something...

she started to walk out of the room...

shaan just followed her with a smile...

the time went very smoothly...they had lunch...they talked some..they starred some...

they saw  a movie in the dvd player...later in the evening...

khanak : shantanu...i will go now...

shaan : hey khanak u have to stay with me...

khanak : how can i ...my parents knows i have gone to college ...they dont know

that i have come hear...i should go...

khanak got up from sofa...but with a tug she fell down in the sofa on shaan...

khanak : shan...shantanu...wat r u doing...

shaan was hugging her tight...and his hands r rooming at her back...

khanak was feeling very nervous...

khanak : shantanu leave me...she tried to push him...but he was holding her tight..

his hands slowly started to touch her very intensly...

shaan : baby please...i want u...i want u now...(kissed her cheeks...)

khanak was shocked and she started to shiver on his touch...

khanak : shantanu...this wrong...

shaan : no...we r going to marry...so nothing wrong...

his hands r entering into unaccess areas...

khanak : no..no...its wrong...we have to wait...

shaan : there is nothing wrong baby...we r lovers and we are going to marry...

khanak : no..not before marriage...

with a force she pushed him...and she stood up...

shaan : khanak...please...there is nothing wrong..its all common (he was about to hold her hand)

khanak pushed with a force...

khanak : common...i thought u were good person..but...but..u r also like the others...

tears started to roll down from her cheeks...

khanak : i hate u...i hate u shantanu...(tears rolling down and she looked at him angryly)

she ran away from there ...

ansh : mom...mom...

khanak : ha...ha...

ansh : wake up...its morning...




Edited by niki_rbo - 26 December 2012 at 7:12am

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
hey niki di,
i loved this ss...
and i'm the first one 2 comment ...yipeePartyParty
want 2 know about who is ansh and is he shaan's son????
how our burthals going 2 unite????????
update soon...


p.s. thank u 4 the pm

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 8:16am | IP Logged

Wow!!!Clap Awesome di!!! Loved how Khanak surprised Shaan for his birthday..Big smile OMG!!!Shocked How can Shaan suddenly turn like this!!!Angry Didnt expect this behavior at all from him..Poor Khanak..Cry She did so much for his birthday and he behaved so badly..Ouch Now will Khanak stop loving him??? Is ShaNak gonna ve breakup???Confused

Looking forward and thanks for writing di..Smile



Edited by poo_j - 26 December 2012 at 8:17am

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