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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 15)

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
thanks a lot..thank u so much for liking my short story guys...as current going often i am not commenting separately...but i really love ur comments..ur comments makes me to think more and more differently...thank u thank u guys...

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki_rbo

thanks a lot..thank u so much for liking my short story guys...as current going often i am not commenting separately...but i really love ur comments..ur comments makes me to think more and more differently...thank u thank u guys...

Love ur writings niki...

You rock dear...:)

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 2:33am | IP Logged
hey friends...how r u guys..hope all r doing good...this is a small story with five parts i think so...hope u guys like it...this is a simple short story i want ur support guys...please tell ur opinions r press like button...i just keep the title as LOVE...



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.pt 1


cell phone is ringing  ...khanak was sitting with her lappy...

khanak : hello...ummm...ya..i am fine.,...

khanak : how r u aunty...ummm...one minute...

khanak : ansh...ansh...

ansh : s mom...

khanak : ansh give this cell to nani...

ansh : s mummy...latha...latha...(smile)

khanak : say nani..not her name...

ansh : no...nani..latha...(showing his tongue)

ansh was having cell phone and walked towards his nani who was in kitchen...

ansh : latha phone for u...

latha : who is it...

ansh : i dont know..(extending the cell phone to latha...)

latha : ask who is it...

ansh : u talk and know by urself...

ansh kept the cellphone in the kitchen table and walked out...

latha smiled at her grandson...and talked in the phone...

later ansh was playing with the neighbour kid...

khanak took the toys and gave to them for playing...

and khanak sat in the sofa to cut the fruits...

khanak : which school u r studying ragu...

ragu : in...i dont know aunty...(started to play)

khanak  : in which school u r studying ansh...

ansh : uhh...uhhh...in XXX school...

khanak : in whick class...(while cutting fruit)

ansh : in kindergarden...(smiling)

khanak : ummm...so sweet...

ansh : ragu...does ur mom come to school to pick u up...

ragu : ummm...

ansh : my mom comes first to pick me up...

khanak smiled at him...

khanak :see mom he is expecting me to come first always...

latha : dont make him expect more okay...sometimes u should go little late..

latha : ahhh...

khanak : ansh...no..dont beat nani...its bad habbit...

latha : come on leave it...

ansh : mom u should come first always okay...dont listen to latha..(little sad)

khanak : ummm...okay...(hugged him)

ansh : i will say to nana..when he comes...

latha : no..no..dont say to ur nana...

khanak : lets go to mall today evening...

ansh : heyy...u r good mummy...(kissed khanaks cheeks)

later in the evening they khanak and ansh and latha alone went to mall...

they went to game section and they went and played there for sometime...

ansh : mom...i want juice...

khanak : mom u see him i will get...

latha : ummm okay...

khanak went to juice shop she ordered something...

near by a girl came and ordered something...

khanak looked at her then she was about to turn...

girl ; uhh...i have seen u...u r khanak na...

khanak looked at her surprised and confused look...

girl : u won the dance competition title during intercollege meet three years back..

khanak : ha...u...

girl : u dont know me..u came to our college for compettion u r the danced so beautifully...

that dance was simply fantastic...no one will forgot that...

khanak :thanks...(smiled)

tina...tina...they heard sound...

girl : i am here...(turning around and saying...)

khanak turned around and looked at him...

tina : hey shaan...this khanak...

khanak this is shaan my sisters hubbys brother...

khanak and shaan : i know her/him...

tina looked at them...

khanak : he is my senior...(heart whispered my first love)

shaan : he is my junior...(heart whispered my first love)

tina : thanks for carrying it...all r for marriage..next week marriage...(blushed...)

khanaks heart became sad...

ansh : mom...mommm...

shaan looked at the kid...

meanwhile her cold drinks came so she got it and she excused herself from there...






please leave ur opinions r hit like button whenever u get time...
nikita...

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
wow!! Nikki another SS i loved it Smile Clap 
 Ansh said Latha instead of calling her nani heheheh i love naughty Ansh 
 khanak and shaan were in the same collage that's great but then what happen in the past years and how about Ansh whose son is he 
 shanak loved each other but what happen that they didn't confess 
omgeee!! so many question are in my mind now 
is shaan getting married with that Tina 
 looking forward for next part update soon Nikki 
 thanx for PM Nikki  

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 3:48am | IP Logged
omg it is aswome update di love it and i guss ansh was shanak son can wait for next part

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 6:09am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged

grt niki...sooo khanak has son...

n shnanak loved each other nt dint confess...Cry

wats gonna happn nw update soon...

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
awesome..

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