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LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 (Page 13)

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 6:13am | IP Logged
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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:54am | IP Logged
hi friends ...thanks for liking the update and commenting guys...u guys opinions make me write more updates...thanks for ur opinions...

this one is very long update...hope u guys like it...

part 5 

calling bell rang...

khanak : coming...

khanak went and opened the door...

khanak : hey come in misha...

misha : hey dude r u not ready...

khanak : first come in...

khanak and misha sat in the hall...

misha : wow..ur hand is looking beautifull...who put it...



khanak : my moms friend daughter...she came here yesterday

she asked me to show my hand for prctising...

misha : for prcatising but it looks superb man...

misha : where is uncle and aunty...

khanak : they have gone for some function...

misha : oh...okay come i will make u ready...

khanak :misha..i am not interested...u alone go...

misha : wat me..alone..everything will be spoil...ahh..

khanak : wat spoi...

misha : i will tell u...first get ready...

misha pulled khanak to the room...

misha : wow khanak this saree is very beautifulll...

khanak : no misha..i am not wearing that...

misha : no u have to..its an order...

khanak : misha...

misha : r u going to wear r i will ...

khanak glared ta her and then went and changed to the dress...

misha helped her in face makeup...she did mild makeup for her...

after finishing everything misha looked at khanak...



misha : wow..u r looking gorgeous man...

khanak just smiled...she looked at the mirror...

khanak : i will better change to something simple...

misha : no ..no..come..come..

misha pulled her out to the car...misha drived the car...

khanak : where is the reunion party...

misha : in MK residency...

khanak was just starring out..she was not in the world...

they reached the hotel...

khanak : hey why so many cars here...its like dads car...wait...

misha drove car inside and she parked inside...

misha : hey dude hear two halls r there..in one we r having our

party and in other some function is going on...

khanak :oh...

her heart beat started to beat fastly...she felt nervous...

when walking in the steps...some more people were walking...

she felt as if they r looking at her and walking...

they entered the party hall...her heart beat started to beat fast...

there were many people in the hall..many r changed in physical...

rahul : hey khanak...misha...come ...

khanak just smiled misha shook hands with rahul...

khanak : where is ur wife...

rahul : she will come little late...

khanak :oh...

rahul : u both make comfortable urself...

khanak and misha went inside...misha started to talk with her friends...

but khanak started to see the pics in the wall...

those pics r taken during college days...

there college tour pics..farewell pics ...

she saw one by one..she noticed shaan was standing back of her

 in most of the pics...her heart felt sad and it danced in joy..she was in two feelings..

after seeing the pics and thinking back the past she came to misha...

but her eyes searched for one person...but he was not there...

her eyes were searching each and every corner in the room...

rahul : r u searching for someone...

khanak :uhh...no...just looking around...

rahul : oh...(with a smile)

rahul was standing near khanak..he took the phone and dailled a number...

rahul : hey hello shaan...

khanaks heart stopped for a second...she felt tensed...

rahul : where r u man..waiting for u...oh came...

rahul cut the phone...khanaks eyes stayed focus on the entrance door...

her heart was beating fast...the door opened...he came ...

he was looking handsome..he is very attractive...he is looking dashing...



her heart felt sad ...a young girl was holding shaans hand and coming in...

she felt as if her heart was broken...

that girl pulled shaan and whispered something...

shaan said something to her in a smile...

khanak was just looking at them with her eyes sad...shaan also

looked at her..there eyes met...he smiled at her...

his eyes were sparking...rahul was shaking hand and he was saying something...

shaan and that girl and rahul were walking towards khaank...

khanak was feeling sad and nervous...

shaan : hi kahank...he extended his arms...

khanak slowly took her hand and placed in his hand...

he grabbed her hand very gently but firmly...

shaan : u r looking beautifull...

khanak : thanks...

still there hands r together..they have not left there hands...

khanak : looked at the girl near shaan with a question...

but shaan did not answer he was just smiling at khanak and not leaving her hand..

that girl smiled at her and she talked...

swetha : hi i am swetha..i am his sister...

on hearing sister her eyes sparkled..her heart danced in joy...

her hands became cold...she smiled broadly at swetha...

then she looked at shaan who was smiling at khanak...

khanak saw his eyes also smiling...then only she saw her hand is still

in shaans hand..she quickly took her hand with a shy..her cheeks turned red..

swetha : bhaiya...

swetha pulled shaan little distance away...khanak saw swetha was hugging shaan

and she shook her hand with shaan and she was telling something...

shaan was smiling and he told something...swetha smiled at khaank

and she walked out of the party hall...shaan came to khanak...

he stood near khanak...khanak started feeling nerbous..she dont know y...

her cheeks were burning...

khanak : where is she going...

shaan : u want to talk her...looking at her face...

khanak : uhh...she was...before she could talk...

shaan : u will have plenty time to talk...

before khanak could think wat he told...rahul called all of them...

rahul : hey friends come and sit in the chair..

chair is been arranged in a round...so that all can see eacha nd everyone...

shaan : come lets go and sit...

shaan put his hand on khanaks shoulder...

khanak turned and looked at shaan in shock...khanak tried to move

away from him...

shaan : khanak this way..still holding her shoulders...

and he made sit and he sat near her...on the other side misha was sitting

near khanak...khanak was shocked on his behaviour...

rahul : welcome guys to our reunion party...friends take the fruit salad guys...

waiter brings fruit salad in the tray...they were giving to each and everyperson...

shaan took a cup with fruit salad and he moved his chair still closer to khanak...

his knees and arms r brushing with hers...khanak was shocked...

he felt a shiver...khanak tried to move towards misha...

misha : hey dude move that side u r pushing me khanak...

and eat the salad it is tasty...this is ur favorite salad na...

khanak started to eat the salad..her heart felt joy as well as it felt some jitter inside...

rahul : hey friends u guys eat i will say a beautifull love story...

everyone shouted in yes to hear the story...

rahul : hey there lived a beautifull girl and boy..they were studying in the same 

college same class...girl was very silent reserved...

on hearing it khanaks heart felt a shiver...she started to listen keenly...

rahul : one day...even though they r in same class they did not talk r see...

there life was going differently..but fate played its game...

one day boy was walking from house...opposite side the girl was coming...

both the houses r in same area...there eyes alone met eachother

when they crossed eachother...they did not smile r they did not

hit eachother..there eyes alone met ...

on hearing this khanak dropped her spoon down...

there was pindrop silence all r looking at khanak...

khanak became very nervous...before she was about to take the spoon...

shaan bend and took the spoon and looked at khanak...

khanak saw his face...he was smiling..his eyes also smiling...

he gave the spoon to her...she got it...there hands touched eachother...

rahul : okay guys now listen...is this love r infactuation...

all shouted love...love...khanaks hand became cold...

she turned nad looked at shaan who was looking at her only...

his eyes telling a story..she cannot understand...

rahul then said about the birthday incident...

khanak thought oh no they r telling my story...does he knows...shann...

her hands started to shake...she felt many r watching her...

rahul : does this is love r infactuation...

everyone started to shout love...khanak felt as if her heart will come out...

rahul : hey friends this story is a real story...

misha : real...

rahul : s..it happened in our college...

misha :omg..in our college...

rahul : in our class...(with a smile)

everyone shouted who r they...did they joined in life...

rahul : u guys want to know...

khanak felt very nervous...she turned to misha...and said want to go to washroom..

she did not wait for mishas answer she started to walk out of the room...

she felt many eyes r on her back...after coming out she let out a long breath...

khanak thought no..i wont stay here...she walked towards the lift...

she entered the lift...she was about to close the lift shaan entered the lift..

lift door closed...shaan halted the lift...

khanak was in total shock...she was standing still...

shaan folded his hand and he looked at her without any expression...

khanak glared at him...she was about to on the button...

shaan stopped her...

shaan : why so hurry...

khanak : i...i want to go home...not looking at his eyes...

shaan : khanak ...

the way he called her name...khanak looked at him ...

khanak :ha...just starring at his eyes...she cannot take her eyes away from him...

shaan : I...LOVE U...

khanaks heart was stopped for a second...

khanak : waat..have u gone mad...

shaan : no...i am okay...and I LOVE U...

khanak was about to go and on the lift button...

shaan holded her hand and now her back was on the lift wall..

shaan was standing very close to her...

khanak was standing still ...she was breathing heavily...

shaan : look at my eyes...cont u see my love...he kissed her forehead...

khanak :no...she closed her eyes...

shaan : look at my eyes baby...

khanak looked at his eyes...

shaan : i want to marry u...

shaan kissed her lips gently...

khanak came back to reality...khanak pushed him with a force...

but shaan holded her tight...

khanak : leave me shantanu..leave me...it cont happen...

shaan : why...

khanak : ia m widow...u marry a beautifull girl..leave me...tears formed in her eyes...

shaan just laughed at her...

shaan : baby i love u...i love u alone..u also love me...

khanak : no..no ..i ..dont love u..(looking down)

shaan : baby look at me...look at my eyes and say...

khanak slowly opened her eyes and she looked at shaans eyes...

khanaks heart beated fastly...his face was very near...

shaan : u love me na...

khanak : there r many beautifull girls there in the world marry any one there...

shaan : i asked do u love me r not...

tears roll down from her eyes she closed her eyes...

shaan : baby please look at me...i love u so much..i cannot live without...

i want u to be with me forever in my life...u r my breath ...

khanak opened her eyes she looked at his face...

his each and every features says he loves her...

she hugged him tightly...shaan hugged her tightly...

a bright smile appeared on his face...tears rolled down from her eyes...

shaan cupped her face...kissed her forehead...

shaan : baby dont cry...i love u...kissed her eyes...

khanaks tears stopped ...she looked at him...he was alos looking at each other...

shaans phone rang...he took the phone and said s..and then he cutted the phone...

he pressed button 5 on the lift...

khanak : 2 nd floor na...there is the reunion party...

shaan just smiled at her and he hugged her sidewyas...

khanak blushed a lot...lift door opened...they walked near a door...

khanak was confused...they both opened the door...

there was a loud noise..flowers were thrown at them...

khanak was surprised...her mom and dad were standing there with a smiling face..

she saw a lady and a man...khanak thought hey these two came to office na...

i was busy so i just said a namasthey and i went out for a project work na...

madhavi : my MIL is very beautifull..

sunil : madhavi ..ur saree selection is realy good...its suits well for our MIL...

madhavi : sunil its shaan selection...

khanak thought this saree they brought for me..but mom said they brought...

she looked at shaan he winked at her with a broad smile...

there her classmates r standing and clapping hands for them...

khanak was stunned there was a pandit ji standing for marriage...

other side a reception like stage...she was shocked while walking..



marriage rituals started ...khanak was still in her own world..she thought she was in dream..

shaan tied the mangal sutra and he placed sindoor on her head...

khanak felt happy...her life is changed now to happy world...

everyonbe blessed them...shaan was holding her hand all the time...

when they were standing for the small reception...

sandy : hi shanak alias khanak...with a broad smile...

khanak : sandy...khanak hugged her...

sandy : its defiently love...shook hands with shaan...

shaan smiled...khanak was about to ask..some other guest came...

she noted all the questions to be asked...

they were sitting for eating...shaan was sitting close to her...

holding her hands...and brushing with her...

foods were served to them...she looked and she was surprised...

all r here faviorites...she smiled...

swetha : bhabhi all r bhaiya selection...

khanak looked at shaan he winked at her with a smile...

khanak blushed a lot...after finishing eating...they were sitting with their families...

shaan : khanak come with me...

khanak : were all r here na...

shaan : they wont say anything...

shaan holded her hand and started to walk...

everyone just smiled...khanak went along with him...

they entered the lift...shaan pressed 7 the floor button...

and he folded his hand and looked at her...

khanak was blushing a lot..she lowered her head...

they reached 7 th floor...shaan holded khanaks hand 

and they walked towards a room...khanak walked  with confusion..

shaan opened the door they entered and shaan switched on the light closing the door..



khanak was shocked with a surprise...it was a big room decorated with flowers...

khanak started to blush...she was standing still...

shaan came behind her and hugged her from behind...

shaan : r u happy...kissing her shoulder...

khanak just smiled and she blushed...

shaan holded her hand and they both sat on the bed...

khanak was sitting with lot of blushing...

shaan took her hands and he kissed her hands ...

shaan : tell me baby...

khanak looked at him shocked...

shaan : i know u wanted me to ask something na...

khanak looked at him in surprise...

shaan : dont look like that baby...he cupped her face and he kissed her face

and then he kissed her lips...at first khanak was shocked but then

she responded back to kiss...when they broke from kiss...

they were breathing heavily...shaan hugged her sideways...

shaan : baby i will tell u everything okay...

i loved u when i saw u in that green color salwar...

the way u looked at me...still i remeber...

from that day i felt somechanges in me...i started to love u...

i came to the bus stop and i waited to see during the evening along with rahul...

khanak looked at him surprised...her heart felt happy...it was dancing in joy...

shaan : rahul knows that i love u...

i really felt happy sometimes u saw me without others knowing but 

i saw each and every moment of u...

khanak hugged shaan very tight...

on ur birthday to i wanted to wish u..so rahul told meera that

u want to give chocolates...i was really happy on that day..

u came to my place and saw me ...shaan huged her tightly...

then later we all were busy in studies...then after finishing 

college i thought of saying my love...but i when i saw ur email invite for ur

marriage i was broken a lot...i thought u did not love me...

khanak : i thought it was just infactuation...

shaan : budthal ...(kissed her forehead..)

khanak : then...

shaan cupped her face and then kissed her lips very passionately...

shaans hand gently roamed in her body...

now they r lying in the bed...khanaks saree was gone...she was in her blouse and

saree skirt...shaan was hugging her tightly...

when i saw ur friends request i felt happy...i viewed ur profile...

i just saw ur likings pages and no pics ...

i saw u liked a television serial...i saw that serial..it was a very romantic serial...

i saw ur likings of IF page...so i came to IF to RBO forum...

i saw  a FF that has lot of views and replies...

i started to read the story...i was shocked it was our first meeting...

and u have written color of our dress and even friends name r same except

hero and heriones name r changed...i got doubt...

and that day rahul called me...and i came to know about ur marriage life...

i was shocked...but my heart felt happy...but i dont know whether

u r writing this story r not...so once i tried to login in IF...

i gave the name shanak and then in password i gave my name...

it logged in...my heart danced with joy...

i talked with my parents...they felt happy...and we came to ur dads office...

u saw my parents alone..i was sitting in another room...

and my budthal has left her lappy...i opened and saw 

it was ur FB account with my profile showing...

i was really happy...ur parents also became happy...

they also accepted for the marriage...

i talked with misha...they also felt happy for us...

i dont want to lose u again..so i thought this reunion party will help me...

so i made all the arrangements...rahul and misha helped me in the plan...

khanak : sandy...

shaan : luvkhash...thats me...

khanak : wat u...khanak looked at his face in surprise...

shaan : s baby thats me...

khanak : so only u agrumed me that it is definetly love...

shaan : umm...smiled at her...

khanak looked at shaan...she thought he has done all for the love...

khanaks heart flyed in joy...

khanak cupped his face and kissed his face everywhere..

khanak : i love u...

with a force khanak kissed shaans lip passionately..her hands 

r on his haiir pulling him more closely...

shaan was surprised on her act...

when they broke from the kiss...they were breathing heavily...

shaan : om my darling u r very fast...i have to work fast enough to catch u...

with a force shaan made khanak lay down and he was top of her...

they kissed each other very passionately and they entered their beautifull world...


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hey friends...hope u guys like it...please leave ur opinions..i will be really happy...r atleast hit like button...

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Wohooo...amazing update niki...

Loved it a lottt...

You have suprised me...

Lol khanak password is shantanu...loved it...

Shantanu's secret mission worked...and khanak has become his...Wink

Totally its an awesome OS...

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged
OMG love this ss, niki u never vail to surprise us ur fantastic at writing and I dont understand where u get these kindof stories from loool
AMAZING...
xxx

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ktym

Wohooo...amazing update niki...

Loved it a lottt...

You have suprised me...

Lol khanak password is shantanu...loved it...

Shantanu's secret mission worked...and khanak has become his...Wink

Totally its an awesome OS...

thanks a lot mounika...i really like  a surprised ones...

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aasma1

OMG love this ss, niki u never vail to surprise us ur fantastic at writing and I dont understand where u get these kindof stories from loool
AMAZING...
xxx

thanks a lot man...i like to present r do something different...i thought for something different...this idea came...i am really happy u guys like it...

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
So my film mind was right in guessing luvkhash to be Shaan..hahahaha..
the story was cute..

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
it was very beautiful this ending was so emotional at the same romantic and shocking also
yayy c my prediction was correct shan loved her from that day itself and luvkush is shan but it was easy koi pehchan sakta tha LOL
fantastic niki is ss se bahar nikal ne ka mann nahi kar raha but waiting for the ff plzz update soon Smile

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