LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 - Page 50

hi friends...

pt   17

khanak : ahhh...

a car came and hit khanak...and khanak fainted down...

after an hr r so...khanak slowly opened her eyes...

she slowly sat on the bed...she looked around...

khanak : omg..where am i...its not kishan uncles home...

khanak : ouch...her head pained...

she touched her head...she found there was a small bandage in her head...

she was about to get up ...a girl came from outside...

girl : wait...wait..u just sit...

khanak just looked at her...

girl : r u alright now khanak...

khanak : ha..i am fine now...u...

khanak thought i dont know her...who is she she knows my name...

khanak looked at her confusingly...

girl : i am swapna...(braod smile)

khanak just smiled but still she looked at her questiongly...

swapna : u r shaans  wife right...

khanak : ha...how do u know me...

swapna : he is my friend...wait...

swapna walked towards the wardrobe...she took something and came towards khanak..

swapna : here this is urs.. ...she extended a dairy to khanak...

khanak : wat no this is not mine...(confused)

swapna : this is shaans ...it means urs too na...(smile)

khanak thought wat shaans dairy...

swapna : i studied with shaan in US...he missed this dairy one day...

i had it safely...two days back only i came to india...

this is my house...

someone called swapna from outside...

swapna : wait ..i will be back...

swapna placed the dairy in front of khanak and she went outside ...

khanaks hand trembled...she slowly took the dairy...

khanak thought no we should not read others dairy na...

no he took my dairy na..so i will see wat he has written...

she slowly opened the dairy...she dropped the dairy down...

she was shocked...she slowly with trembling hands took the

dairy again and saw the first page...

she was shocked...it was her eyes...

shaan has drawn her eyes alone in the front page...

with a writing  i like this eyes...(date the day when khanak first met shaan in the school)

khanak quickly turned next page...

dear dairy...today a bubbly girl hit me...buttercup..she was bubbly but i like her eyes...

those big eyes were really beautifull...i like her eyes alone first...

but later we had maths test ..mam made that buttercup to sit near me...

i did not prepare well ..i copied from here...wat a surprise i got full marks...

wow..buttercup is bubbly but she is studing very well...

dear dairy buttercup is really silent..really good...she studies well...

she is good friend.. i like her..especially those eyes...her eyes sparkle ...

those eyes tells something  ...he has wriiten some more wat they done in class...

this buttercup is really good girl really tells and helps me in needs...

tina was teasing her saying she is bubbly and all...i felt sad...

this physical thing can be reduced if she takes measures...

she will be looking very beautifulll...let me draw and see how will see look...

khanak saw a page where shaan has drawn her as if she is slim...

khanak was shocked he has drawn  her very beautifully...

wow she will be like this if she reduces wait...her eyes will be still beautifull...

i really like those...no..i really like her a lot...

today rahul was asking me if i had any interset on buttercup...

i lied to him that i really dont like her...i dont know wat happened

tobuttercup...maths mam got me for coping...

i really felt sad...how can she do this...i really like her but she...

i am not going to talk to her...no..she must be upset with something i should find it...

next day...dear dairy i really broke down...

rahul said he likes buttercup...i told him...she is very bubbly adn she wont suits u...

rahul said no physicall appearance doesnt matter...and he also likes her

eyes...i thought i only like her...but ...no no..i wont...

sorry buttercup i did really a big mistake...i wrote it on board...that i love shantanu

with love khanak...she was crying and standing...

i thought if i wrote like this no one look at her and she will think about me...

but i amde a big mistake...those eyes did not sparkle again...

she was shifted to another section...

it was our last day in school i was waiting for car rahula nd i was talking...

rahul said see shaan khanak will look at me...

i turned and looked at her she also turned and saw us...

my heart pained...rahul said after finishing studies he will marry her...

my mom came to call me but she took khanak also with us...

oh no khanaks dad was in hospital...i was shocked...

she was crying a lot...i felt sad on seeing tears coming from her eyes...

those eyes r meant to be sparkle...but now ...

my mom asked me a promise and she took me in...

i was shocked on hearing that...she asked me to wear my chain to her...

i did that...i placed sindoor on her partings...

i felt really happy on doing that...next moment her dad passed away...

she fainted...i was about to hold her but i rembered rahuls saying...

rahul was best buddy from  1 std...he has done many things

to me...so i want him to be happy...so i poured water on my buttercups forehead...

there was scramblings of pen in the dairy...she quickly turned other pages...

she found he has written joining new college in US...

then  little things only written...she then turned to another page...

she was shocked...

i hate rahul and tina...

shit...shit...today i got friend request from rahul...

i added him as friend...i opened his photos ...i was shocked ...

i saw rahul was standing with someother girl in wedding outfit...

i called rahul...i asked him about those sayings at school...

he said that tina asked him to do so...if i am not doing that she told that

she will make my dad to go to jail as my dad was working in tinas office...

i asked when ...he said that

(shaan has invited his friends to his dads birthday party ...)

the next day of that...omg ...it all cleared ...i think tina has read my diary..

so only she should have asked to do like that...

i am really shocked now..trhat tina is no more she died in a car accident...

shit..shit...because of her i...i...lost my life...

today my mom was talking with massi...dadi is not feeling well...

so this is the chance i have to go...i want to search my life...

after two days i will be in india...

then there was nothing written...

khanak closed the dairy...tears were rolling down from here eyes...

swapna : khanak...why r u crying...is it paining...

khanak : no..no...(she wiped her tears...)

swapna : drink this coffee...

khanak : how did u got this dairy...

swapna : first drink coffee...(smile)

khanak got the coffee and she started to drink it...

swapna : shaan came to my house before he was leaving...

he asked me to buy things for kids...when he was arranging things in his bag

in my house he missed his dairy...i came two days back

i brought this with me ..so that i can give him...

khanak : oh...really thanks...(broad smile)

swapna : where is shaan...

khanak : he has gone to work...

swapna: oh...

khanak : i have to go...

swapna : u can take rest na...

khanak : no..i have to go...my phone...

swapna : oh when u fell down ...ur phone battery was lost...

i have asked my servant to buy another one...there ...he has brought...

swapna gave the cell to khanak...

khanak : thanks...(smile)

swapna : its okay dear...

khanak : i have to go...

swapna : u can go in my car...i would have come but i have to go to my dads office..

khanak : oh its okay thanks for ur help...

khanak got in the car and the car started to move...her cell rang...

khanak : hello...wat...

Wow two updates back to back...
Loved both the parts niki...
Aww shaan too loves khanak from his childhood...
Now khanak is aware of shaan's feelings...
Cant wait for the next update...

Niki both 16 and 17 are superb updates

Wow!!! Back to back update..😃Loved it di.. 😊

Khanak question directly Shaan about going out with Liya..So Raj indeed lied to her..😡

She is believing Raj but not her hubby.. He is right in getting angry..Awww..She used her rights to know the truth from him!!!😊

And Shaan kissed Khanak in reply to show his right!!! 😉 ☺️ Both love each other!!!

Awww..Again she mistook Shaan hearing him speak with Liya!!!

Awww..How she is fuming indirectly with Neethu of Liya..Headache coz of her daughter..😆

She is following Liya..Cool!!!

OMG!!! Someone hit her..

Swapna Shaan's friend is that girl..What a coincidence!!! She gave his diary to her!!!

Wow!!! Shaan hard feelings for Khanak from day one when he met her!!! 🥳 [:D/]

And he wrote ILU with different intention but all gone wrong!!! He let her go coz of Rahul but he was all acting coz of Tina..

Good he came to know all truth before he coming back to India!!!😃

What happened to Shaan???

Looking forward and thank you for writing a fabulous update di.. 😃 Edited by poo_j - 10 years ago

WOW SUPUB UPDATE DI LOVE IT

LOVE BOTH THE PART

THANKS FOR ASWOME UPDATE

WATING FOR NEXT PART

love both the parts

Awww he loves her from childhoood

2 updates on the same day.. lovely..
so now she knows the truth abt shaan..
hhhmmm..so wat happened now??
did someone met with an accident..ie, shaan?? r is he faking it to prove to khanak that she loves him..
awaiting the next part..

Wow... 2 updates i liked it ya...
Poor shaan...

hi friends...


pt   18    END

khanak : i have to go...

swapna : u can go in my car...i would have come but i have to go to my dads office..

khanak : oh its okay thanks for ur help...

khanak got in the car and the car started to move...her cell rang...

khanak : hello...wat...no...where...

khanak cut the phone...

khanak : bhaiya...do u know this address xxx...

driver : s mam...

khanak : bhaiya please take me there ...please ...go fast bhaiya...

driver : s mam...

he drove the car fastly to the place...car stopped in front of a house...

she quickly got down from the car and she saw two to three people standing

outside the house...she quickly ran inside the house...

infront of a side room raj was standing...

khanak : raj...wat happened where is shantanu...

raj was standing silently with few more people and saw inside the room...

khanak quickly ran inside the room...she was shocked...

she saw shaan was lying in the bed with blood on his head and on his legs...

khanak : shantanu...

she kept her head on his chest and started to cry...

raj : khanak...dont cry...he came here to see how the cleaning works r going...

the fan in the above room was not proper it fell on his head...

he is really serious...i dont think  he can  ...so i called doctor here...

khanak : oh no...my shanatanu will leave me...no..shantanu...please ...

please open ur eyes and see me...shantanu open ur eyes...

i have come shantanu...ur khanak..ur wife has come please shantanu open and see

me shanatnu...her head was on his chest and tears rolled down from her eyes

someone standing there said pray to god ma...

khanak : ha..god will defiently listen to my prayers...god please god...

i want my shantanu back...if anything happens to him i will not live in this world...

shantanu..shantanu...she was crying on his chest...

she felt his body was saying...she felt someone is patting her head...

she raised her head and saw shaan was sitting in the bed and looking at her...

khanak also looked at him...

khanak : shantanu..u can get up...raj..come give a hand lets take him hospital...

raj...she looked around..there was no one in the room...

shaan : no need my sweet buttercup...

khanak looked at him confused...

khanak : shantanu u..u met with accident...

shaan : no...nothing happened...he smiled at her...

khanak : then this blood...

shaan : color powder...

khanak : u..idiot..studpid...started to beat him...

shaan : hey..khanak..hey no...

khanak : why this drama ...(she hugged him very tightly)

shaan hugged her back and he kissed her cheeks ...

shaan : then wat to do...after winning ur challenge then living with u

 i will became  an old man...

khanak  : ouch...

shaan : hey wat happened..

shaan saw her forehead bandage...

khanak : small accident...

shaan : baby...

he hugged her very tightly...

shaan : is it paining...

khanak : no...because of that only i understood u...

shaan looked at her confused...

khanak showed his dairy...

shaan : hey where did u find this...

khanak : swapna gave it to  me her car only hit me...

shaan : ohh...shaan kissed the place where she had swound...



khanak : u should have told me before itself...

shaan : when i read ur dairy i was happy and i thought of saying it

to u..but u was very angry at me...

khanak : umm..sorry...

shaan : it canbe accepted in only one way...

khanak looked at him questiongly...

shaan just touched her lips with his thumb..she lowered her eyes...

her cheeks turned red...shaan slowly moved to her face...

khanak : wait...then why did u went to icecream parlour with liya

shaan : to talk to her about love...

khanak : wat..she glared at him...and she moved a little...

shaan : dont think wrongly..comehere...

shaan made her sit close to him and he hugged her tightly...



shaan : liya is in love with raj...

khanak : wat...

shaan : s...when we came first day itself she took me to her room na...

she told me everything...then u started to question me about liya...

i was really happy that time...the i thought i want to finish all the work soon...

so that this trip should become our real honey moon...

later i met liya in icecream parlour and talked everything about her love...

then later i finished the office work ...when i came u was very angry...

i also became anggry because u was questiong me on hearing others words...

i lost control yesterday ...after kissing u...i was not able to sleep..

khanak : wat..i saw u ...u were sleeping peacefully...

shaan : no baby i did not sleep.

khanak : i also did not sleep..in these days u were sleeping near me...

but yesterday u slept alone i was feeling very sad..

shaan : buttercup..buttercup...after kissing u..and ...i was not able to control

myself..so only i went and slept alone...

khanak : ohh...

shaan : ummm...

he kissed her cheeks...eyes...



shaan : i want u badly baby so today morning i came and talked with raj...

(he recalled the talk with raj but he did not say the talkings to khanak

shaan : raj...liya loves u...after u say only i can talk with uncle and aunty...

raj : no shaan ..i cannot...

shaan : still thinking khanak...

raj : shaan...(looking shocked at shaan)

shaan : i know ur feeling raj...u should have seen her dairy too na...

raj : ha...she loves u...(looking down..)

shaan : look raj...if we marry who loves us..our life will be happy...

liya loves u a lot...u r really lucky to get her...

after a lot of talks raj was convinced...

shaan : thanks raj...i will talk with uncle and aunty...

raj : ummm...(smile)

shaan : raj...

raj : s shaan...

shaan : i need a help...

raj also agreed to help shaan...)

shaan : he also agreed to marry liya...

khanak : oh wow...

khanak hugged him very tightly and kissed his cheeks...



they heard a knock in the door...

it was raj standing there...shaan changed the dress and they all went

to kishans house and shaan talked with them and they convinced them for

liya and rajs marriage...

later at night shaan was driving the car and they reached the house...

khanak : why shantanu...we r here again...

shaan : this is our guest house...as i promised we r going to stay here...

khanak smiled shyly...

they entered the house...

shaan : khanak...

khanak looked at him with a smile...shaan scooped her in his arms...



he carried upstairs to a room...he entered the room...



khanak saw ...it was fully decorated with flowers...

khanaks cheeks turned red...shaan made her to stand ...

shaan stood near her cupped her face and kissed her lips very gently...

then the kiss turned to be passionate one...



shaan made her lay in the flowers very gently and slowly...



shaan gently carressed her with his hands and lips...

shaan was top of her...they both kissed each other very passionately



and they entered there beautifull worlds...


END...

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Edited by niki_rbo - 10 years ago