LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 - Page 45

good that u skipped all the rituals niki :)

WOW DI UPDATE WAS ASWOME SUPUB LOVE IT

wating for next part

Nice update Niki

Lovely update niki...

Hai Niki,

As promised, I finished reading "LOVE"..
It was a cute story.. The way u have written it is nice..
The way u made them get married.. So its a love cum arranged marriage.. So sweet..
Tina was behaving like a real b****.. But good for her that she left decently when she came to know Shaan doesn't love her & thinks of her as a friend and sister only..
PM me after u complete the present story u r writing..

Love,
Ramzz.

Loved it..😃 ShaNaK finally got married!!! Raj didn't come for their marriage as Shaan said.. 😆

Khanak loves Shaan a lot!!! And he is behaving like so normal as nothing happened before..Good she remainded him about challenge.. 😆

He played so well with her..He'll win her heart for sure..

Their fight and arguments are so cute.. 😳

Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update di.. 😃 Edited by poo_j - 10 years ago

Read the new one too Niki..
The simplicity is the beauty of ur story..
Loved it.. So Shaan has to rekindle the love Khanak has for him & make her give her heart to him..
BTW when will Khanak come to know of Raj loving her..
As n when time permits will catch up..

😃 the kahani is going really well.. Hoping for more twist and fun..

Wow loved all the updates niki...:)

hey friends...thanks ...thanks for ur lovely comments...loads and loads of thanks to u guys...

pt  12

at morning shaan woke up...he became very happy...

khanak face is very near his face and her one hand is on shaans chest..

and her one leg is on shaans leg...and she was sleeping very tiredly...

he thought to himself...she told if i put legs and hand on her when asleep...

he smiled to himself...some hairs r on her cheeks...

he saw her beautifull lips...he slowly bend towards her

but with lot of efforts he moved his head back...

he did not make any efforts to move from her...he was just lying besides her

and just admirred his beautifull wife...

khanak stirred in sleep..she slowly woke up from sleep...

she looked at him ...she also looked as his eyes...

they were starring at eachother...she quickly came back to reality...

khanak : why r u looking at my face...if u wakeup u can go na...(angryly)

shaan : how to get up...(with a smile on his face and eyes)

khanak : how ...?  she looked at him then only she saw her

hands r on his chest adn her legs on his legs...

she quickly got up and sat in the bed...

her cheeks turned red...she was ashamed to look at him...

she thought omg how did i...oh no wat will he think about me...she felt like crying...

shaan : yesterday night someone told me if i put my hands and legs...

there was a knock on the door...

khanak quickly got down from the bed and went to open the door...

khusbhoo was standing with a tray with coffee with a smile...

khanak : bhabhi...i would have come na.,...

khusbhoo : its okay khanak..

khanak took the tray and went inside the room and kept it in a tray...

khanak : i will brush and drink...for u ...?

shaan : i woke up early but u arrested me with ur legs and hands...(with a laugh)

khanak quickly went to washroom...

later after finsihing breakfast...shaan and akshay r sitting in the hall reading newspaper..

khusbhoo : akshay ...today u have to teach kids swimming...

akshay : no baby... i am really tired...

khusbhoo : today is a holiday...u have to teach...

akshay : no...some other day baby...

khusbhoo : atleast u can arrange for a trainee na...

shaan : bhabhi...

khusbhoo : s shaan...

shaan : i can teach kids...

khusbhoo : can u teach the kids swimming...(smile)

shaan : oh sure...

khusbhoo : when did u learn...when u r here u did not learn na..

shaan : in US bhabhi...

khusbhoo : oh...tarun..tanvi...come here...

kids came running while eating sweets...

khusbhoo :ur chachu will teach u swimming...

kids : oh wow...(jumped with joy...)

shaan : shall we go kids...

kids : ha...

tanvi : wait chachu...chachi...chachi...

khanak came out from kitchen...shaan looked at the kids questionly..

tarun : chachi come lets go...

khanak : where...(with a smile)

tanvi : to learn swimming...chachu is going to teach...

khanak : u go i have work...

tarun : u told us u will learn swimming when we learn...

shaan just dropped the paper that he had in his hand..

he took the paper and he just smiled at kids and then at khanak...

khanak just glared at him...

khanak : no tanu...i have work ...i will learn later...

tarun: mom...can u do the chachis work..she is coming with us...

khusbhoo looked at tarun and gently ruffled his hair with a smile...

khusbhoo : go khanak i will handle here...(with a smile)

shaan : ok...come lets go...(with a smile)

tarun holded khanaks hand and they all walked towards backyard

where they had swimming pool...

tarun and tanvi changed into shorts and swim suits khanak helped them...

shaan : u did not change u cannot learn in saree...(looking at khanak with a smile)

khanak just glared at him and went inside

after 5 minutes r so khanak came there in salwar ...

she saw shaan was  inside the water and kids in that tube...

tarun : come chachi..come...

khanak just sat at the corners imersing her legs in water...she did not getinside the water...

she was afraid...she saw shaan was coming towards her...

water is upto his neck...he was swiming and coming...

shaan came near her...she saw him he was bare chest...

for the first time she was seeing him like this...

she felt her cheeks r turning red...shaan extended his hand...

khanak : no...u teach the kids first...

shaan : r u afraid...

khanak : no..i am not afraid of u...

shaan just smiled at her and said r u afraid of u..that u will fall for me...husky..

khanak glared at him angry...

khanak quickly got down inside water without holding his hand...

oops she did not know the depth...she stuggled but shaan holded her...

now khanak was holding him tight...her hands r around his neck...

he was holding her by her waist...

their eyes met ...they starred at eachother...

tarun: chachu teach chachi...

shaan : ha...ha i will teach her everything that is needed...(looking at her...)

khanak quickly turned her face...

shaan : now u have to lay in my hands like this and u have to do like this...

khanak : wat...

shaan : tarun ...so her how...

shaan holded taruna dn he did and khanak saw it...

khanak thought dont think of anything he is just a coach now...

shaan : shall we ...

khanak : ha...

khanak did as he told...she started to do...

shaan : why u did not write ur dairy for the last three days...

khanak : i was busy in the work...wait..wat...wat did u said..

she was holding his ahdn fro support and looked at him...

shaan : u draw beautifully... i want to..(smiling at her)

khanak : how dare u..how can u read my dairy...(angrly)

khanak : how did u get my dairy...

shaan : when u r getting ur mehandi...ur stuff from kids room

was shifted to our room...that time i got it...

khanak : how can u read others dairy..dont u have manners...

shaan : why..u r my wife na..there is nothing wrong in it...

khanak : before three days i am not ur wife na...

shaan : oh hello ...before six years itself u r my wife...

khanak : u only said i am not ur wife and u poured water on my head...

shaan : then why ur still wearing my chain i put on that day...

khanak : u gave it...

shaan : no i put it...

khanak : ok watever ..but for the past 6 six years i am having so it belongs to me..

so there is no right in asking r saying about it...why i am wearing it...

shaan : umm okay..then about ur writings and drwaings about me...

khanak : uhh...uhh...

shaan : u love me isnt khanak...

khanak : no..no...i dont love u...that time i just liked u...

shaan : thats the same...(smile)

khanak : no..there is difference in like and love do u get it...

shaan : no...ur lieing ...u love me...

khanak : no..

shaan : s...

khanak : no...

shaan : no...

khanak : s...

shaan :seee...u love me...(laughing...)

khanak : u...ahhh...

she tried to hit him she loose the grip and she fell inside the water...

but our hero saved her and again they r in the same position...

khanaks hands around his neck and his hand r on her waist...

they were standing very close to eachother...

waters r dropping from shaans hair on to khanaks face...

they were starring at eachother...