LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 - Page 44

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi friends...yesterday had work so not able to write...thanks for ur comments guys...

pt    10

they reached home...

sunil and akshay were sitting in the hall and watching tv...

akshay : why r u guys late...

shaan : we went to icecream parlour...

madhavi : wat...

standing in shock with a tray with snacks...

sunil and akshay looked eachother...

khanak : my friends came we went with them...

madhavi : oh...

shaan sat along with his bro...

sunil : wat is that beta...

khanak : raj gave me...(smile)

khanak : mom where r the kids...

madhavi : parents teachers meeting they will come now...there they r coming..

khusbhoo entered with the kids...kids ran and went and hugged there dad sunil

and they sat in the sofa...meanwhile dadi also came and sat with them..

khanak : hey i have tanu..taru...this is for u...

khanak extended with  two dairy milk  chocolate

tarun and tanvi : wow they got the chocolate...

tarun and tanvi : thanks khanak...

shaan : hey dudes come here guys...

tarun and tanvi : wat chachu...

shaan : while calling elders we should call them with respect...

u should not call her by name...

everyone r looking at shaan...

tanvi and tarun : how to call her...

shaan : call her as chachi...she is my wife na...(looked at khanak)

khanak was standing there in shock...and everyone r there r in shock...

madhavi : shaan ...

shaan : s mom...

madhavi : u r not joking right...

shaan : i am not joking..(Smile)

there was smile on others face but not in khanaks face...

dadi : madhavi bring sweets for everyone...

madhavi : ha mom...

madhavi went inside and brought the sweets and was about to give

sunil : madhavi wait...

madhavi looked at him confused...

sunil : shaan ...

shaan : s dad...

sunil : so u r accepting khanak as ur wife ...

shaan : s...(looking straight at his dad)

sunil : r u sure about that...

shaan : umm...100 percent sure...

shaans dadi : so can we arrange for  a formal one beta...

shaan : s dadi..(smile)

sunil : wait ma...khanak beta...moved near khanak...

khanak came back to reality...

khanak : s papa...

sunil : listen beta...his decision is not important for me...

for me i want ur decision...i want u to be happy...if u have any one else

in ur mind u can say...there is nothing wrong in it...

shaan : dad...(little louder)

sunil : i am talking to her shaan keep quiet...

shaan just glared at them...

sunil : beta i want u to be happy...

khanak looked around she saw madhavi dadi akshay and khusbhoo

all r eagerly looking at her to say s...

sunil : beta if u say s we can arrange a grand wedding for u guys...if not there is no problem...

khanak closed her eyes...she saw how all others took care of her in this 6 years...

she finally made a decision...she took a deep breath...

khanak : s papa u can arrange further...(looking at sunil...)

madhavi : khanak beta...(hugged her)

everyone hugged them and wished...khanak just smiled at them not at khanak...

she glared at shaan...she went inside the room...

while others started to prepare for marriage...

marriage is fixed in the coming sunday...as dadi insisted that...

she sat in her bed...took her dads pic and saw that..

she heard some foot steps...she turned around and saw it was shaan...

who was coming inside the room...the door was closed...

he walked near her and sat besides her...she quickly stood up...

shaan : why r u getting up buttercup...i am ur hubby...

khanak : shut up...(angryly)

shaan just looked at her...

khanak : i know wat u have in ur mind...

now i am beautifull so u r accepting me...but before 6 years...

shaan : khanak ...i want...

khanak : u can get my this stupid flesh and skin...not my heart...angryly...

shaan just looked at her...

shaan : wat r u saying...

khanak : u can win my body but u cannot win my heart...

shaan walked near her ..she took a step back until she hit the wall...

they were inches away...he carresed her cheeks with his breath...

khanak looked at him straight even though she felt nervous on his closeness

shaan : first i will win ur heart...

khanak : u cannot...

shaan : i will...

khanak : challenge...

shaan : s challenge...



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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update niki...
shaan confessed that he accepted khanak as his wife...but khanak is not happy with the decision...πŸ˜•
Khanak was right beauty lies in the heart...he should not fall for her outer charms
Khanak should give him tough time...πŸ˜ƒ
Waiting for the next part...πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
Niki lovely update
Shaan as he said  he did not give khanak chance to choose  and he said to  tarun and tanvi  to call khanak chaachi
Khanak accepted marriage for family  and loved their challenge
waiting to see how shaan wins her heart


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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww i loves it 
it came as a surprise shan accepted so easily
i  m confused about shan whats going on his mind he fall in love with khanak in just one day and dont know true love hain ya just only physical for him 
he says he will win her heart aise bol raha hain ke he truly loves arghh this man is confusing 
update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!! Loved it so much!!! Shaan said Khanak as his wife on his own in front of all..πŸ₯³Everyone got shocked including the readers..πŸ˜ƒ What a turn around!!!πŸ‘

Good even in happiness Sunil again cleared whether Shaan is sure and then to Khanak..πŸ‘

Khanak has to say yes for Sunil and others..Awww!!!

ShaNak gonna get married soon!!!πŸ₯³

In all means Khanak is right to think that Shaan is loving her outer beauty..Good..Shaan challenged her..Now Shaan must win for sure..πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

Looking forward and thanks for writing a fantastic update!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Woow i wanna see khanak giving him a hard time si that he properly accepts hher lool 
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Posted: 10 years ago
ASWOME UPDATE DI πŸ‘

WOW SHAAN ACCEPT KHANAK AS WIFE IT WAS SUPUB..

WATING FOR SHANAK MARRIGE AND YES SHAAN WILL DAFFINTLY WIN KHANAK HART..

THANKS FOR BEAUTIFULL UPDATE DI
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww...what a drastic surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg...they r going to marriied..really looking forward how shan will steal her heart..
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi friends...thanks for comments guys...thank u so much...

pt   11

khanak was sitting with her cell phone...

madhavi : wat beta..did u invite all...

shaan came that time...he came and sat in the hall opposite to her...

khanak : ha mom i invited all my friends...

madhavis cell rang so she moved to her room...

shaan and khanak alone sitting in the halll...

shaan : so u invited all ur friends...

khanak : ha...(looking at her cell phone)

shaan : wat about raj...

khanak : ummm i called him too ..(casuall)

shaan : wat did he say...

khanak : he was happy on hearing that...he wished me...

shaan :he will not come to our marriage...

khanak just looked at him..and said he will come...

later they were all busy in functiion preparations...

(i am skipping all the rituals shaan and khanak r married now...

peoples come and wish them gave them gifts and took photos...)

khanaks friends came...they all wished them...

shaan : i told u na raj will not come...(whisper)

khanak : its not wat u think...he got job...he wanted to be there today...

so he did not came...he has send me gifts...do u get it..

shaan just shook his shoulder...

later at night...khusbhoo took khanak to shaans room...

that was the first time she was going inside shaans room...

even though she stayed in that house for 6 years she did not go to his room...

she saw bed was decorated with flowers...

she felt her heart is beating fastly...khusbhoo made her to sit in the bed...

khusbhoo : khanak ur things r shifted here in that cuboard...okay..

khanak just shook her head ...

and with a smile khusbhoo went outside the room...

khanak got down from the bed she opened the cubboard and

she took a nighty and went inside the washroom...

after changing she cameout she saw still shaan did not came..

she went and stood infront of the mirror...

she was wearing white nighty(as in rbo tum jao..song sequence..)

her hair was waving in air...in her neck she was wearing mangalsutra

and the chain that shaan put on her six yrs back...sindoor on her forehead partings..

a small daimond stud on her ear...and a pair of daimond bangles on her hand...

she was looking simply beautifull...

she heard door opening sound...she turned around...

he walked in ...he was in his morning wedding dress...

he looked at her no starred at her from top to bottom...

khanak : so...our challenge started now...(casually)

shaan : wat challenge...i dont know any challenge...i know u r my wife

and now our first night...

khanak : i know u guys will say like this...(angry)

shaan just looked at her smilingly...

khanak became more angry

khanak : u said u will win my heart first...

shaan : i think i have won ur heart...walked towards her...

she took a step back...until her back hits wall...

shaan : dont u love me khanak...(husky) kept his both the hands sideways of her face...

khanak felt nervous on hearing his husky talk...the way he said her name...

the beautifull airspray that was sprayed in room everything made something

to her..his closeness everything did something...

khanak closed her eyes for a second r so and she told to her heart...

dont fall for his flirt...he is very good in flirt ...

her heart said but he is the one who u liked a lot...

her mind that was long time ago...her heart how can u ever

u can forget ur first crush...her mind no no thats not crush...

i just liked him..her heart no..her mind just shut up...dont fall for his trap...

khanak : now u r going to move r not...

shaan : during first night no one will say to move...husky..

khanak : wat the hell do u want...(angry)

shaan : u only buttercup...just u...

khanak : me...? my heart r my body...?

shaan : both r same...

khanak : no for me its separate one...u can win my body but not my soul...

she turned her face away...

shaan moved aside from her...her face frowned a little but then she

made her face as if standing in anger... but shaan saw that small change

from her face...he started to laugh...

khanak : why r u laughing...

shaan : u told not to touch...i moved ...then wat for u whether i laughed r cried...

khanak became angry...she felt something...

khanak : i should cry...these r because of u...

shaan : wat..because of me...u should have told my dad that u r not intersted

in the marriage...u agreed because u love me...

khanak : wat no..i dont love u...(angryly)

shaan : u r lieing...

khanak : no i dont lie..its really waste of time in talking with u..i am tired now i am going to sleep...

she went and layed in the bed...

shaan : my first night became waste...he went and layed besides her...

khanak quickly sat in the bed..

khanak : hey hello why r u sleeping with me in bed...

shaan : oh shit..if i sleep in the sofa ... r u going to feel safe..

how much time will take me to come near u...

so shut up and sleep near me in this bed...

khanak thought if i get up from bed he will think that i am afraid of him...

then he will say i have lost the challenge...

so she layed down in the bed...and looked at him angryly...

khanak : if u put ur legs r hands on me during sleep i will kill  u ...

shaan just laughed at her...

khanak looked at him angryly and took another pillow and placed it inbetween them..

khanak : u should not comebetween this okay...

shaan : wow u have build the great wall between us...

he took the pillow and throwed aside...

shaan : u told not to touch ..i wont touch u do u get it...if u say r do

like keeping pillows and talk then i will throw all the things aside and

i will enjoy my first night...do u want me to have first night...

khanak quickly covered her with bedsheet till head...

shaan just smiled at her and he slept besides her...



next update on monday guys...busy with my kids work...takecare guys...