LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 - Page 38

Posted: 10 years ago
OMG niki you did shanak marriage in the fourth update only
Haila khanak balika vadhu ban gayiπŸ˜ƒ
Lovely update niki...great twistπŸ‘ Didnt expect this😊
Thanks for updating niki even when the current didnt support...
loved it :)
Cant wait for shaan's reaction!!
Posted: 10 years ago
OMG what a twist
i didnt expect that shanak will come together like this it was total shocker scene 
oh no her dad also passed away and obviously shan is not going to accept khanak so soon 
but before all this i wanted shan to feel guilty about whatever he had done with khanak now he will hate her more poor khanak :(
but its very interesting lets see how u are gonna make shan fall for khanak :)
update soon :)
Edited by jaisyjazz - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Niki lovely update
Shanak marriage wow great twist
Shaan won't accept easly and may be he will fall for khanak after returning from london
waiting for next update
Posted: 10 years ago
Omg what a shocker 
wannna see what they do after 
x
Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!!! What a twist!!! ShaNak got married.. πŸ˜ƒ Didn't expect this at all..

Shaan going to London for his college degree..Khanak felt for him..

OMG!!! 😲 Khanak'd dad met with an accident and his wish was to see ShaNak marriage!!!

ShaNak got married in an unusual circumstance..

Looking forward and thank you for writing a superb update di.. 😊
Posted: 10 years ago
I am shocked to my very core... Niki
what will happen to khanak now?
I am very sad ya...
i guess shaan will go to london for higher studies and Khanak will stay with Madhavi and Sunil...

Posted: 10 years ago
omg omg omg i am totally shock 😲

wow but SUPUB as always love it

SHANAK got married so soon

ASWOME update πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Posted: 10 years ago
this was a huge shock :((( your update made me cry. Khanak's dad is no more and  sunil and Madhavi freed him. Mr Sharma was lying on bad but he couldn't talk was heart wrenching. Shaan and khanak are now  husband and wife :O super shocking moment 

Khanak faunted :((( Cant wait for next part. 

Sorry i am out of station so commenting from Cell ...Nikki you have yo update tomorrow i just cant wait to read next part. 

Love
Pranjal.
Posted: 10 years ago
totally shoced..as it was totally unexpecetd
in ths story i want  them  to fall in luv confess it...nd after tht some romance coming up..
Posted: 10 years ago
hi friends...thanks for hitting like button and thanks for commenting guys...thank u so much...


pt 5

khanak : papa...she fainted and fell on the floor...

madhavi : khanak..khanak beta...

sunil was standing near sharma...

madhavi : shaan ..shaan get water...

shaan saw a water bottle with water...

he came near them...he poured on her forehead...

madhavi : shaannn...wat r u doing...

shaan : i am undoing my mistake...

madhavi looked at him in shock...sunil saw them khanaks sindoor has gone...

sunil : shaan ...(angryly)

shaan put the bottle went out in anger...

meanwhile khanak opened her eyes she felt water on her head slowly touched

her forehead sindoor has gone...she saw shaan was going out in anger..

tears formed in her eyes she went and holded her dads hand and cried..

sharma was taken to his house...many people came ...

sunil and madhavi took care of everythings...

khanak was sitting there and just looking at her dad...

after everything over khanak was lying in her dads bed holding his pic...

madhavi : beta...

khanak sat on the bed...madhavi also sat on the bed...

madhavi : come lets eat something...

khanak : no aunty i am not hungry...

madhavi : from yesterday u did not eat...if u r not coming i am not going to eat..

khanak : thanks aunty...thanks for everything...

khanak hugged madhavi...

madhavi gently patted her back...

after they both ate they came to hall...she saw sunil his mam were sitting...

khanak went before them and joined her hands

khanak : thanks uncle...thank u so much for taking care of everything...

sunil : no beta..he holded her hand

tears rolled down from her eyes...

sunil : u should not cry...we r there for u...

shaans dadi : dont worry we r always with u...

suddenly they heard sound at the entrance...

khanak saw akshay bhaiya (shaans brother ) holding shaans hand

and making shaan to come inside...she saw shaan was in total anger...

khanak felt afraid...shaan came and just stood there...

madhavi : shaan...

shaan : dont talk to me mom..how can u do this to me...shit...how mom...

dont u know my aims and wishes...

madhavi face was frowned...tears formed in her eyes...

sunil : i only told her to do like that...

shaan : i thought u will...

shaans dadi : shaan ...

shaan stopped and looked at khanak angryly...

shaans dadi : u study beta then we can say this to others...

shaan just laughed...

shaan : wat...wat r u saying...say this..(angrly looking at khanak)

say this...i am husband to that buttercup...never...never..(Shouted angrly)

sunil : shaan  shutup...(shouted angrly)

shaan : why i ahve to shut up...no..this is my life...u all spoiled it...

no..no...thats not a marriage...

sunil : shut up shaan..just shut up...

shaan : no...no...u listen...

shaans dadi : sunil shaan just stop it okay...

everyone was in silent...

khanak was thinking oh no why god why r u playing like this in my life...

wat sin i have done...my life is like this...u took my mom when i was born...

then my dadi..now my dad...why r u doing this...

shaans dadi : ok shaan tell me wat do u want do now...

shaan : this is a good question dadi...

shaan : i am going to london for higher studies...

shaan :but rember u guys should not say to anyone that this happened in my

life...do u guys get it...

sunil : mom wat ...

shaans dadi : just be quiet...

shaan : if u r saying this ..u cannot see me then...

madhavi : shaan...(worried)

shaan : mom ...

madhavi looked at him...

shaan took her hand and placed it in his hand and said its a promise...

tears formed in khanaks  eyes...

shaan quickly went out of the house...everyone sat in the sofa..

khanak slowly walked towards her room...

sunil : mom...

shaans dadi : first let him study...finish his studies...khanak should also study...

madhavi : but mom do u see wat shaan saying...

shaans dadi : dont worry madhavi everything will be alright...

sunil : mom khanak...

shaans dadi : let khanak stay here itself until shaan leaves to london...

madhavi : how can she live alone...let she come with us there...

shaans dadi : no madhavi it will anger shaan more...

akshay : dadi ...let khusbhoo stay with khanak here...she is also pregnant...

khusbhoo will divert khanaks mind...they both can get along...

shaans dadi : ha its a good idea...does khusbhoo agree to this...

akshay : dont worry dadi...she knows everything...she only told

me to bring khanak there but little change she can come here...

shaans dadi : ummm okay...

as they discussed khusbhoo came and stayed at khanaks house...

khusbhoo became a very good sister to khanak...

khanak also changed a lot in everything  :-)


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