Rang Badalti Odhani

LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
niki missed u so much and love u :)
loved the update
haww i thought shan abhi chodega nahi when he came to the closet and said that
wow smart shan how smartly and teasingly he gave back khanak her own promise that she took from him hahahhhaaa
ooohhh lets c how much she has self control 
hope u update soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely update..😊 Poor Khanak..πŸ˜† Ansh is too cute..Shaan wants to say something but Khanak kept on talking..😳 Must say Shaan is very smart and the kiss..☺️

Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update di..😊


P.S: How are you??? Missed you..πŸ€—

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the Update  πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ 

Wish khanak will understand shaan soon he isnt a playboy he loves her truly πŸ˜Š ansh is super cute. Loved their nok jhok πŸ˜†

waiting for next πŸ˜Š take care of your self dear πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome Nikki πŸ˜Š
loved the update 
shanak n Ansh sleeping in one room 
Ansh and his questioning quiz was very nice loved it 
yes khanak shaan said he wil gv to time bt not for kissing lolzz β˜ΊοΈ
update when u get time Nikki 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update niki...
lol shaan said that he will wait for consummating not for kissπŸ˜†
Intelligent boy😳😳
Self controlπŸ˜† and again he kissedπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
lovely update...
update the next part soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow niki loved it...
Soo khanak is angry dat he kissed her...😳
Ansh is adorable hope khanak realize he love her truly...
No worries niki update whenever u get time...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for late comment niki...
Shaan trying to seduce khanak lol...πŸ˜†
Poor khanak she will loose her control or what...hahahπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
update the next part soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
hi friends...sorry for the delay...personal works guys...sorry...

pt  11

khanak : how do u say that...

shaan : because i have self control...dont u have self control...

khanak  : i have self control...(angrly)

shaan : so u have self control..(moved little closer)

khanak :s i...

shaan did not make her complete the sentence...

his one hand holded her chin and lifted her face...and the other hand

went to her waist...gently smoothed her waiste and tugged her saree

that was inserted in her saree skirt...and he kissed her  lips...

he moved away quickly and he walked out of the closet...

khanak was standing there still...few minutes later she came out of the washroom

in her night dress..she looked around the room light is dim...

she looked at the bed...shaan was sleeping...

khanak thought to herself...damn he is sleeping peacefully...

she layed in the bed besides ansh...she dont know when she slept...

it was early in the morning...shaan woke up as his cell vibrated...

he looked around...he smiled...he got up from bed and he walked

to other side of bed and he smiled ...khanak was sleeping...

he slowly bend down and he moved the hair that was on her cheeks...

he bend down and kissed her forehead ...he saw her cell was lying near her pillow...

he took the cell and started to see over after few minutes he smiled and

he placed the cell back in its place and he went back to his side of bed...

he quickly took his cell and he covered himself with bedcover and he dailled

her cell number...khanak woke up on the cell phone ring...

shaan quickly cut the call...in sleepy eyes she saw the cell she dont know whose

number it is...so she placed back the cell and closed her eyes...

after a few seconds...shaan again called her cell which he was doing inside the bedcover...

she again opened her eyes and she was irritated...before she could attened phone was cut...

khanak : damn who the hell is giving me missed calls...(she saw the clock)

khanak : oops ...i should get up...

she quickly got up ..she saw the cell phone number...then she shook her shoulder

and she kept aside the cell and walked to the washroom...

khanak dressed up and came after bath she saw both shaan and ansh were sleeping...

so she went out of the room took blessings from elders and she took a tray with

milk and coffe for shaan and ansh and she came to the room...

khanak placed the tray in the table...

khanak thought should i wake him up...

khanak : ansh...ansh getup ...(little louder)

shaan woke up on that he looked at her...there eyes met for a second...

khanak : ansh...(she went and took the tray and came near shaan )

shaan : ansh...my buddy wake up man...

ansh : ummm...papa...please 5 more minutes...

shaan : come on buddy i will take u out today...(took the cup of coffee )

khanak moved and placed the tray back again in the table...

ansh : going out...(woke up with a shout)

khanak : go and brush ur teeth...(folding the bed sheets)

ansh : mommy papa is drinking without brushing...so i will also drink like that.,...

khanak : wat...no ansh first go and brush...its bad habbit...(looking at shaan ...

shaan too looked at her while sipping his coffee...)

ansh : mommy come here...

khanak moved near her and raised her brows...

ansh : u r good mommy na...

khanak : umm...so ...

ansh : today i will drink the milk with brushing...

khanak : u r good son na...u will listen to me na...

ansh : mommy please...ansh was about to kiss her...

khanak : no ansh...first go and brush ur teeth...hey go...she was about to move...

ansh holded her neck tightly and he was trying to kiss her with smile...

khanak giggled and she was saying no ansh first brush then kiss me...

ansh : no mom first kisss...khanak was about to push him...

ansh : papa help me get hold of mom...

khanak looked at ansh and then shaan...

shaan : as ur wish beta...(smiling and got up and pulled khanak with a force...

khanak landed on bed and shaan was lying sideways with her...

ansh was about to fall over them...

ansh : oo...papa hold mom i will come now...

shaan : where r u going...

ansh : washroom...(he entered washroom)

khanak was about to get up but shaan holded her tightly...

khanak looked at him...shaan slowly started to nuzzle her face...

khanak : leave me...(turned other side)

shaan : r u afraid...

khanak turned towards him and said no...shaans face was near

and he whispered ...i already brushed...

thats it...shaan sealed her lips with his lips...her hands holded

the bed sheet very tightly...her eyes were closed...his hands were

holding her waist gently smoothing it...

ansh : mom...mom...(from washroom)

shaan left her...khanak got up from bed...she walked towards the washroom...

shaan whispered to himself i want this bed coffee daily...


sorry for the delay and small updates...i will try to finish this story in this week... now a days i am not able to write...sorry...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww babe its fine i understand, im sooo busy aswell i have soo many pms off ffs that i need to read..
Whenever you have time u can update..
Nd when ur proper free u can come up with another ff ..
Xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovely update...
So shaan got a license to kiss after brushing...lol