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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 5:27am | IP Logged
hey friends...hope all r fine...

this is my first attempt in writing os...hope u guys like it...

i am taking situation when khanak said i love u...after telling  it how it will be...

ok i am starting it...

khanak :i love u...

shaan was looking her in shock and then surprised and he looked happy..

tears were flowing from their eyes...they looked at each other...

sunil madhavi cutted the cake...everyone r happy...

everyone r sitting in the hall and eating cake...

khanak went inside kitchen to make a fruit salad...

khanak was in kitchen..she was nervous...shaan entered the kitchen ...

khanak did not know ...she was busy cutting in tense...

he saw her...she was tensly cutting vegetables...

shaan thought y she is cutting vegetables ...he looked her face she was tensed..

shaan thought for a minute... smiled to himself...he slowly  walked towards her...

now he was standing near her...

shaan:khanak...(slowly and gently)

khanak:ahhh...she dropped the knife and she stood in tense...

she looked at him in tense...she bend down and took her knife and she

moved little away and started to cut the vegetables...

she was very tense...she is not focusing in cutting...

shaan smiled at her ...he moved again little closer...

shaan:khanak...

khanak::ha...(not looking at him...still trying to cut vegetables)

shaan:y r u cutting vegetables instead of fruit...

khanak stopped cutting saw wat she have done...she looked up and saw shaan

he was smiling naughtly...her tension increased...

she started to pick all the vegetables in her hand...her hand is full of vegetables...

she moved a step to put in dustbin...her dupatta fell down...

she was about to place all the vegetables in the same place so that she can pick up her dupatta

shaan:wait khanak...

shaan bend down and he took her dupatta and he smiled at her...

she looked at him tensed...she looked down...

he moved towards her...he was now standing behind her...

he was standing very close behind her...she can feel his breath on her neck...

he gently took one edge of her dupatta and brought his hand near her neck...

his fingers touching her neck...she felt a shiver...his hands brushed her neck

and he placed her dupatta around her neck...

she took a step ahead fast she missed balanced she was about to fall..

shaan got hold of her from back...his hands r on her waist...holding her...

with a force he made to stand her straight ...her back was hitting his chest...

her heart was beating fastly...his hands r still on her waist...

her eyes were closed...

khusbhoo:khanak...khanak...(shouting from hall)

khanak came back to reality..she moved away quckly...

she placed all the vegetables back in table itself and she went outside fastly...

shaan was standing there in little frustration but a smile appeared on his face...

later in dinning table...khanak was sitting 

opposite to shaan and everyone started to eat...

she did not look shaan atall...she avoided him...she did not meet his eyes atall...

shaan  was watching all her acts..he smiled at her...

now khusbhoo khanak and shaan alone sitting in the dinning...

shaan:khanak..pass me the kheer...

khanak  took the kheer bowl and placed near him...and started to talk with khusbhoo...

shaan:khanak can u put kheer in this cup for me...

khanak stood up and took the cup near by and walked towards him...

now she was standing near him..with all tensed...she started to put the kheer

shaan put his hand behind her and took a towel that was on next chair(thats 

next to khanak ..so his hands extended around khanak touching her back...)

khanak was standing still...while taking the towel his face is brushing 

her side arms and side waist...khanak saw khusbhoo who was busy in talking

in phone...she looked shaan who was smiling at her...

she walked back to her place and tried to finish her dinner...

shaan:u want some kheer khanak...

khanak:no...without looking at shaan..

shaan:can u make another cup for me...

khanak:ahh...(looking at him ...then she smiled at him...)

khanak took the bowl of kheer near her from sitting from her place...

she took another cup near the table...and poured it and pushed near shaan

and she smiled at him...he smiled at her saying thanks cooly...

later in the dinning hall elders went to their room...

akshay and shaan r talking about something...

khusbhoo and khanak was talking something...

khusbhoo:akshay..i am getting sleepy..lets go to our room...

shaan:ha bhaiya...lets go to room...(looking at khanak)

khanak was shocked and she was nervous...

khusbhoo:khanak r u not going to sleep...

khanak:uhh..no bhabhi..i am going eat cake now...i am not sleepy...u go...

khanak stood up and went to dinning table took a piece of cake 

and started to eat very very very slowly...

akshay:ok shaan good night...

shaan:ummm...(looking at khanak)

akshay and khusbhoo went to their room...khanak saw shaan...

he was looking at her with a smile...she looked in to the cake...

he slowly walked towards dinning table...

khanaks aim was to cut the cake in a very very small piece and eat..

shaan casuaaly came to the dinning and sat opposite to khanak...

khanak:do u want a piece of cake..(casually not looking at his face)

shaan:no khanak...u continue ur eating...i will wait...(with a smile)

khanak looked at him..she saw his smile...she felt shiver...

khanak: u go shantanu i will come...(eating a very tiny piece of cake...

shaan:no..i will wait...(looking firmly at her with a smile)

khanak looked at him shock...he smiled at her...

khanak pushed the plate and got up..

shaan:ur not eating it...

khanak:no..its enough for me...(taking the plate to kitchen)

in kitchen khanak thought while drinking water god wat i will do...

i am not afraid of him...i am really feel shy...this ..this...

shaan:finished...

on hearing his sound...she splitted water...her dress from neck till stomach

little bit drenched...she looked at him...

shaan:slowly khanak...wat happened ...r u alright...u r looking like tensed...

khanak:uhh...nothing i am alright...

dadi:wat r u guys doing here...not going to room for sleep...

shaan:ha going dadi...wat do u want...

dadi:i came to take water...

khanak:i will bring...

dadi:i will take..u both go to room...(with a smile)

shaan:umm s dadi...khanak come...

khanak just looked at him and walked quickly to room...

shaan walked behind her with a smile...

they reached the room...shaan closed the door...khanaks heart beat started to beat fast...

she felt shaan is standing behind her...she walked to the dressing table...

shaan came and stood behind her...khanak was looking down and standing

she could feel his breath...she became very nervous...

shaan:khanak...khanak...(near her ears)

khanak slowly raised her haed and looked in the mirror...

she saw shaan in the mirror...he too smiled at her...

shaan:i wont force u...take ur  time...

khanak starred at him in disbelief...

shaan:dont be nervous...take ur time...i will wait...(with a smile)

shaan moved  a step back and he turned around and he has taken a step...

khanak came and hugged him from back...

shaan was standing still...shaan smiled...

shaan slowly turned around and cupped her face...she has closed her eyes..

shaan:khanak...

khanak opened her eyes...they both looked at eachother...

shaan:ummm...

khanak:hmmm...(smiled and she blushed...)

shaan moved his face little near...

khanak:but first we will talk...

shaan:wat talk...(confused)...ummm..okay...

shaan made khanak sit in the sofa...he also sat near her...

there was silent for a minute...

shaan slowly took khanaks hand in his...khanak felt shy and her cheeks turned red...

shaan:which place do u like...

khanak:dhulwadi...

shaan:wats special in there...(he makes him sit little more near her..

khanak:special...(with a smile...she turned and faced shaan )

khanak:wat shantanu..its special in many...u know champak...

shaan recalled he sitting in champak and he fell down...

he smiled ...khanak started to speak very enthusatically...

shaan was just looking at her with a smile...he did not listen wat she spoke...

he was just looking at her admired her...she was continuosly spoke...

suddenly shaan pulled her face and kissed her...he kissed her continuosly..

her hands reached his shoulder...khanak dug her nails in his shoulder...

she cannot breath...shaan stopped the kiss and moved away his face...

he looked at khanak who was breathing heavily and she started to caugh..

shaan:khanak...khanak...

shaan quickly took the water bottle in the table and he gave her it..

khanak became little relaxed...

shaan:khanak...khanak i am sorry...i did not mean to do...

sorry...u was talking...he started to talk now continuously...

khanak was just looking at him...suddenly she pulled his face

and kissed him very hardly...shaan was in shock...khanak stopped 

and moved away her face with a smile...she looked at shaan...

he was breathing heavily..and he coughed...

khanak took the water bottle and gave it to shaan...shaan drank the water...

they both looked at eachother..they smiled at eachother...

khanak lowered her head...her cheeks turned red...

shaan quickly hugged her...she hugged him back...

shaan carried her to bed and they both kissed eachother very passionately...

khanak:wat r u doing...

shaan:shhh...wait...umm...

khanak:uhh...no..shh...u...

shaan and khanak :i love u ...

they both entered their  beautifull world ...



do u guys like it...please hit like button if u like it and comment guys...i want ur opinions...
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pt 20 pg 45 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3137200&TPN=45&#87018305



LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL

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pt 2 pg 48 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3137200&TPN=48&#87931287

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pt 18 pg 68 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3137200&TPN=68&#89523582




my first FF LOVE STORY

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2440139


second FF KYA JODI YAAR


third FF ANOTHER LOVE STORY


fourth FF DIL THOH PAGAL HAI

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3018065


fifth ff KISMAT CONNECTION

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3260769

sixth ff SOUND OF LIFE

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3170575


YEH PYAR HAI

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642#90378955


Edited by niki_rbo - 19 August 2013 at 9:16pm

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Wow Nikki u wrote an os 
 it's awesome 
  Khanak said i love u bt become nervous LOL
 shaan ask for kheer n make khanak more nervous n he njoy it  
Poor khanak !!!
 she cut veggies instead of fruits LOL n shaan was just looking at her 
  Thanx to dadi they move to their room  
    khanak hug shaan from back n he was shocked 
 shaan don't under estimate khanak LOL
 shaan told her to take time n ask a place she love most 
 n Khanak OMG!!!  
 she mention Dhulwadi hehehheheheh n champakROFL 
  khanak wil never miss to mention her Dhulwadi 
 They kiss force full n both started to cough  LOL
 dheere yaar kya karraheho dono LOLWink
 have patient Wink
  n finally shaan n khanak become one 
 shanak n their beautiful world Day Dreaming
 love it Nikki 
 please try to write more os 
  its was awesome 
 
  

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 7:39am | IP Logged
nice OS niki...very well written...
khanak is tensed after saying I love u...hehe so cute...
shanak kissing & coughing...Embarrassed
lovely...keep writing...
between are there any plans for another FF???


Edited by maneesha28889 - 08 August 2012 at 7:39am

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged

nikiii loved it loved it loved it...Big smileLOL

aweee tears weere flowing fm deir eyes after confession...khanak was tensed n instead of fruit she was cutting veg...LOLLOL poor girl was soo nervous in front of shaan...

dining part was too gud...Smile loved shanak talk..shaan was asking her fav think min dhulwadi..LOL n she said champak...LOLLOL n she kept on talking n shaan shut her up...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed OMG khanak did d same.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed n coughingROFL...superbly written...ClapClap

come up wid mreee...waititng...WinkLOLBig smile

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged

hi niki Big smile how r u niki? missed u so much

its awesome i loved it very much if u can write such amazing ff's then obviously u can write an os too and trust me it was wonderful

hahaha the kiss and then coughing was so sensual man do write more

btw r u going to write another ff? any idea hmmm waiting for ur writing again till then continue with writing these os its great fun reading whatever u write

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Hey nikiSmile
awesome OSStar
loved it to the core, actually i was laughing, after the kiss both of them coughedLOL
ha ha ha, niki please do continue writingSmile
waiting for another hot OSEmbarrassedSmile

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged
wow amazing OS...
loved it...
loved their romance...Embarrassed

please do continue writing niki...

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heer_85

Wow Nikki u wrote an os 
 it's awesome 
  Khanak said i love u bt become nervous LOL
 shaan ask for kheer n make khanak more nervous n he njoy it  
Poor khanak !!!
 she cut veggies instead of fruits LOL n shaan was just looking at her 
  Thanx to dadi they move to their room  
    khanak hug shaan from back n he was shocked 
 shaan don't under estimate khanak LOL
 shaan told her to take time n ask a place she love most 
 n Khanak OMG!!!  
 she mention Dhulwadi hehehheheheh n champakROFL 
  khanak wil never miss to mention her Dhulwadi 
 They kiss force full n both started to cough  LOL
 dheere yaar kya karraheho dono LOLWink
 have patient Wink
  n finally shaan n khanak become one 
 shanak n their beautiful world Day Dreaming
 love it Nikki 
 please try to write more os 
  its was awesome 
 
  

thanks a lot heer...thank u so much yaar...Smile

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