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Teri Meri Love Story KR FF Pt 23 Pg 140 (Page 24)

kritzzz_ArSha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
nice one

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Wow. . . . .
Awsome update. . . .
Realy xcitd 4 mission kriya. . . .
kuhu_Arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
awsummm update luv it,,,,,,,,,
kria pecked rey awieee,,,,,,,rey ki toh lucky day chal rhi hai
waiting 4 nxt chappy update soon
sumimita IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
keep it up
kriyansh19 Senior Member

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
As always cute !
Very cute n lovely update ..!
It feels lyk reading it again n again ..! Jst loved it ..!
Update d next part soon ..!
Do pm me plz !
OneLove_S.W Goldie

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Part 12 A
That evening i waited for was 6*00 she dint turn hour passed...i was getting restless...suddenly the bell rang and i went and opened the door...i saw her...and gave a smile to her...she also returned a smile...
I-You are late!!!...
Kria-I was stuck somewhere!!...
She was looking a little down...we went and started our rehersals...we were dancing having eye locks...i wanted to execute my plan...but suddenly kria holds her head...she was about to fall but i caught her right on time...
I-Are you okay kria???...
Kria looked at me...she hugged me tight...
I-Whats the matter??...
If that moron had again done something he is dead!!!...AngryAngry...
Kria was quiet...she was just crying...
I-Agar uss moron ne kuch kia hain toh bolo mujhe...meinn ussko chodunga nahi!!!...
Kria broke the hug and looked at me...she was not feeling sat down...i decided to take her out for a walk or something...
I-If you not feeling ookay sitting here...chalo bahar chalte hain...their we can talk...
Kria smiled...and we both went out...i held her hand...she looked at me and smiled...i cupped her face with one hand...
I-Kya hua kria??...
Kria-Its that guy...
Urgh...that karta hain duniya ki saari gaaliyan usse de dun...*thats what i want to give shivamTongue but zyaada gaaliyan nahi aati!!!...Tongue*...
I-What the hell did he do??...
Kria-Aaj jab mein ghar pahochi mom was angry and slapped me...i was confused to the core...phir unhone mujhe kamre mein band kar dia aur mera phone bhi mujhse cheen lia...baad mein voh lunch lekar aayi tab unhone mujhe bahot tumhe jitni chut di jaayi utni tum bigad rahi ho...bahot kuch sunnaya...jab maine kaha ki aap aisa kyun bol rahe ho toh unhone mujhe kaha ki unhe uss ladke ne bataya ki mein usske saath kya karti hun!!!!...and ussne yeh bhi kaha ki mein tumhaare saath...*rey ke saath*...usse zyaada karti hun!!!!...*i hope you guys understood i dont wanna write it*...
I was shocked...and angry at that moron!!!!...
Kria-Maine mom ko sach batane ki koshish ki but voh sunne ko hi raazi nahi thi...aur chali gayi...mein ro padi...phir jab paani lene uthi toh i fell on the ground...faint hogayi thi!!!...jab uthi toh dekha swayam side mein tha...and doctor check kar raha tha mujhe...ussne kaha ki stress ki wajha se faint hoyi...phir tablet deke chala gaya...swayam ne mujhe kaha ki he told mom the truth and abhi voh gayi hain police ke paas uss ladke ki complain likhwaane...police aayi and started asking me question...tabh tak 6 baj gaye the...phir unke jaane ke ne mujhe bola rest lene lekin mujhe practise ke liye...
I dont know why but i slapped her before she could finish...i was damm angry...Angry
Sorry yahan khatam karna scolding me!!!...i'll update part b tommorw after coming from school!!!...waise dusre part mein mission kria start hoga...jootas and chapal all are allowed...pms i'll send tommorw!!!...

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kuhu_Arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
unresBig smile

it was awsummm update,,,,,,,dat moron shivam arhhAngryAngry
bt y rey slapd kria,,,eagerly waiting 4 nxt prt

Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 23 August 2012 at 11:37am

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