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Teri Meri Love Story KR FF Pt 23 Pg 140 (Page 20)

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
awesome...waiting 4 the party...

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 4:23am | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it
kriyansh holding hand ...soo cute
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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
wow
awesome update
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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyaanshfreva

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No updates till monday!!!!...hurted my hand...
Take care of your hand Smile.

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Thanks for all your comments...my hand is completely fine now...so writing the next part...
 
~Part 10~
 
 
I reached her house at 8*00...and rang the bell...she opens the door...she was wearing a beautiful black cocktail dress...*the one which she wore in shivam's party and rey was also wearing the same*...
Kria-Hey...your late!!!!...
Oh ya i was 15minutes late...and i thought she would be damm angry...but she wasnt...
I-I am so sorry was struck in traffic...
Kria-Its okay...
I-Anyways your looking great!!!...
She was blushing a little...Blushing...and i was on cloud nine...so my compliements do effect her!!!...Big smile...
Kria-Thanks...
I-Chale???...
Kria-Chalo..
She closed the door...and we sat at the back seat...we were quiet...an awkward silence...at last we reached their...we enter...
Swayam-At last you guys are here i thought you both have decided not to come!!!...
Vicky-Sach mein...ya phir aane nahi waale the??...
I-Dude...aisa kuch nahi hain...i was late in picking kria up...
Swayam-Teri himmat kaise huyi meri behen ko wait karwaane ki...
We all burst out laughing...now viha and swaron went to dance...when suddenly kria caught my hand i was happy as well as shocked...i look at her and saw that she had a scared expression...i followed her gaze and saw that she was looking at a guy...
I-Hey...everything okay??...
Kria-Voh ladka...voh wahi hain...the rumor guy...
I-What!!!...
Oh...how badly i want to punch him...
I-Ignore that moron...aur chalo...
Kria smiled...we both went to the dance floor and were dancing...the party went on...
Kria-Oh freak!!!!!...i left my cell in the car...mein abhi aati hun...
I-Okay!!!...but come fast...
Kria-Kay!!!!...
I waited for her...10 minutes passed she dint come...i got tensed and came out just to see her fallen down crying...and that moron coming close to her...i saw a cut on her hand..he was about to kiss her when i pulled him back...and punched him on his face...kria saw me...i was hitting that guy...anger quite visible on my face...the guy ran away...*if you want to imagine the guy imagine him as shivam LOL*...kria hugged him...she was crying...i gently stroked her hair...
I-Kria...he is gone...dekho...
Kria calmed after a while and broke the hug...i took my jacket off and mady her wear it...kria gave me a smile...i wiped her tears...she then noticed my hand bleeding...which i dint bother to notice...
Kria-Rey!!!...ur hand is bleeding...wait...
She went to the car and bought the first aid kit...and started bandaging my hand...and was giving me a lecture...which i dint listen to as i was busy stairing at my angel...
Kria-Rey...thanks...
I-Thanks kyun??...
Kria-Agar tum nahi aate time par toh...
I put my hand on her mouth...
I-Aage mat bolo...i will never let anything happen to you!!!...get that??...
Kria lowers her eye lashes and nods...i smiled and removed her hand...we went in...and viha and swaron surround us...
Neha-Kaha the tum dono???...
Sharon-Rey tumhe yeh chot kaise lagi???...
Swayam-Kria tumhara haath bhi neela pad gaya hain kya hua??...
Vicky-Rey kuch bol!!...
Kria-Usse kuch bolne doge tabhi bolega na!!!...
I laugh...i once look at kria as if asking permission and she nods...i tell them what happened...
Swayam-What the hell..i'll seriously kill that guy...
Kria-Chod de...he got what he deserved!!!...
Swayam-Thanks dude...
I-Iss mein thanks ka kya hain!!!...
We all laugh...then the party went on...after that...kria and me again went to the car and sat...i was looking out when suddenly i felt my shoulder a little heavy...i turned and saw my angel sleeping and her head had fallen on my shoulder...i smiled...and put my hand on top of hers...and again look out...hmm...reyaansh singhaania your lucky days have started!!!!...
 
Hope you all liked it...SmileSmile...for pms please add me in yout buddy list and thanks to lovely7010 the name of the ss...*sorry dont know ur real name*...


Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 20 August 2012 at 4:07am

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged
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Yippiee!!!!

again im d first 1 2 comment and dat too widout pm

Awsm update

well agar wo ladka shivam hai toh

sone pe suhaaga

mast dhulai ki hogi rey ne uski

Continue soon pls


Edited by abhiyakreya - 20 August 2012 at 4:29am
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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Wow another amazing update yaar nice rey ka to aajkal every day gone lucky
Get wel soon
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wow nice update.
and name is amazing.
thanks for pm and how is ur hand.
take care of ur  self

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