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Teri Meri Love Story KR FF Pt 23 Pg 140 (Page 137)

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congratulation for ur 1 year of this ff... 
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Chck pg 139

Part 23

Kria woke up the next day ,and sleepily rubbed her eyes when she realised , rey had told her something . She got up and dashed out to the lawn and saw that it was decorated beautifully . She was shocked . When she heard.



She turned and saw her family and her group , she realised that she had forgotten her own birthday . She was really happy . She hugged them . All gave her gifts . Now kria's parents had left.

"Guys! I never thought ki tum sab mere liye itna sab karoge!"

Kria said in joy .

"Correction , yeh sab rey ka idea tha."

Simmi told kria . Kria looked at rey , she smiled and hugged him tightly.

"You are the best boyfriend anyone can get! I love you so so much rey!"

"I love you too angel."

"But where is my birthday gift?"


Kria asked him cutely , rey bites his tongue.

"Yeh surprise ke chakkar mein , i forgot to buy a gift!"

Kria's smile disappeared for just a second but it returned back.

"So what! Mere liye yeh surprise hi mera gift hain!"


Kria said genuinely . Rey looked at her and kissed her forehead.

"Angel ka birthday ho aur usska muffin uss ke liye kuch na laaye , is that possible? Naa! Close your eyes."

Kria did , and rey bought a box in front of her kria opened it and saw a new pair of heels.

"Rey? You bought them for me!"

She was really happy as they were exactly like her favourite one which broke yesterday .

"Arre wait . Who told you to open your eyes."

Kria closed her eyes keeping the box aside , another box came in her hand .

"Ab khol sakti ho angel."

Kria did and excitedly opened the box, inside the box was a dress , few accessories . Kria hugged him tightly.

"Thank you so so much rey! I love them."

All smiled . Rey pecked her forehead .


All reached college , kria was with swayam today . They were laughing and enjoying . Rey was doing some work , when taani came.


Rey looked up and faked a smile.

"Yes taani?"

"Voh , rey can you please help me with this , mujhe yeh samajh nahi aa raha!"

"Fine sit!"


Taani did , rey was explaining her , when taani purposely spilled the coffee she had on his shirt.

"Oops i am so sorry!"

She took the tissue and was wiping it.

"Taani i am fine! I'll change it!"

Taani did not listen . Kria came there . She saw that and giggled , showing him a thumbs up , she went to the counter to order a chocolate pastry . She came back.

"Taani! Ab saaf ho gayi usski shirt!"


Kria said.Taani turned and saw kria eating the pastry . Rey thanked her through his eyes.

"Kria! Mein aaya!"


He dashed off.

"Class 12th , girl ka naam Sameera tha."


Taani asked confused.

"Mera matlab hain 12th mein ek ladki ne aise hi rey ke paas aane ki koshish kit hi! And jaanti ho maine kya kia?"


"Uss ladki ki school uniform par pastry gira di! Poor her , ek toh voh jhuti pastry thi and then uniform bhi white thi. And taani tumne bhi aaj white pehna hain wow!"


Taani gulped and dashed off . Kria burst out laughing . The gang who had witnessed the scene burst out laughing . Rey came back , he saw kria laughing and was lost in her.

"Kya hua? Itni hassi?"


Kria told him and even he laughed .

"This means you were the girl jissne sameera par voh pheka tha?"

"What do you expect? Mere boyfriend ke saath flirt kar rahi thi voh."

"I never knew meri girlfriend mere liye possessive hain."

Kria smiled , and kissed his cheek . She went.


"I never knew meri girlfriend mere liye possessive hain!"

The gang said in a teasing tone while rey blushed.



Kria was in the fire escape , when her phone beeped.

"I am back kria ghai."

Kria stared at the message and understood it was sent by jay.

"Oh , ghar zarur aana jay! Tujhe ghar mein jutte thode kache ande , ek do dande , aur tomatoes  se bahot acchi maar padegi . You will enjoy it! Looser!"

She replied back.

"I never knew mein tumhare liye itna matter karta hun ki tumne phat se guess kar lia yeh kaun hain!"

"Aise ghatiya aur ghisse pitte lines tum jaisa kamina hi de sakta hain!"

"Thanks for the compliment! And happy birthday!"

"You are so not welcome! And abhi tak din accha tha , ab tumne wish kar dia na toh yuck! Touchwood , i don't care."

"Whatever! Just beware!"


Kria rolled her eyes . Rey came in.

"Kria! What are you doing here?"

"Rey! Dekho kiska message hain!"

Kria showed him the message , rey faked a smile at her . Jay meant danger for kria , and he knew this message was not to scare kria , but jay really meant it .

"Kria! Jay paagal hain ignore him!"

"I know that rey."


She hugged him . He did not mean any of these words . He did not wanna scare kria , so he kept quiet and decided to talk to swayam about this.

"Kria! Bye dear! Aaj shaam ko ready ho jaana!"

Kria nods.



Rey told swayam .

"Your intuition is right i guess! Jay is a jerk! Kria pehle bhi kidnap ho chuki hain! Now let's just leave her alone at any point of time."

Rey nods.

"If that jay, even tries to touch her once , I will kill him!"

"We will kill him dude!"

Reyam smiled at each other.



Evening came ,kria was sitting in her room , she had changed into the dress which rey had given her and wore a bracelet . She heard the car's honk and looked out of the window and saw rey's car. She was going down when her phone rang.

"Kria! Mujhe thoda late hojaayega jaan!"

"Rey? Tum toh bahar hi ho!"

"Nahi! Mein ghar se nikla bhi nahi hun! Listen bahar mat jaana! Jab mein pahochunga tab i'll call you.Voh i sent my driver!To scare you"

"Mujhe khamkha dara dia tumne! Gande!"

"Arre sorry meri jaan! I am coming!"

Kria blushed .

"I love you muffin."

"I love you too angel."


Rey cuts the call , and sighed.

"That jay , i will kill him. Aaj toh kria ko convince kar lia!"

Rey changed as quickly as possible and left fr kria's house.


Kria looked outside , the car was still there . She knew rey had lied . And wanted to know who the person in the car was . She looked at her watch and slowly came out of the house . She went to the car , when someone puts a cloth on kria's mouth and took her inside the car.


Rey woke with a jerk! Damn he thanked god that it was just a dream . He had dosed off in the car , and his driver woke him up.

"Hum pahoch gaye!"

"Okay! Tum yaha se chale jao! I'll call you at the venue!"

The driver nods and went away. Rey called kria. Who came out , she was looking gorgeous. He hugged her.

"Rey , i am scared."

"Kya hua?"

He pulled her back.

"Tumne aaj tak mujhse jhut nahi bola! Toh aaj kyun rey? You have taken that jay thing seriously na?"

Rey nods . Kria pulled back , and smiled .

"Jab tak tum aur swayam mere saath ho! Tab tak mujhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi."


He kissed her forehead and took her inside . They had an amazing evening with each other. Rey booked a whole theatre for her . Kria was cuddled in rey's arms .

"This was my best birthday muffin!"

Rey kissed her cheek . And he finally dropped her .


The next day , kria was walking in the corridor with sharon , when she heard a voice.

"Hello kria!"

Kria turned and saw jay ,Sharon was shocked but kria smiled at him.

"Namaste jay bhaiya!"

Sharon giggled seeing jay's expression.

"Bhaiya mein toh aapko call karne hi waali thi! Raakhi aane waali hain , aur mujhe aapko raakhi band ni hogi na!"


Reyam came at that time , they saw that and were going to hit jay but Sharon stopped them .

"Excuse me?"

"Ek second rukiye."

She took out the rakhi.

"Ab kya pata rakhshabandhan ke din mein aapse milun ya na milun?"


She took his hand and tied the rakhi.

"Aajse aap officially mere bhaiya ho! Toh mein aajse aapko bhaiya hi bulaungi!"

"The hell!"


He took the rakhi and threw it.

"Ab phekne se kuch nahi hoga bhaiya! Ab meine mann hi mann aapko mera bhai maan lia hain na! Ab aap toh mujhe gift dene se rahe! Toh mein kyun na aapko thode gifts de dun!"


She took out her heel and hits him hard with it , shareyam burst out laughing!

"You will pay for this!"

Reyam came in front of her.

"Ek no ka bikhari hain tu jay!"

Swayam said. Kria giggled.

"Jab dekho you will pay for this karta rehta hain! Uff! Yaar bata de tujhe kitne paise chahiye! You know i believe in charity."

Rey said . Jay rolled his eyes , and went from there .


The four look at each other and burst out laughing.


Hope u liked it.. :)

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Nxt update on new thread...:P

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wow... this is really nyc...
loved it...
pls update it soon 
thnks for the pm..
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HAHHAhaaa ishii...
Too awsummm... especialyy 
JAi BHAIYAA hahaha maannn..
rakhiii scene was superr duperr hit... <3
updatee sooon... 

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