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Teri Meri Love Story KR FF Pt 23 Pg 140 (Page 107)

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Hey I read your ff and it's aaawwweeesssooommmeee!!!!!!!

I loved it Smile

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updateee eee eee eee eee!!!
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Part 22


Days passed everything was really going smooth in kriyaansh's life . They were two people madly and deeply in love with each other with immense trust on each other.

One day kria was in the girls locker room when she heard taani talking to her friends.

"You know sanjana , rey is so caring! Pata hain kal na mujhe mere foot par lag gayi thi and rey mujhe apne arms mein uthakar medical room le gaye . Haye aur pata hain jab mein ro rahi thi na toh rey ne mujhe gale bhi lagaya ."

"That is so sweet taani , pata hain mujhe toh lagta hain ki voh kria ke saath issliye hain cause voh swayam ki behen hain pyaar toh tujhse hi karta  hain!"


Kria made an O with her face. She took out her phone , and called rey keeping it on speaker.

"Hey muffin."

"Hey jaan kya hua?"

"Tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni?"

"Of course karni hain."

"Hmm , mujhe laga ki tumhe taani se hi baat karna pasand hain mein toh kuch nahi hun just swayam's sister."

"You realised it real soon kria! Mein toh tumse tang aa chuka hun!"


Taani smirked. But rey continued.

"Ullu! Jab dekho jhut mut ka jhagda karne mein maza aata hain . Chalo haan fine meine kal tumhe jhut bola about me being with Sharon . Sorry na! I know you hate taani issliye."

"Arre baba i understand muffin , ab bechaari har baar sirf girti rehti hain , toh i understand taras kha kar help kar di hogi tumne , its fine . I am proud of you rey! Tum bahot accha kaam kar rahe ho poor and helpless ki madat karke!"

Rey burst out laughing.

"Tum paagal ho kria!"

"Aur iss paagal kria ko paagal bhi tumne kia hain!"

"Don't accuse me when you are at fault . Tumne toh mujhe itne saalon se dhang se sone tak nahi dia hain you are always there in my dreams. I love you so so much kria."

"I love you too rey , itna ki agar tumhe kho dia toh."

"Ssh jo kabhi ho hi nahi sakta usse soch kar kya fayda , i will always be there for you no matter what kria . Till my last breath."


Kria was quiet .


"I love you so so much rey and i am glad that i have a guy like you in my life."

Rey knew she was in tears.

"Arre baba ab mein na sacchi yeh lovey dovey stuff baat karna chod dunga if that brings tears in my angel's eyes."

Kria giggles and wiped her tears.

"How do you know me so well rey?"

"Why do you trust me so much kria?"

"Cause i love you."

"That's what , pyaar mein khudh hi ek dusre ko samajh jaate hain log."


The girls entered the locker room and saw taani's angry face.

"Rey mein tumse baad mein baat karti hun."

"Fine angel."

Kria smiled and cuts the call . She turned towards taani and faked a smile.

"Taani , agar mein chahun na toh tum do second mein iss college ke bahar hogi , lekin i won't do that cause mujhe charity karne mein bahot maza aata hain!"

"Kria charity ek limit tak honi chahiye yaar , kuch kuch log phir sar pad char jaate hain."

Sharon said and they both high-fived bursting out in fits of laughter , the other girls all giggled seeing taani's expression.


On the other hand rey cuts the call and saw the guys.

"Pyaar mein khudh hi ek dusre ko samajh jaate hain!"

The guys said in a teasing manner. Rey smiled.

"Dude , give us some tips na!"

"What do you mean nilesh?"

"Dekh humari girlfriends are always ever ready to doubt us! And your girl friend she trusts you alot."

"Ab nilesh , mein teri tarha ladkiyon ko ghurta nahi rehta! Toh kria ko insecure hone ki zarurat hi nahi padti . Lekin tum teeno (nilesh , amar and bharat) mauka milta nahi ki dusro ke saath flirt karna shuru!"

"Baat toh ek dum sahi hain dude! Yeh teeno na!"

Vicky and swayam said laughing .


The girls were waiting for the guys in the rehearsal hall. Kria got up.

"I am bored! Chalo na girls aaj club chalte hain!"

"Haan nice idea kria!"

Kria smiled at neha.

"Great kria!"

"Sharon neha tum dono toh maan gaye yeh teeno ko kya hua?"

"Are you sure kria? I mean the boys."

"Arre simmi chill , ladke bhi toh masti karte hain why not us!"



The girls finally agreed . The guys entered and all were calmly talking when kria.


"Yes dear?"

"Kya mein aur baaki girls aaj club jaa sakte hain?"

"Rey se kya permission maang rahi hain tera bhai baitha hua hain idhar!"

"Wahi toh na swayam , rey toh maan bhi jaaye tum nahi maante!"

Swayam laughed.

"Chali jaa!"

"Sacchi swayam?"


Kria hugged him in joy.

"Thank you so much!"



"11 se pehle you are coming back!"


She pouted ,swayam pulled her cheek.

"Yeh mujh par kaam nahi karega , 11 means 11!"



Kria smiled.

"Angel. Tum log kaha jaa rahi ho?"


"Bolo toh."

"Kria mat bolna , yeh log waha aa jaayenge."

Sharon said.

"No angel hum nahi aayenge i swear , lekin pick karne aayenge . Tum log akele wapas nahi aane waali."

"Oh aisa bolo na rey! Mujhe laga tum log aajaoge!"


Rey laughed and nods in a no .

"Abhi decide nahi kia hain muffin , mein message kar dungi . Pakka!"


Rey nods.



The girls were waiting for the boys to come and trying to calm kria down who was crying . 3 cars stopped , reyam came out.


The two ran to her .

"Rey , swayam!"

She hugged them , reyam look at Sharon and neha , who blinked their eyes saying its nothing serious , they sighed.

"Kya hua angel?"

"Yeh club bahot ganda tha!"

"Kyun kria?"

"Dekho na meri favourite heel tut gayi!"


Reyam look at kria in shock.

"Aur yeh sab uss jerk ki wajha se hua."


"Andar club mein voh ladka bolta girls can't dance! Toh meine dance karke dekhaya aur dance karte karte heel tut gayi meri!"


Reyam look at each other and burst out laughing. Kria pouts hitting them.

"Kria mein tere liye aisi ditto heel laaunga! Promise!"

"Pakka sam?"



Kria smiled . And all went .



Kria was sitting in her room , when rey's call came . Kria picked it up.


"Angel! Kal subha jab uthogi na toh apne lawn mein jaana!"

"Kyun rey?"

"Meine bola na bas chali jaana! You will get a surprise!"

"Kaisa surprise?"

"Hain koi!"

"Rey ab mein soungi kaise!"

"Baat karo mujhse phir thodi der mein neend aa jaayegi."


Kriyaansh spoke , and then kria cuts the call sleeping peacefully thinking about the surprise which rey had in store for her.




Hope you liked it .


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kriapatel Goldie

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Love the updte
kria rey pe kitna trust karti he
ye dekh kar acha laga
n that taani uska sara plan flop ho gaya
just like her
n in last kria ki heels tutgai
tht was so funny
just love it
n rey is going to give her surperies
what is tht?
waiting to know it
Madhu_ArSha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Superb awsome update. . . .
Haiyee. . .KR R SOO Cute. . .
And Kriya. . .
Wow m just in love with her character here. . . .
Pinkpearly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 2:55am | IP Logged
wow awsum update
luv it
pinkypanrocks Senior Member

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
kr are so nice...
awesom update...Smile

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