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VirMan FF:Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar (on-going)

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged

Os:Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar

 
Index
Part 1-Page 1
Part 2-Page 2
Part 3-Page 3
Part 4-Page 5
Part 5-Page 6
Part 6-Page 7
Part 7-Page 9
 
 
Summary...
Well this is just a lil bit connected to the show basically it's a totally new love story of Virman and the beginning of Virika :D
Characters
Same characters as the show but I would just like to give a small intro about Virat and Maanvi

Main Characters:
Virat
Well,Virat is very unsocial,caring(only for his family) and a very helpful boy he lives in Mumbai with his family and goes to college there. He doesn't believe in love at all. He thinks that pyaar vyaar ki kahaani sab jhooth hai.

But on the other hand we have,

Maanvi
Maanvi is the exact opposite of Virat.She is a very fun-loving,sweet and social girl. She lives in Mumbai too and goes to the same college as Virat. She is a total love freak. She believes in love,relationships,love marriages etc.

Part 1
In Maanvi's house:

Jeevika:Mannu aaj tera college ka first day hai na All The Best!
Beeji:Arrey all the best se kaam thodi chalta hai??..Jeevika beta      jaake Dahi Shakar leke aa..
Jeevika hurries to the kitchen gets it and puts a spoonfull in Maanvi's mouth..
Maanvi:Thank you Di :D
Badi Beeji:Arrey chudail yaha aake aashirvaad toh le??
Maanvi:Badi Beeji aap kab aayi??
Maanvi goes to Badi Beeji takes her blessing and says good-bye to everyone and rushes out of the house...
Maanvi to the auto-driver.
Maanvi:Bhaiiyaa Swami Vivekanand College jaayenge kya??
Auto-driver:Betiye..
Maanvi gets in..
Meanwhile in Virat's house:
Viren goes to Virat's bedroom
Viren:Virat ooth 8 baj gaye hai tujhe college jaana hai...sab log hall mein wait kar rahe hai..
Virat gets up as fast as he can
Virat:Kya??? 8 baj gaye hai??? Aap thoda jaldi nahi jaga sakte the??
Viren:Abhi aur time waste mat kar jaake ready ho ja..
Viren goes out and waits with the rest of the family...Virat gets ready and goes out
Dadaji:Virat aaj tumhara college ka pehla din hai hamari dua tumhari saath hai..
Virat touches his feet for blessings,then he goes to Swamini Bua and touches her feet for blessings,Then he goes upto Inder Chachu and Kadambari Chachi
Kadambari Chachi:Oyee Virat...Best of Luck
Inder Chachu:All The Best Virat...
Virat:Thanks Chachu,Thank Yoou Chachi.. :)
Viren:Virat mere Bhaai All The Best..
Virat:Thanks Bhaai...Bhaaai Maa kaha hai?? 

Viren:Woh Bazaar gayi hai..
Virat:Okkay Bhaai..
Virats bids goodbye to everyone and goes to the car
Virat:Driver,Swami Vivekanand College jaana..
Driver:Theekh hai Virat Saab...

So eventually they both reach the college and co-incidently are involved in the same Computer Course..Maanvi reaches a few minutes earlier than Virat and tries to make friends by socializing..Whereas when Virat reaches the class he just goes and grabs a seat..And sits quietly...Manvi found this behaviour unusually strange she thought that he should socialize so she goes upto him and their convo begins..
Maanvi:Hi!..I'm Maanvi
Virat:Good for You..
Maanvi:Arrey Bhaai tum to ajeeb ho apna naam toh batao...
Virat:Bhaai nahi the name's Virat.
Maanvi:Virat what's with the attitude??
Virat:Bacchpan se hai...You gotta problem with that??
Maanvi:Chill Virat!

She grabs a seat next to him and gets ready for the class..That's when the bell goes Triiinggg...and the teacher enters..
Teacher:Hello students mera naam hai Tanya Sharma aur main iss saal aapki Computer teacher rahungi...
The guy sitting behind Maanvi's name is Karan and he says...
Karan:Arrey waah teacher aap toh badi hot ho...
The whole class giggles..
Teacher:Batameezi ki bhi had hoti hai Angry
And then she goes to Virat's desk and asks him
Teacher:Aur aap nahi hasenge??
Virat:Nahi Miss...mujhe ye sab funny nahi lagta...
Teacher:Atleast koi toh samajh daar hai mere class mein...
Maanvi:Maam hum kuch kam nahi hai...aazma ke dekh lijiye...
Teacher:Ok,students so we start the class with the most basic part of the computer..It's physical apperance...

And soo the class goes on...During te break Virat goes to the canteen buys a sandwhich and goes and sits on a bench all alone...Maanvi wants to have some fun with him so she stalks him when she sees him sitting on the bench alone she goes and sits next to him..
Maanvi:Akele akele kya kar rahe ho Virat??
Virat:Aaagghhh mera peecha karna chod do..
Maanvi:Kyun???

Virat gets up and goes to class...Maanvi follows him there too..
Virat:Ooohhh you've so had it from me right now
Maanvi:Have I or have you??

And while he crosses her she trips him and laughs...
Virat just goes to his seat and sits quietly...And class begins...When college gets over Maanvi searches for an auto but she doesn't find one soo Virat goes to her and asks her if he could give her a lift...

Virat:Awww nataunki ko auto nahi mil rahi hai??
Maanvi:Huhummm
Virat:Aaaja betja lift deta hoon..

Maanvi gets in his car and says Bhaiyaa Borivali,I.C Colony mein leke jaana please..
Driver:Ji Madam..
Maanvi:Ab tumhein kya hua??...Suddenly sadu se Saint Kabir???
Virat:Just Chup bheto aur apne ghar ka intezaar karo..
Maanvi:Chalo wapas Sadu ...no problem.
Driver:Madam ji aapka stop aa gaya...

So when she reaches home she runs and hugs Jeevika
Jeevika:Maannu aa gayi toh kaisa tha college ka first day??
Maanvi:Bahut achha di..
Jeevika:Acchaaa kya kya hua??

Maanvi explains everything to Jeevika even the Virat story..Jeevika starts laughing..
Jeevika:Theekh hai Maannnuu tayaar hoke nicchhe aaja main khaana laga deti hoon
Maanvi:Okkay Di :D

Maanvi gets changed and goes downstairs and begins to eat...Meanwhile in Virat's house:
Swamini Bua:Virat beta tum aa gaye kaisa tha college ka pehla din??
Virat:Bua pucchhooo hi mat...sablog kitne masti-khor hai aisa lagta hai ki woh log padne nahi masti karne aaye hai..
Kadambari Chachi:Acchaa?? Virat jaake fresh ho jaaoo mein tumhare liye khaana lagati hoon...

So Virat gets changed goes down and begins to eat...After they both finish eating they both go to their laptops and get on Facebook
Maanvi:Wow! College se dus friend requests..
Virat thinks Mere koi dost kyun nahi bane??? Kya mein anti-social hoon??...Mujhe lagta hai mujhe Maanvi se dosti karni chahiye sooo he types Maanvi Chaudhary in the search bar clicks on her profile and adds her as a friend...
Maanvi:Arrey Sadu ka friend request??...Dekhte hai what he's upto??...
Sooo she confirms him...
Virat starts the chat

Virat:Hi Maanvi!
Maanvi:Hi Sadu..suddenly dost ban ne ka idea tumhare mahaan dimag mein kaha se aaya??
Virat:Jab mein ghar pahuncha toh maine bahut socha tab jaake maine dost ban ne ka faisla kiya...
Maanvi:Mujhe tumhare iss faisle par naaz hai Virat..
Virat:Hahaha...Naaz hai...badi aayi..
Maanvi:Acchhaaa toh aapko jokes samajh mein aate hai??
Virat:Madam mein koi Arnav Singh Raizada nahi hoon jo har baat ko seriously le..
Maanvi:Acchaa sooo u watch that serial too??
Virat:Who doesn't??
Maanvi:Okkay Virat kal milte hain i gtg..
Virat:Theekh hai Maanvi Bye...C you tomorrow :D

So they both log off..And very soon it gets 10 and Viren in Virat's house and Jeevika in Maanvi's house force Virat and Maanvi to go to sleeep...And soo 1 day gets over...

I gtg now...but I'll update the next part in an hour or soo...sorry i know that this part wasn't that great but there will be more romance and nok-jhoks in the next parts coming...
Please Comment...and if u want me to pm you when the next part is updated please post t in the comment... :D



Edited by kushalkidewaani - 15 December 2012 at 1:07am

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Nice one! Love the ASR part! ;)
PM me when you update it! :)


Edited by VirMan_Ria - 08 August 2012 at 5:20am
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hey awesum do update n plz pm me
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Good start dear
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nyc start  dearSmile
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Awesome update Plzzz pm me wn u update
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Fantastic start continue soon dearThumbs Up
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Awesome start..Pm me when you continue! ThanksSmile

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