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FF: I wanna grow old with you Part 28 Page 105 (Page 87)

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jmehta1957

[QUOTE=RaYaKapoor]Heya guys.. This one.. from me.. Had promised someone that i'll start a new one soon if my wish is fulfilled.. And this, to keep up that promise..
Hope u guys like it.. Will be waiting for ur views on this..

Part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=3
Part 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=8
Part 3:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=12
Part 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=17
Part 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=22
Part 6: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=26
Part 7: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=29
Part 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=31
Part 9: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TI
D=3136903&TPN=35

Part 10: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=38
Part 11: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=41
Part 12:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=44
Part 13: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=48
Part 14: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=50
Part 15: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=55
Part 16:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=58
Part 17: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=63
Part 18: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=66
Part 19:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=69
Part 20:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=73
Part 21: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=76
Part 21(continues): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=77
Part 22
:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=79
Part 23 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=84
Part 24 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3136903&TPN=87



Character Sketch:



Ram: A 30 year old guy.. Ambitious about
his dream' Son of a Richie businessman.. but not close to business even in his
dream.. He wants to be a successful Architect.. And settle down abroad.. his
dream is NYC.. His family however is against this dream of his..



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Priya: A 28 year old.. Very much passionate
about her work.. Loves books.. they are her best friends.. and works as a
teacher in TOFEL classes.. She loves kids and spends time at an NGO whenever
she's free.. She's a disciplinarian and a cleanliness freak.. wants everything
to be kept in place..



</p>

Sudheer: Priya's dad.. H's brought her up
single handedly.. He's a father, friend philosopher and guide to her.. he loves
his daughter and listens to whatever she says.. there are no secretsbetween
them.. He's Priya's best friend..



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Amarnath: Ram's father, the rich
businessman who rose to heights on his own.. He came from rags to riches with
his efforts.. Loves his family to the core and wants Ram to follow him in
bsiness..



</p>

Krishna: The sweet bubbly mum of Ram.. She
loves her family a lot and can do anything for them.. Especially close to Ram
and He shares all his feelings with her.. She wants him to join the family
business too..



</p>

Natasha: Ram's sister.. Loves him a lot.. so
does he.. They love spending time with each other and watching movies
together.. or playing games.. She's her father's pet'



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Dadi: Ram's dadi.. The pillar of the
house.. The brainy one who solves all the problems at home.. Anything happens,
all rush to her to get it solved.. She has only one thing in mind.. to get her
grandson married.. see him settled..



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Madhu: Ram's bua.. A divorcee.. staying with the
Kapoor's.. Ram loves her a lot.. She's practically brought up Ram.. Seen him grow..
He goes to her with all his problems.. He tells her things he might hesitate to
tell his mom..



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More characters as the story unveils..





<p><font size="5">The story sketch:</font> <p><p><p><p><p><p><p><p><p>



The story of two adorable people, Ram and Priya,
who have their own aspirations and goals in life. Ram dreams of making it big
one day in the U.S in the field of Architecture,Priya herself has lived in
hostels all her life, away from her small family of just her father and has
been very independent and confident about her career moves and choices in life.
Both these individuals hold similar thoughts about marriage:
"Futile", "Pointless" and "Pressurising". They
have been dodging their respective families that think they are soon passing
the "marriageable age". In a turn of events, they find themselves
sitting opposite each other to please their families and to consider each other
for a life-long commitment. That is when both realize how they dislike the
concept of marriage and how they are not even in love, forget that, they do not
even like anything about each other!!! And finally how they end up falling for
each other'





nice update,continue soon



Hey.. Thanks for reposting the links...

Edited by RaYaKapoor - 18 March 2013 at 9:36am

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jmehta1957

nice story,looking forward to next update.




Thanks.. Glad u like it...
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 8:29am | IP Logged
PART 24

Priya shied and ran to their room.. Ram ran after her... In the room... Priya was siitting on the bed.. kind of blushing... Ram walking across the room...
R: Priya.. Priya sun rahi ho?? Kya natak thha woh.. Mai akele waha bole jaa raha hu no honeymoon no honeymoon.. Sab se dusmani mol rakhi h maine iss baat pe aur tum ne.. Tum ne ek hi jhatke me sare kiye par paani pher dia...
He sat on the bed next to her...
R: Kya hua hai bologi??
P: Ram... hum kyu nahi jaa sakte honeymoon pe... Imagine... Backwaters.. Greeney... Paani ke beech me ek boathouse.. Boathouse me hum dono... Aas pe shanti.. Koi nahi hume disturb karne ke lie... Aur uss boat ke kinare hum Titanic pose me.. Aap peeche.. aur aap se lagkar mai aap ke aage.. Kitna romantic hai na...
R: Do u need medical help... I mean... Tumhe na.. Wo.. Multiple personality disorder ho gaya hai... Le chalu kya psycatrist k paas...
Priya all of a sudden leaned on him.. Ram moved back..
R: Priya tumhe kahi sach me mujhse pyar toh nahi ho gaya..
Priya was looking deep into his eyes..
R: Kyu jana chahti ho HM par...
She kept on lookin at him..
R: Kuch...
Priya put her hands on his... Leaning a bit more... Ram gulped scared..
P: Hume HM pe jana padega Ram kyuki papa ne mere principal se baat kar li hai and mujhe 15 din ki chutti mili h ye baat papa ne maa ko call kar ke bata dia... ab hum kya bolenge.. chutti mili toh hai.. fir bhi hum nahi jaa rahe HM pe aisa bole kya??
She sat back straight.. Ram, Still speechless, just nodded in negative...
P: Waise bhi Ram.. its ok na.. hum apna yehi system chalu rakhenge.. Couch wala.. and udhr jake aap apna kaam karna mai apna kar lungi.. Kam se kam 15 fin hume ye newly wed happily married couple types toh behave nahi karna padega na...
R: Baat toh sahi hai.. Chalo theek hai.. Ye bhi kar k dekhte hai..
Priya grew serious again..
P: Udhar jake mere pyar vyar me mat pad jana haan Ram.. Pls...
And both started laughing...

The next morning.. Ram and His bua were sitting in the lawn...
R: Wierd baat nahi hai bua.. Sab shor sharabe se engagement karte hai.. humne ki.. sab zor shor se shaadi karte hai.. humne bhi ki.. Sab HM par jate hai isiliye hum bhi jaa rhe h..
Bua: Sach kahu toh ram.. Ye din jo hote hai na.. sabse zyada yaadgaar hote hai.. Mere aur tere fufaji k sare acche memories HM ke hi hai.. Nature ke godh me rehne ka maza hi kuch aur hai.. air aise me na tum apna aap ko bhul kar apne pyar par concentrate karte ho.. Unke baate me zyada jante ho.. I like the concept..
R: Bua aap bhi!! Matlab mujhe lag thha kam se kam aap humare sath hai... Its more of a western culture na bua... Hum kyu adopt kar rhe h..
Bua: Galat... Its not a western culture.. Its a concept originated in India.. Pehle ke zamane me log Shaadi ke baad Kuldevta ke darshan k lie jate thhe.. tab ek dusre ke sath waqt bitate thhe.. ek dusre ko jante thhe.. Aisa aya HM ka concept...
R: Is it..
Bua: Actually na HM ke naam ki b story hai.. Baad me sunaungi.. ab Court jana hai.. Bye..
R: Bye bua..
Bua left and ram sat there..
R: Ye concept agar India me originate hua na.. Im sure Kapoors ne hi kia hoga.. Isiliye toh zidd kar rhe h HM pe jao..

The same evening.. Ram & Priya met at a park after work..
P: So finally shaadi ho gayi.. ab HM.. Kal ke tickets bhi book ho gaye... Bas ab kal subh take off.. Kitni jaldi ho gyq na sab kuch...
R: Priya tumhe pata hai na.. ki tum bhi saari aurton ki trh ho.. Pyar m believe karne wali.. Bas tum apni feelings chupati ho... Maa ke samne jais tum ne kal behave kia.. uss se laga mujhe...
P: Naa ram.. Aisi baat nahi hai..
R: Jhut mat bolo..
P:Mai kabhi jhut nhi bolti...
R: Toh kya tum mere sath HM pe sach m jana chahti ho..
P: Ram.. isse aap acchi acting keh sakte hai...
R: Sach bolo yaar.. That was genuine.. But me.. im a born actor... Aise hi nahi clg me 5 saal in a row best actor award jeeta hai maine... But i can bet.. Tum kabhi stage pe chadi bhi nahi hogi...
P: Nahi.. kabhi aisa koi mauka hi nhi mila...
R: Rehne do yaar...
P:Aur zarurat b nhi padi.. kyu ki i was the best director of my clg...
Ram gave her a sarcastic smile and both std laughing...
R: Accha Priya... Hum Kerala jaa rahe hai na.. toh udr ki bhasha bhi toh aani chaiye...
P:Aapkoaati h malayalam??
R: Thodi boht.. Sunau..
P: Ha haan.. please...
R: Enikki veshakunnu..
P: Ye kya thha..
R: Mujhe bhook lagi hai...
P: Kisi bhi language me ye aap pehle sikhte hai na.. everything related to food..
R: Obviously na yaar... Par Priya.. ab tayar rehna.. salh ki bombardment hone wali h..
P: Aap b kuch kam nhi h.. Aap b free m aise hi sallh dete rehte h..
R: Mai kya keh raha hu...
priya went and sat on a nearby bench and started looking at him..
R: Kya hua?
P: Aapki salh sun ne k lie tayar hu..
R: Salh nhi yaar... suggestion h... Ek kaam kare.. Aaj raat kulfi party karte h.. sab ke salh ek sath hi mil jayenge... what say..
P: Good idea... Waise.. maine ek cheez observe ki h.. Kapoors har chotti chotti baat celebrate karte h.. nhi.. Its great.. awesome..
R: Priya.. ek baat puchu.. Ye newly wed ki khichai karne me logo ko itni kyu pasand hai.. arre humari lofe hai na.. Hum honemoon pe Kerala jaye. Canada ye ya naa bhi jaye.. iss se logo ko kya fark padta h..
P: Arre ye toh sansaar ka niyam hai.. 99% log aise hi hote hai..
Both grew silent for a while..
P: Apna kuch abnormal hai kya Ram!??
R: Arre abnormal hi toh hai.. screw dhela h humara.. Varna hum Contract marriage thode hi karte.. i mean come on.. Who does that.. Par Priya..Tumhe darr nahi lagta..
P: Kyu??
R: Matlab dekho.. Jab hum mile.. dono ek dusre se anjaan... Bilkul nahi pehchaante thhe ek dusre ko... Hum dono ke khayaaal milte thhe shadi k bare me.. Aur hum ne decide kia contract marriage karenge... Ok.. Meri choddo.. tum ladki ho.. Kabhi darr nahi laga.. ki.. Ki tum kisi anjaan insaan ke sath kamra share karne wali ho... wo bandha shadi ke baad aisa nahi nikla toh.. usne koi galt kaam kar ne ki koshish ki toh.. etc etc.. Ab tum mere sath Kerala b aane wali ho.. darr nahi lagta..
P: Nahi.. darr nahi lagta Ram.. Kiss baat se daru.. Ye sab na ram.. apne beliefs pe hota hai.. Aur mai kya... kisi ke sath bhi nahi reh sakti thi.. aap hao isiliye ye sab... I trust u..
Ram showed a bit of his attityde and looked at her grinning and raising his eyebrows..
P: matlab.. i mean u r a good company..
R: Ahahaha.. Dont change.. u jist agreed.. Tum ne abhi abhi kaha ki mai ek Genuine insaan hu.. Yaha sab ke samne u have accepted ki mai ekdum seedha sa sharif accha trustworthy guni ladka hu...
While Ram was praising himself, Priya got up and started qalking away..
R: Oh hello.. Priya listen...
They both reached Rams car...
P: Mana ram.. Ki chance mile toh bhi aap kisika fayda nahi utha sakte..
R: Haan.. Ek min.. Matlab??
P: Matlab aap darte hai...
R:oh hello.. Janti nahi ho tum mujhe.. mera gussa dekha nahi hai tumne.. mai abhi ke abhi tumhe itna dara sakta hu ki tum apna bags leke papa ke ghar chali jaogi..
Ram started sbowing a demo of his anger and Priya covered her face with the odhani and started laughing like crazy...
To an outsider, it would havr looked like they were fighting like crazy.. and thats how Vikram looked at it.. He was passing by when he saw Ram and Priya.. Ram was shouting and pointing hos hands as if asking Proya to get lost... Looking at this, he grew pensive and stood hiding.. he couldnt hear what they were talking.. all he could see was an animated Ram who looked furious..
Soon Ram got into the car & drove off...
Priya got into an auto and went on her way... Vikram too left...
Later at KM... Ram reached home.. And Vikram was aready present there..
V: Kiss baat pe ladai ki..
R: Kiss se?
V: Priya se aur kis se.. Ab chupa mat.. Maine sab kuch dekh lia... Dont u try to hide...
Ram grew tensed...
R: Sab dekh lia...
V: Dekh toh lia.. par kuch sunn nahi paya.. Par dekha maine ki tu Car me aur wo Rick me aayi..
Ram was now relieved... But he qcted sad..
R: Arre.. Sun na chaiye thha na.. Maine na tere aur chachu se sikhe hue baat ki maan rakh li... Kya hua na.. ki hum honeymoon k lie shopping kar rhe thhe.. toh madam ke nakhre shuru.. ye pehn na.. aisa karna.. waisa nahi karna.. arre hadh hai.. maine bhi suna dia usko ki uski har baat nahi chalegi...
V: Ram.. ye kya kar dia tu ne.. Arre tu ne galt jgh apni taakat dikha di.. ab bhagwan bachaye tujhe... Arre hum aise hi gyaan baat rhe thhe.. real life m aisa nahi hota.. pati ko biwi ki baat maan ni padti hai...
Saying so.. he left... Ram sat there laughing...



Precap:
P: Kitna time lagega aapko jaan...
R: Bas 5 min me aya darling...
P: Ok.. Mai aap ka intezaar kar rahi hu.. dont make me wait...
R: Yaa baby... coming...

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Yeh dono ka screw dhila hai kya LOL waise yeh jaan bhuj ke sari baat hasi mein taal dete hai na shayad honeymoon pe jane ke baad inka kuch hoyeWink
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Awesome 
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
superb superb 
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
Few! Finally Priya i took time n read ur all the parts of FF!
Sorry for that I'm reading it soo late.. U were always tagging me in Facebook but never had time to read it..
Finally i read ur FF! N have to say ur FF seems like confusing to me.. Means its roller coster ride to me..
N RaYa got married for 6 months .. N contract marriage.. Hmmm.. I think Priya is falling for Ram slowly slowly n Ram knows that.. Islie har baar puchta hain.. Priya kahi tumhe mujhse pyaar to nahi ho gaya na.. N Ram to too falling for Priya!
Nice update.. Continue soon.. N Priya add me in ur buddy list n next time whenever u update please PM me! .. :)

Harshida (Sona) here .. :)

Edited by Charlotte_Sona - 18 March 2013 at 5:36pm
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Charlotte_Sona

Few! Finally Priya i took time n read ur all the parts of FF!
Sorry for that I'm reading it soo late.. U were always tagging me in Facebook but never had time to read it..
Finally i read ur FF! N have to say ur FF seems like confusing to me.. Means its roller coster ride to me..
N RaYa got married for 6 months .. N contract marriage.. Hmmm.. I think Priya is falling for Ram slowly slowly n Ram knows that.. Islie har baar puchta hain.. Priya kahi tumhe mujhse pyaar to nahi ho gaya na.. N Ram to too falling for Priya!
Nice update.. Continue soon.. N Priya add me in ur buddy list n next time whenever u update please PM me! .. :)

Harshida (Sona) here .. :)


Hey there... Kaisi ho...
Uff.. Finally somenone actually took some time out to read my stuff.. i agree its thoda sa confusing beech me... but im set now.. bo more confusions...

Yo.. RaYa married for 6 months.. as far as falling in love os concerned.. Just wait n watch baby...

Hope u liked it.. apart from the part that confused u...
N yaa... Ijust send me a buddy request na.. phn se ho nahi raha.. dunno y...
N ill defo PM u nxt time on...

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