Maaneet OS ~ Kismat (Last Part ~ Pg63) 18/09 - Page 3

such an emotional story... rula diya yaar...

am looking foward now for the other side of story... but any logic wont second for me for maans deed... marriage just for a kid and then when geet was going no one over there even tried to stop her... 😭

continue soon

first of all its a brilliant , amazing, wonderful____...concept dear..👏👏

yaar when i was reaching the end of the update ,i was so scared that this was the end...😒😕😲😭
but i just got my life back seeing your note that there are still 2 parts...😛⭐️

Brilliant writing dear👏👏
that was really a strong concept..
i just cried while reading...

and my head is throbbing with so many questions,confusions!!!!😕
why maan did this??though it was his parents decision!!!!!!!!!phir bhi???
he didn't even talked with geet when she was leaving!!!..
i think there is lot more to come..
just eagerly waiting for the next part...
i am praying for maaneet reunion!!!😭😭😭
i just loved the way of writing...that was really a speechless update with all the emotions...
how much pain geet is going through😭

please please update next part soon...

❤️⭐️

Awesome..Very touching story.. It's like that they used her & when purpose was over threw her away...Poor Geet..😭

Loved it, please continue.

Like all ur writing  very hearting touching one . Realy u make me very emotional. Pls cont...

you made my cry Dia when I read abt Geet's departure... pls update soon..

painful but beautiful first part to this OS wow cant believe geet left without listening to anyone and cant believe she weas treated like this for an heir soo sad man!

looking forwards to the next part 😃

I became too emotional after reading it...😭

its so touchy...love it...so different frm other ff...waiting for next

waiting for the next dear