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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by punam2712

WHAT A TOUCHING MILAN
THEY ARE BOTH INCOMPLETE WITHOUT EACH OTHER

AND ADI WAS SO SMART
HE LEFT THEM ALONE

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pari1689

lovely update...

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loved it!! it was awssome!!

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Part 38


He lied down next to her, keeping her in his arm. She kept her head on his chest and hold him tight, around his waist. He kissed her hair and closed eyes, living with her, in her sweet dream. In mid night geet woke up. She felt something sounding below her. She looked up. It was maan.. she smiled. She again kept her head down , hearing his calm heartbeat. It was soothing. She kissed there. She looked, he was holding her tight. She again looked his face. He was sleeping peacefully. She raised her finger up and Traced his forehead, cheek nose jawline. She came to his lip. She shied and looked down.


'geet m waiting' he spoke.


Her mouth wide opened. Maan was awoke.. baabji '' she hides her face in his chest and he held her more tight , raised her to his level.


'geet.. koi kaam adhura nahi chora jata' he teased smiling


'konsa kaam maan ' she said still hiding her face in his neck


' achha.. toh mujhe batana bhi parega..thik hai mujhe koi problem nahi... per tumhara chehra (face) laal ho jaayega.. ab agar tumhe yaad ho tab.." he said


'kya yaad maan' she looked him raising her head.


"ki tumhara chehra laal kab aur kaise hota hai ..hmm' his eyes had desire. Maan was going to kiss when she turned and run showing her tongue to him, laughing. Maan felt his life came back, seeing her laughing whole heartily.


Looking him lost geet came near him and patted .. ' kya hua maan ' she asked worryingly.


'kuch nahi ' and he took her waist and turned her below him. She shocked on his sudden act. She patted his shoulder ' maan kya kar rahe ho.. mujhe jaane do'


'shhh' he kept his palm on her mouth instantly ..' geet aaj ke baad kabhi jaane ka naam mat lena jaan" he had insecurities in his eyes and fear of loosing her again in his voice. She looked his both eyes with very deep and hugged him tight.


'maan mai kahi nahi jaaungi... aap ho na mere pass.. jab tak aap mujhe khud nahi jaane doge mai kahi nahi jaaungi ' she kissed his cheek. He looked her lip. She closed her eyes and gave permission.



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Maanav met his family. They decided to make way to enter in KM. They would use naina without her knowledge, they planned. Mr and mrs k got to know naina was pregnant. So it wont be tough for them to melt dadi heart. One day dadi with cahnni were going to temple in car when suddenly a girl fell down in front of car, on road. Driver braked on correct time. both went down to see what happened when she looked naina. She was little injuries in her leg and head. "kon ho beta tum' dadi asked her. She was going to tell when suddenly she fainted. Dadi panicked. She couldn't leave her on road like this so she kept her in car with help of driver and left for km.Three people were watching all this from some far.


'good ' toh humari pahli chaal (plan) to kaamyaab ho gayi (completed) ' maanav said smriked.


Flashback


naina- nahi maanav I cant do this. Ye thik nahi hai.


Maanav- naina.. I know daarling its not fair but tumhi socho.. jab humaara bachha hoga toh hum konsa sukh de sakenge... humaari inti bari jaayedaad (property) hote hue bhi who bhikhariyo (poor) ki tarah rahega.


Naina- but maanav..iske liye kisi bholi bhali (innocent) aurat ko dhokha (cheat) dena thik nahi hai


maanav- naina..hum dadima ko cheat kaha kar rahe hai. Mana ki papa se kuch galtiyaan (mistakes) ho gayi aur dadi ne unhe ghar se nikaal diya .. per isme mera aur humaare hone wale bachhe ki kya galti..hum usse kyu saza de. Aur wase bhi tum dadi ke pass rahogi to unhe bhi sahara mil jaayega iss umar me... aur fir deere dheere sahi samay dekhkar mai bhi dadi se maafi maang lunga... aur fir hum sab waha rahenge, ek saath.. mai jaanta hu .. dadimaa ko bachho se kitna pyar hai.. aur tumhi socho..unka apna pota (grandson) hote hue bhi who unse dur rahe, ye thik toh nahi na


naina convinced. Maanav said her not tell her real identity. Slowly when he would say she can tell everything.



Flashback End



maanav- Per naina ye nahi jaanti ki jab dadi mere bachhe se puri tarah ghul mil (attached) jaayegi tab mai usse kiddnap karwaaunga .. aur mai jaanta hu , savitri devi, apne perpote(grand grand son) ko bachaane ke liye kitna bhi bari rakam (randsom) dene ke liye taiyaar (ready) ho jaayegi... kyuki hoga toh who, unka  apna khoon (blood relation) hi na '..



And they laughed out loud beastly.


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Geet woke up in morning. She found herself alone on bed. She looked around and found maan was sleeping on sofa. She stood up and went to him and sat on floor. She looked him lovingly. She remembered how she was going to be married with another man. She dint know what relation maan and maanav kept exactly. She dint know what her own brother(brij) told about maan, was right or wrong. But she knew , maan could have never cheated her. She thanked her babaji for send that girl on time (geet doesnt know naina). Otherwise what could have happened . She shivered with a single thought. She kissed his forehead . A single drop was going to fall on him when she wiped and left from there.



Precap : Geet Meets Dadi 


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wt an update!!!!!!!!!!!
wow ab aayegaa majaa when all are under single roof
bachaa lenaa babaji
 

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