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Part 35


their jeep was going fast in dark leaving HP. somehow brij came to know and informed his men to follow him. He also took his gun and drove to same direction where geet had been seen. All were following them. Satish (guard name) sensed danger. He thought it could be risky to keep geet with him this time as brij was very near. Though his men were also following brij but this time any how he had to save geet. After taking a decision he stopped jeep somewhere in desert and told geet to go down and hide at a particular place. He gave her a phone to contact if she needs. (he had another phone) He said her to hide here till he or any other police man come. He will take her after some time , making all ways clear from brij. She scared first but she had to. She went down and hide where satish told her to.


Satish started his jeep in full speed. Brij dint see geet was not there as it was dark . So he was chasing satish . Other police men was also following them. After some time police men trapped brij men jeep. And arrested. Now only brij and satish left. Satish took a turn and drives on raw path . Brij followed him. After going some far satish Tyre stuck in mud. He couldnt start it. Meanwhile brij came close to him and stopped there. He jumped down and went to satish but hell shocked to see geet was not there. He held satish collar but satish was very fast to push him and run. Brij and his some men chased him. But satish was very very fast to run Brij too followed him and finally got hold of him. They had big fight .


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maan plane landed, close to Hp. he run to door and came out. A jeep was waiting there. He jumped in instantly and drove to hp.


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Geet was hiding in forest. She was scared and shivering with fear and dark. Her eyes and ears was moving with every little sound . Her cloth was torn, she was hell hungry, she was thirsty, she was weak and fagged, she was all alone. Her lip was dry n trembling, her heartbeat was fast. She was near to death.

She saw phone. Suddenly she thought to call channi as she knew guard had dialed her last. She checked recent call and found Maan number was there also. ' babaji' she felt babaji will save her now.. she felt she will be alive now. She smiled in her tears. Her maan..her life will save her. She dialed his number with shivering hand. It was ringing. With every ring her heart was sinking what if he dint pick.. no babaji..please raham karna " she closed her eyes to secure her last hope.


' hello' maan voice came... she could not reply . She dint believe on her luck


'hello ?? satish ..r u there ' maan again spoke . But didnt hear any vocal again but was listening loud breathing sound... he got alert.. 'kon' he asked with anxious heart.


'm..ma.aa.an' she could speak this only somehow. Maan stopped his jeep in jerk. "geet' he said shocked.


'geet tum thik ho..kaha ho geet..thik toh ho na..geet tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi..please geet kuch toh bolo jaan..tum thik ho na.." he was asking without breathing. He was curious to know she was fine.she was safe.


'hmm" she nodded crying. Her cry was making maan more weak. Suddenly he thought why she was calling by satish s phone. 'geet tu kaha ho... ye phone tumhaare paas kaise aaya"


'w..woh..mai .. maan mujhe yaha se le jaao.. mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai..please maan" she was crying bitterly. She very wanted to be in his arm. She wanted him only.


'geet..jaan..tum ro mat..mai aa raha hu mishty..tum kaha ho ' he tried to console her as he was self sinking with her every tear.


'mujhe nahi pata maan..wo..woh police ne mujhe bola, yaha jungle me rukne ko.. mai yaha akeli... mujhe dar lag raha hai maan..aap please mujhe le jaao yaha se..."


'akeli ?' he thought. Per kyu. ' geet mai bas xyz jagah pe hu jaan.. tum jaanti ho na ye place. ' she nodded 'hmm'


'toh mai bas waha aa raha hu.. bas mai pahuch raha hu geet... tum road side me rahna..taki mai tumhe dekh paau.. thik hai jaan..mai bas jaldi aa raha hu geet.. tum ghabraao mat jaan.. apne maan pe bhrosa hai na'


'haan'


toh bas thori der aur mishty.. ' he speedup his jeep on highest. As fast as he had to reach her. She was alone , somewhere, this feeling was pricking his heart.


'maan, please phone mat cut karna '


' nahi karunga geet.. mai meri geet ko kuch nahi hone dunga jaan' he kept bluetooth on his ear and tried his best to console her. She was now feeling better talking him.


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geet was standing road side waiting for maan. Suddenly she heard some men sound. It was being louder.

She scared. Maan also felt her fear. Suddenly she saw some men with sword. Those men also saw her... " oyeee wo rahi ..pakro usse ' they shouted..


' geeettt run...bhago geet.' maan shouted hearing those goons sound. ' geet run... himmat karo geet..RUN " geet started runnng as fast she could. She knew maan was coming and he was not so far .. she had trust he will sure find her..so she run... ' (maan condition I cant describe .. it was beyond my imagination)


she turned back and saw men were coming nearer. Now she had no time and strength to run. Her phone battery was also low. After some time it been switched off. She was middle of road not to sure where to go. She had lost hope now. She wont see her maan again. She was going to die, she was sure. Suddenly she saw a jeep , side of road some far.. she run there hoping any help. She reached jeep but no one was there.. she looked back. Men were looking for her here n there as she was little far now. She immediately jumped in jeep back and hides herself under back seat. Those goons came there. Searched her around . They was going to look in jeep when jeep started. goons couldn't find there and they went in forest thinking there she should hide.


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Geet phone got switched off, it made maan more worried. "geeettt' he screamed.. he passed from there where geet was but little late as geet jeep was already left that place. After going some far he saw satish  standing middle of road. Satish anyhow succeed to win over brij and his men. He drove to spot where geet was. He reached there in no time. He went to exact place but shocked to see geet was not there. He searched everywhere around but failed. He was searching whole spot when maan came

and slapped him hard . ' how dare you..how dare you satish.. tum itne careless kase ho sakte ho.. mai tumhe jinda nahi chorunga...khaha hai meri geet... bolo kaha hai meri geet' he was going mad and mad and beating him hard. Satish was struggling to be free but maan was in full rage. He was not in sense. All his patients all hope lost in thin air. He wanted his geet back NOW.  After making his anger out on satish he held his hair back . He jumped in jeep and started driving no where. Where he should go he had no idea. Still he was driving like insane, like lost, with hope he will find her.


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It was morning now. Satish called his department and arrested brij and his men, who was badly injured. Handa s came to know all this in morning when police came at haveli. All panicked and could not understand what happened. Then satish told everything to them, how brij and shankar kidnapped mohanllal, channi and geet saw them. Brij came to know all and tried to kill channi but she escaped, and no body knew her whereabouts now. Then how brij came to know about geet and also tried to kill her, when he saved her last night. And now brij is in jail and geet is missing. All shocked and cried hard not to accept what happened in a day only.


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geet opened her eyes with morning sun and found herself sleeping in a jeep. She remembered last night. She peeped out a little and found she was not in hp anymore. It was unknown place. She looked the driver. She feared and stood. Her movement attracted the driver. He looked back and shocked.



Precap :' brij paaji, ek buri khabar hai'


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Edited by geet.lover - 15 August 2012 at 5:34am

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yipeee me first again

rocking update

geet's and maan convo on cell was just great rather say painful and full of emotions...

omg maan missed geet on the spot

i think the person is maanav whom geet saw as her driver

continue soon

me waiting already



Edited by suhaaana - 15 August 2012 at 6:00am

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ufff
ab geet kaha gaye?
and when will maan find her
i hope k geet ko maanav le k nahi gaya hoga

anyways continue soon dear


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thrilling update 
plz maaneet ko mila do 
geet pata nahi kiski jeep main baith gayi???

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lovely update 
continue soon

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Originally posted by geet.lover

Originally posted by gururockss

wow amazing update monika dear
i loved it
i thought u will give me an other shock and u gave me that by darji s decision hahahaa
but still i m happy with the update
continue soon dear
mujhay pehchana nahi

main ana hu yaar


oyee teriii
 tu tu hai wahi..dilne jise apna kaha


good ab meri do comments pakka na 



ya dear main
wo wahi tumari friend ehehheee
lovely update yaar
loved maaneet phone convo
but who the hell took geet away in tht jeep
i hope it s nt maanavAngry

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