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Her Bitter fate #2 ( Thread 3 Link @ Pg 141) (Page 110)

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ratna--

Monika  Hug...awesome update...thank u for the PM...plz continue Smile








hey Ratna..where were u yaar.. didnt see u in previous few parts... i was to pm u today

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 Part 43

 

Maaa" geet screamed her lung out. Rano sound was very low like she was in great torture... it was hardly hear-able.. maanav threaten geet not to tell maan anything about him otherwise he will kill rano and mohindar. Phone fell from geet's hand so was she. On ground, she was shivering like anything. Shocked and scared. "maanav kuch bhi kar sakta hai " this thought was killing her within inside. She was sitting mum there, crying for her bitter fate .. 

 

She very wanted to call maan and tell everything. she immediately called him but his phone was switched off.. She could not able to think rationally. Sudden her thought went to naina..she run to km. Everyone had already slept till time so she directly went to naina room but for her bitter luck, it was locked form inside. She knocked  but naina dint hear. She couldn't knock loud otherwise dadi could have  heard. She was feeling very helpless. She wanted maan this time. She wanted to her savior this time.. she sit there still knocking door, crying "please open " '  but no one was there to hear her plead. She returned to outhouse completely incapacitated

 

She looked her cell. With trembling hand she redialed same number. Maanav received.

 

I knew geet.. tum jarur mujhe phone karogi."

 

"what you want maanav"

 

tum... sirf tum geet... bas tum mere pass aa jaao .. mai sabko chor dunga.. fir kabhi kisi ko koi taqleef nahi dunga.. promise geet " he falsified his voice.

 

'ye kabhi nahi hoga maanav.. maan ke hote hue tum mujhe kabhi nahi paa sakte"

 

"toh fir thik hai geet.. bhul jaao ki tumhaare bhi koi maa papaji thy..." he laughed beastly

 

geet shivered. Tears fell down from her eyes like blood. She could not think herself under  any body else touch but her maa papaji .. they were as innocent as she was.. why babaji..why ' kya galti hai meri " she begged her babaji " she was not able to think or take any decision but she had to. How unlucky she was.. she was near to her maan but could not wish for him, for ever. Her life was a deep mess.  She had no way to come out.

 

She was bland when again her phone rang, but this time it was maan. Seeing maan name she felt like run to him and tell her all suffering all trouble and cry heart out..

 

"geet.. I am sorry jaan.. mai abhi tak office me hu. Aaj shayad ghar nahi aa paaunga ..geet..geeett tum sun rahi ho na ..geet " phone dropped from her hand and she lied on ground lifeless, senseless, fainted.

 

 

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 Maan was in his cabin, resting his head on chair head.with closed eyes, something virulent were running in his mind, ruthlessly. He was shaking his head , sweating , his heart could burst out anytime...  his hand was fisting chair handle , pricking hard, as its every pattern would print in his palm.. his blood was boiling , his whole body was shaking with every line, he heard this same morning .. when he saw what three ladies of his home were talking , through cc tv'

 

'I know you very well. Tum wahi ho na ji...jiske s..sath m.ma.manav'

" vikram tried to rape anjali '

'ye baby maanav ka hai '

" naina..agar us din tum nahi aati toh .."

 

his eyes jerked open... he stood throwing everything from his desk.. everything fell down like sand from his hand.. his life as well. Everything was unendurable, insufferable, he was burning from inside.. he was in pain , in rage ... his eyes his mind was not coping up with him .. " Vikram and maanav . These two words now would have to suffer to eternity.. even God would not be able save then from Maan Singh Khurana wrath.

 

How dare that bas***d, touched my geet.. HOW DARE HIM???? how dare that vikram, kept his lusty eyes on my mom.. HOW DARE HIM ??? how dare they tried to keep hand, what maan singh khurana possessed...  HOW DARE THEM ??????? he broke table glass in one fist.. he was throwing, breaking everything, everything mercilessly .. he would not live in peace ..   FORM NOW..I WILL WRITE YOUR FATE VIKARM AND MAANAV '. I will decide,, when your life would end ' I WILL '..

 

His mind disturbed by a phone call'

 

Call- sir, kaam ho gaya

 

""hmm, Thik hai ..Mai aata hu

 

 he cut and his mind turned toward geet .. she must be waiting for me.. per abhi mai iis halat me uske saamne nahi jaa sakta. I m sorry geet.. per mai tumhe aur pareshan nahi karma chahta.. bas aaj ki raat mishty, fir mai tumhe ek pal ke iye bhi akela nahi chorunga.. I promise " and he called geet that he would not come back home for tonight'and rushed out horridly'

 

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It was morning. Geet opened her eyes. Her eyes were swelled, red and aching. She found herself lied on ground. Her head was paining. She looked around . In few moments she gathered her sense. She hurriedly stood up and rushed to km, to see maan.  " shayad wo aa gaye honge "

 

"aree geet beta..aaiye na " dadi greeted geet , seeing her entering. "geet aap raat me royi hai kya ..aapki eyes kyu red hai beta"

 

nahi dadima..wo..wo.. "her eyes were searching for maan

 

"samjh gaye hum.. jarur maan se jhagra hua hoga.. ye maan bhi na , raat bhar ghar nahi aaye..aur morning me phone kar ke kah diya ki kaam se delhi se bahar jaa rahe hai '

 

geet looked dadi shocked ' maan nahi aayenge ' her eyes questioned dadi but her lip was still mum.

 

"achha geet aap fresh ho jaaiye..hum breakfast lagwaate hai " saying dadi left. Geet was stood there still, like statue. When naina patted her shoulder

 

"geet..geett kya hua aapko"

 

geet turned  to naina. Naina shocked to see her pale and blank face. She understood, something was not good, even worst. something was bothering her. "geet.. kya hua aapko "she asked

 

geet had no life left.. Naina again shake her . Geet shuddered and looked naina with blank eyes. naina held her hand and took to her room. She closed door and hugged geet. Geet hugged back finding some warmth, support after suffering whole night alone and cried like a child. Naina shocked with this sudden pitiful gesture of her. She patted her back and tried to console her. " geet..kya hua..aap hume bataiye "

 

After crying her heart out she felt little better. She told naina everything. Naina shocked. " geet..aapne hume pahle kyu nahi bataya... '

 

geet looked her . She was very vulnerable this time. "naina..mai maan ko sab kuch batana chahti hu "

 

"geet ..aap pagal ho gayi hai.. aapne maan ko bataya.. aur unhone police ki help li to maanav ko pata chal jaayega.. geet I know maanav very well.. wo bahut chalaak hai "

 

"fir mai kya karu naina..mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha " geet broke down.

 

"geet, ab humaare pass ek hi raasta hai "

 

geet looked her .

 

"hume maanav ke pass jana hoga " naina said.


Precap : Will She Go ???

Okk Now one question from my side .. what you would do if you would be on geet place ..
plz plz plz suggest me ... it will help me to take decision for geet as i m too confused LOL..


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Edited by geet.lover - 25 August 2012 at 5:00am

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
superbbb mindblowing updateSmile

Edited by suhaaana - 27 August 2012 at 1:42am

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
no way geet don't do this don't go to manav...Unhappy...I think that is also a tricks of manav .he using naina to get back geetAngry...w8 for maan geet.

Edited by raingurti - 25 August 2012 at 5:26am

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
awesome update 
i dont want geet to go 
but if i was in her positing i woudl have to go for my parents

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
amazing update...
waiting fr the past...

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged

waise yeh naina positive character hai

or

negetive

she act as an evill

god help geet

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Hope Maan will save Geet from this devil Maanav...
Nice update..
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