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SS: is it a fairy tale or the reality

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 12:00am | IP Logged
hello everyone I read some of the ff and ss which inspire me to write one of my own like all of you I love dekha ek khwab and manveer. I want to write a ss which would show that love which is said to be the most wonderful feeling also bring with it pain, pain of losing the one we love, pain off being seperate from the one just because the world thinks love is weak and there are limits of love. Not everyone have happy ending!
the begining

the heart of the devagarh family was taken away from her family by murari while he hide little manyata her family and uday family start their day with the hope that their princess will returned one day. and after being succesful in hiding manyata for 6 year murari died of an heart attack leaving behind 9 years old manyata who was now call manya with his only sister who was helpless herself. Because other than murrarri there was nobody to take care of her and manya. So she decide to look for job that an uneducated person can do after looking for long time of wandering and not finding anything. She along with manya hungry and thirsty end up sitting on the crowded street of Mumbai beside a grand mansion the young child manya due to the thirst complain
Manya: bua. Mujhe pyas lagi hai
Unable to provide anything bua stayed quiet and due the weakness manya fainted while the rajmata Of devghar watch all that from the window and once she order the guard to bring that little girl in for some reason rajmata cannot see that little girl suffer anymore than she already was...

That is the starting pls comment and let me kno if I should continue or not

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 12:17am | IP Logged
yuppp first one to comment.interesting yaar.Cont soon n dont forget to pm me.

Edited by Swini01 - 08 August 2012 at 12:17am
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Do continue!... It looks great.
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
super interesting please update soon and pm me if possible 
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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Interesting. Pls continue
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hmmm niceThumbs Up cont soon and plz PM if u can

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