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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 9)

Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 9:10pm | IP Logged

Chapter 2

Rahul was momentarily distracted by the shouts that emanated from the rapidly growing crowd in the parking lot. He ran towards the college campus...

Sameer's leg swept out in a wide, graceful art, connecting with Rahul's ankles, throwing him off balance. Without even realizing what exactly was happening, Rahul found himself flat on his back, sucking in deep breaths of air that seemed devoid of oxygen, wincing as the metal rod hit him hard on his back. The subsequent tunnel vision that threatened to take away his sight cleared with just enough time to roll away from a kick to the ribs.

Ashish ran towards Vikram who was busy playing the dart...

"they will almost kill Rahul..."

Vikram was good looking and the biggest enemy of Veer...they both hated each other... Vikram didn't look at Ashish who looked tense...

"who?" Vikram asked

"who else??..." replied Ashish

Vikram turned around and smiled at Ashish...

Sameer slammed his fist into Rahul's shoulder... and hit him on his head...

Veer had this unusual smile before thrashing someone..."Sameer...what are you doing??"

Sameer looked at Veer who closely observed Rahul lying on the ground...with blood on his forehead and mouth... "oh no...what did you do Sameer...???"

"look at the blood from his face...Sameer, now he will compliant to the principal who will report to police and he will complaint to your Mother who will cry..."

Sameer surprisingly looked at Veer...

Veer picked up the hockey stick and started beating Rahul from behind... "hit him with a hockey this way there won't be any blood, and principal won't call the police...and your Mother won't cry..."

Veer hit him hard on his legs "and you can break as many bones as you want..." surprised the whole crowd who gaped for an instance thinking Veer might spare him...

One after another Veer brutally hit Rahul with the hockey stick...

"wait Veer...all of you are beating my friend who is all alone" Vikram stood in front of Veer...

Veer's knitted forehead made it very clear to Vikram that he would not leave Rahul and would definitely not listen to him...

"i can leave Rahul...if you come in his place..." Veer smirked at Vikram who knew Veer was insubordinately stubborn...

both were about to fight when a professor approached them... "stop it both of you"

"This has become your daily routine...i don't want any more fights in the college get lost both of you...and Veer stop being so rebellious..." Principal angrily watched the two boys who had no regrets on their faces and wanted to kill each other...

Veer angrily looked at Vikram "consider yourself lucky...that the professor saved you, next time don't you dare come in my way..."

both crossed their paths without looking at each other...


Veer came out of the shower... his strong body had small scars as he had regular fights in the last so many months... Veer's weakness was that he was very hot-tempered, unruly and ruffian.

He very often gets into fights for injustice and very rarely anyone saw a smile on his lips... he wore his shirt and was ready to leave to fulfill his punishment... the principal of the college punished these two gangs who always caught up fighting...all the boys got different punishments... Veer's punishment was to get the vegetables for the hostel...he had to go with the kitchen cook and help him carry vegetables...

Arjun came with his basketball "going somewhere?."

Veer didn't bother to look at him...

"Veer I am asking you?" Arjun throw the ball towards him...

without even looking at the ball Veer hold the ball and threw it back on him "yes...and don't ask me where"

without saying another word Veer left the room...

It was afternoon but Kasauli always has a pleasant weather... The college gates were mostly opened until 9:pm for the students to practice after classes...mostly students stayed in the hostel... girls hostel was little far from the boys...

This punishment was not new for Veer...he was used to go with Santram to the vegetable market and carry the vegetables to load them in the van...

Santram liked Veer...he knew Veer had a heart of gold... "Veer beta, you shouldn't get involved into these belong to a good must stay away from all this...look at you hands..."

Santram saw Veer's bruised hands... "how will you carry these bags...???"

Veer didn't say anything and carried all the bags so easily ... Santram knew Veer was very strong physically but he didn't had any place for emotions in his life...

They were walking towards the van when they saw a man harassing a front of so many people but none of them came forward to stop him...

"leave me...please..." the girl cried out...

Veer turned around to see a miserable girl pleading a man who was laughing at her weakness to leave her dupatta... he gave the bags to Santram... "i will be back..."

Santram saw the dangerous frown on Veer's forehead "have you taken the right to hit everyone???" but Veer didn't listen to him ….

Santram walked towards the Van...he had seen these incidents many times...he knew Veer always fought for the right... as he was loading the bags he could hear the violent sounds of smashing and screaming... "Veer is breaking another set of bones..." for Santram it was a thrash of waves...

Veer punched and kicked him so brutally that he couldn't get up... everybody in the market praised Veer... while he angrily stared at the half dead man...


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pranita1202 Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
  this comes 2 my mind  after enjoying this action packed update

Tali bajawe naache gaawe

Tali bajawe naache gaawe
Rab howe sarik jeene ke jasan mein) '- (2)
Apni tho baat margar kuch nirali hai
Apne toh khoon mein ishq ki lali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)

Dhoop tashan hai, raat tashan hai
Apni tho har bath tashan hai
Kaise bhi halat tashan hai
Waise insaan hai
Tede apne karam huye hai
Hum suraj pe garam huye hai
Kabhi sharam pe sharam huye hai
Thode naadan hai
(Humpe hai rahe teer sikandar ka
Humpe kurban ha neel samundar ka) '-(2)
Hum jaise hai, kismet ke lakh sawari hai
Apni tho baat magar kuch nirali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)

(Tali bajawe naache gaawe

Tali bajawe naache gaawe
Rab howe sarik jeene ke jasan mein) '' (2)
Apni tho baat margar kuch nirali hai
Apne toh khoon mein ishq ki lali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)


That was sooo goood

so apart frm stating the obvious how gr8 it was lets see how feel abt the update

so action was gr8

i loved veer's entry especially the sarcasm abt hockey stickLOL

veer is full of attitude , the way he says vikram to take rahul's place

i love to u  named veer   archenemy   'vikram'

 (i don't know if people remember the in PRC who had bad 4 sanyo n kidnaps her i.e her almost fiance was also vikram , i that track i soo wanted prithvi 2 kick the crap out of vikram but that didn't happen , )

so cooming back 2 now

the way u said he caught basket ball without seeing , i had  a drool worthy rajat's image in my mind Embarrassed

so he is a fighterClap

so the gal is mugs or not

might b or not

i guess not

so veer gets punishment to do hostel chores

hope wen mugs will enter he gets duty at gal's hostelWink

Edited by pranita1202 - 15 August 2012 at 11:28am

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Shraddhamurat Groupbie

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Posts: 86

Posted: 14 August 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Veer stands for injustice thats really cool nd nice Smile

now and then he enters into a fi8 against injustice.

The man harassing a gal iz such a coward
well veer taught hm a nice lesson

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.FemmeFatale. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 21821

Posted: 14 August 2012 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
reserved :)


Tell me something,is there any genre in writing that you're not good at? LOL you've mastered everything!romance mein toh aap bhai kamaal ho hi(tum mero ho bein its brand ambassador) and horror (now with shikar Embarrassed.romance+horror-deadly combo!) and now action also! Big smile bas ab comedy baaki hai Tongue(btw many ppl have been telling me that they want an RT-MC comedy ff.start kardo na woh bhi Embarrassed )

This update was fully action-packed(ofcourse u already know that,you only wrote it afterall! ROFL ) I loved Veer's character! He is so righteous!You've done a great job in showcasing his characteristics.

Super update!Btw ahem,humaari heroine kab aayegi? Tongue  or wait,was that girl in the market her only? Shocked

Edited by disha15 - 14 August 2012 at 11:12pm

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Patrarekha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
wow great update..m feeling like watching a film

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swati_prithvi Groupbie

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
wow nice ud..
full of aggression...fight..anger..
Veer fights against injustice..
well this make him different..
he is strong..brave..fearless..  & gud frm hrt...Tongue
bt he doesn't wanna show d soft part of his heart to any1..
got punishmnt of purchasing vegetables...
ha ha ha...LOLLOL
thn agn he saved a gal..
gud..Veer is gr8..
luvd d ud..
waiting for d nxt part..Smile

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tejjo Goldie

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 2399

Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Vry dishum dishum update di

kya ff h
rt is angry young man just like my aarav

awesome part tha di
first action scene is my fav...i visualise that scene...vikram enemy of veer huh!
Veer ke samne koi kuch nhi h

awww so sweet our veer fight 4 injustice n helped everyone

mera action hero h veer toh

wow punishment v mast h vegetables lana h market se

wo bhi girls colg ke pass se

omg usi hostel me mugs v hogi

kitna maza ayega jb veer roj fight karega
or roj usse punishment milegi
roj wo market jayega
roj mugs se milega
roj romance hoga or roj mugs pyaar se uski injury par ointment lagayegi

oh god mene kitna kuch imagine v kar liye

di u know na me a crazy fan of urs n rtmc

di market wali ladki mugs h na
chalo first meeting hone wali h rt mc ki

im waiting di
jaldi ud dena

wait hota nhi h mujhse

luv u

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ridzzi Goldie

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged
oh what a nice great part di...
veer is in his full too tashan...professor k wajah se vikram bach gaya...otherwise we will able to see super dangerous fight...dhishum dhishum
n wah re what a punishment...but the girl whom he saved is his heroine or some random girl ?
update soon
luv u   :-)

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