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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 44)

Vaidehi_1924 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 October 2015 at 6:43am | IP Logged
OMG..U updated next chapter too..Big smile

Thank U so much dii bcoz d suspense about Aarti's kidnapping might would had killed us..Confused..Unhappy
This update was amazing..but short n saddy one..!!
Veer rescued Aarti from d goons..ClapClap..d fight scene was described nicelyThumbs baja di sabki warrior Veer ne..Smile
Arghh..I wanted to beat d goons myself for killing innocent girls n tying Aarti like that..Angry..Angry
And then..Veer was rusticated from college n he leaved without even meeting her once..wD"absmiddle">..Cry..Confused
After 3 years..

Aarti in a silent mode..the laughing n cheerful..lively Aarti is lost..I really cant see her like that..Cry..Cry
Hope she meets Veer in Mumbai..Day Dreaming..Day Dreaming
Well ..I am thinking about the possibilities..

1st- whether something happened with Veer..
2nd- may b Veer be her boss..etc etc..Wink
Waiting for next diiHug..Big smile

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heemasomani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 October 2015 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Fantastic update

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Riyaa16 Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2015 at 9:18am | IP Logged
wow very nice update
oh poor aarti feeling bad for her
i hope she will fine soon

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Posted: 29 October 2015 at 12:05am | IP Logged

Chapter 19


She was still viewing outside the small window of the train. Her lovely eyes were always waiting for him, her heart and mind belonged to him.

 She knew she was hurting herself and her family but she could not pretend. This was the way she felt and her heart always has a burden of not meeting him even once.


 She wanted to keep him with herself all the time and this was the only way. She would fight against crime as he used to.

The train reached a small station... Aarti looked at her bag and saw a packet of chips. She thought of eating when her eyes fell on the black jacket. All she could see was a black jacket.

Same physique, same hair. No she thought. It's just her imagination. She wants to see him and that's why she feels him around all the time.

 But in the last few years she did not even took his name in front of anyone, since she has promised him.

She closed her eyes and took a deep breath... As the wind blow her long black hair changed way towards her beautiful face...





Kirti was still thinking about Aarti decision.

"Do you think this job is right for her?" Kirti asked while Vikram was busy with files around him.

Kirti was annoyed at him this time "I am talking to you Vikram."

He glanced once "I know...I am listening"

"No, you are not" she said and left indignantly.

Vikram kept his hand on his head "these sisters will make me mad one day"


It was late evening...


Rama was looking at Aarti's picture "she was so naughty here..." smiled

"You know Manmohan she used to tease Kirti so much" she continued glancing at the picture...

She remembered how she used to stop Aarti from talking so much and doing silly things around but now she wants her daughter to come to life. With tears in her eyes Rama walked towards Kirti's room...

"I want to talk to you" Rama said...

Kirti was putting her dresses nicely in her wardrobe when she looked at her mother who had been crying since Aarti left "Mom... what's wrong with you?"

"You are going to settle down soon with Vikram, but I am worried for Aarti" she sobbed

Kirti condoled her mother "mom Aarti is a strong girl, she is fine. Please don't worry so much and I am sure one day she will settle with someone"

Rama nodded "I don't think so..."

She looked at Kirti "tell me honestly...was there anyone in her life?"

Kirti never wanted to tell her mother anything because she herself wasn't sure, Aarti never told her anything "I am not sure Mom. But I only think."

Rama was waiting for her to complete

"Aarti was in trouble once in college, a guy saved her. But he was rusticated from the college, and since then Aarti has changed..." Kirti said

Rama thought something "did she like him?"

Kirti looked at her mother's curious face "I don't know...and I don't want to know. Mom please don't think so much. Right now she is fine and wants to concentrate on her work. So give her some time."

Rama wasn't convinced while Kirti hugged her tightly...




It was almost 11pm when the train stopped at the station...she slowly opened her eyes and picked up her luggage to step outside. She tied her long hair and stepped aside to look for her name.

"Hi" she said to a short man who stood with a little hoarding of her name "ARTI"

"It's Aarti..." she said.

The man smiled

She didn't smile "not with one A"

"Ohh" he responded

"Sorry madam" he quickly marched towards the car that was parked outside the station

She hopped onto the back seat and viewed outside. It was dark but people were still walking on the footpaths. It was not like her town where people sleep early.

Big city big crime, she thought. Soon she saw the car getting into the driveway of huge building. Her apartment was on the top floor. The driver gave her the keys and helped the luggage inside.

It was 3am in the morning but as usual she couldn't sleep. She changed and kept her clothes in the wardrobe. It wasn't a big apartment, just had a room adjoining the washroom. Then a little space for a huge couch and a center table... just next the living area was a kitchen. It wasn't too small. She hardly cooks. Most of the time she will be out of the house for work.

She glanced around of the window from her room and could see all the lights around the city.

She thought of calling her family and informing them that she's reached safely.






Next morning


Aarti entered the huge building with a bag on her side, she pressed the button for the lift.

"Welcome to VOC Channel Aarti" said Mr. Oberoi

While Aarti glanced around the big room and then saw the man sitting in front of her. He wasn't that old as she had imagined "thank you sir"

"You know it's not an easy mission" said Mr. Oberoi

He continued as she looked at him "we need all the information and we have to make sure that it's dealt with extra security." He added while Aarti nodded "yes Sir"

"So you know you have to go there today as we will be telecasting the news tonight, you will get all the information from my PA Riya" he said and went back to work

"Sure Sir" she said and walked away.


She knew it wasn't an easy job, but deep inside her she had a feeling of putting her hands into this. She hated criminals and she hated crime. She would never go away from her mission.

She knew she has this chance and she got this with her own efforts. She quickly sauntered towards the next room to meet Riya "hi, I am Aarti"

She introduced

"Oh hi Aarti" she said and kept looking at the attractive young girl, who seemed too young for the mission

"Here is the file and other stuff is in this bag" Riya said

Aarti smiled a little and picked up the bag.

"Your cameraman is Abhimanyu and he is waiting for you in your cabin" Riya said while Aarti left.

She walked towards her cabin and saw a young man waiting for her holding a big camera "hi..."

Abhimanyu kept gazing at her, she was beautiful, and indeed so beautiful that anyone could fall for her but there was no smile on her beautiful face instead it seemed she was missing something.

 "So" she said getting him out of his thoughts.

Abhimanyu was a good cameraman who was working at the VOC Channel for quite a long time.

"Yes so..." he said gazing at her

She crossly looked back "we will leave tonight for this mission. I have arranged everything."

She had no signs of fear or danger near her. She did not look at him while discussing the mission. He could not believe such a beautiful girl as a crime reporter.

"You are not scared" Abhi said

"No" she replied

"Hmm, interesting. But how come you chose to become a crime reporter" he questioned again

Without looking at him she retorted "that's none of your business"

He kept quiet for a while then again thought something "there is a big risk in this mission"

"I know" she said casually

"It's not easy to cover this news" he added

This time she looked at him "it's not difficult either"

She said and went back to check the files...

Abhi smiled



Late night

Aarti had to cover this whole mission.

She knew it wasn't easy. Some terrorists have captured small kids and made them hostages in the forest near Ramila forts.

"Are you ready to capture" she said to Abhi who was holding the camera behind her while walking towards the terrorists.

"So you have come from the VOC Channel?" said one of the terrorists

Aarti nodded "yes... and we want to know what all are your demands?"


After few minutes


She covered everything...

On her way home she was still thinking about the increasing crime in this city. Today she saw small kids being held at the gunpoint.

With moist eyes she looked outside. The driver dropped her back to her apartment.

She checked some news. Then thought of making some coffee. Suddenly she turned towards the news...

 "Police is still looking for the gang that deals with flesh trade"

"And will always keep on looking" she said and then thought something...


Next Day

Mr. Oberoi was happy with the news that Aarti covered.

"You did very well" he said

But Aarti was already thinking about her next mission.

As she disclosed ...

"But how can you risk your life Aarti?" said Mr. Oberoi

"We only give news" he added

Aarti tried to convince him again "we have to put our hands in the dirt to get the dirt out Mr. Oberoi"

Mr. Oberoi wasn't convinced... "But I can't put your life in danger"

After much thinking he dialed his friend's no

"I think it's a very good idea Aarti" said commissioner Bhalla

Aarti was relieved that finally she would be doing something to get the criminals out.


After few hours...


Aarti was ready. Full team of police and security was behind her in civil dress.

It was late night and according to the plan Aarti stopped the car in the middle of the road where maximum girls were abducted.

She had already put a tracker and a microphone in her clothes and hair. She stepped out of the car pretending her car is not working and was waiting for the gang to approach her.



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Vaidehi_1924 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 October 2015 at 4:01am | IP Logged
One more update..Hug..Big smile..U have been giving us happy surprises by Ur updates..!!
Talking about d update..
So,Aarti reached Mumbai..but what is this..Confused..Shocked
Aarti is going to work as crime reporter.!!..She is really a true lover..since Veer hated crime and criminals,now her motto is just to eradicate d same..Approve..Aarti,U r such a sweetheart as well as an extremely brave girl!!
So..mission 1 accomplished successfully n she is doing something dangerous for 2nd mission..Veer's love had really transformed her!!
Wait a min..was that really means that they r going to meet soon..waiting for that!!
I read d CS today..Sanya hadn't entered d story till now..mtlb uski v entry hogi ab h na dii..and ye Abhimanyu,wat d hell r U thinking.. Aarti belongs only to Veer n no one else..
Waiting for next update as usual..I hope we get something about Veer's whereabouts in d next chapter..:)
Tc dii..*hugs*

Edited by 16lvkkk - 29 October 2015 at 5:45am
Asyalover IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 October 2015 at 8:11am | IP Logged
whoa...arti is so chaged and i think it good atleast this way she is not with veer with a lie...i hope she meets him soon and this a fresh start will be good

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murataru Groupbie

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Posted: 29 October 2015 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Wow one more ud ... Very nice Tongue
Omg Arti as crime reporter ... Wow that sound interesting ...
.in train she feel veer around her ...Its mean veer in Mumbai ...
Plzz soon ...
& yes u abhi stay away from Arti ... She is only veer life 
No one can take veer place in her life dude don't try 
Its all gone in vain Cool..

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Riyaa16 Goldie

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Posted: 29 October 2015 at 8:27am | IP Logged
aarti got a job b wo bhi as a crime reporter.not bad
brave girl i must say
i think that was na ...not sure bt i think wahi tha. hope they will meet soon
poor aarti she has changed a lot
give her happiness back na dii
im also very sad...bechare veer n aarti
lovely update
thanks for the update di
love u

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