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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 36)

ridzzi Goldie

Joined: 25 September 2011
Posts: 1798

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 5:19am | IP Logged
thank u di for the part n welcum back...
veer ki wajah se sabki band baj gayi...n arti pagal ladki...she luvs him but the gr8 angry young man...everytime he show her attitude...
but arti is arti how can she give up...
n last part was aouuu...
update soon...
luv u...    :-)

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shruja IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 February 2008
Posts: 3294

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
welcome back
thanks for update
short but beautiful update!!
so all frnds cursing veer
and veer still rude towards aarti

Edited by shruja - 28 December 2012 at 6:18am

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Asyalover IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 February 2012
Posts: 3396

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
awww feeling bad for arti nowas she is not getting any love by veer hope veer will start to atleast like her...update soon...

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tejjo Goldie

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 2407

Posted: 29 December 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
very nice update dii

but it was too short

but loved it!! what a punishmentBig smile

except veer all were crying ha ha ha LOL

n aarti she is so cute but i hate tears in her eyes...she is so charming why veer always avoid her...let me guess

he loved someone else?agar aisa hua to i kill himAngrywaise aisa hoga nhi i knowEmbarrassed

second reason ummm...shayad wo usse like karne lagegaBig smile

yahi reason h na di

no more claps please 

i know im very smartBig smile


just kidding

ud soon dii

n please long one this timeOuch

love u

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sonalimurat Senior Member

Joined: 23 April 2011
Posts: 790

Posted: 29 December 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
thanks for updating
nice update .. Clap   Clap   Clap
liked it
but why veer is always angry on her ..
the punishment was realy  big.but  it  seemed  that  for only made as fuel to fire to his anger
.last scene between veer n Arati was very nice ..n she dissolve in veer strong touch Blushing
update soon
love u

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dhwanimehta23 Senior Member

Joined: 15 March 2012
Posts: 962

Posted: 29 December 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Superb update!!!!!!!!

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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 April 2010
Posts: 4262

Posted: 30 December 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged
thnks di for updating this afta long...
i ws missing veer...
but missed aartu the most...
childnes, all frivolities...

god they all r so sweet that cud melt any stone..
but this rude veer..
god, cant he see how cute she is???
like chubby bubbly kid...

i dnt like it at all wen he shout on her...
just like ma 12th cls chemistryy prof use to..
i  hate such ppl...
and veer, pzl stop being rude...

day n night u think of weird..

u hav aarti, more beautiful den anyone...think of her man...

why demon loking man ranga...

i hav a shairi ready wid me...

jo lega veer se panga..
wah wah wah..
 jo lega veer se  panga...

veer kardega usse nanga...
let it be ranga...

wah wah wah...

i m gr8.

loved the scn- WHO IS RUNNING...
god this gal is so similar to prithvi and sanyogita na,,,
evn they eloped.


lovly update.
lov u di

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rasp_berry IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 November 2010
Posts: 5169

Posted: 30 December 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
It's awesome update but too short... But I m happy that u r back

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