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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 35)

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plz i want upd di
plz upd soon.
i cant wait
luv u di plz take care ur selfSmile

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its my first comment.
thanks for nice story.
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Chapter 11


It wasn't unusual for Veer to face this punishment, he was least bothered about the huge bags loaded on his back while he kept running around the football ground...

"this is not fair" Nakul said huffing half way...

Arjun looked at Nakul who was slowly running to complete his punishment of fifty circles around the ground... "it was Veer who mixed that stupid thing in the food...and here we are facing the punishment with him..."

Sameer pulled Nakul "come one...lets run fast"

"i can run...but what about this heavy luggage on my back, it will surely break my back" Nakul said with the crying face...

"if i had one more circle, i will die..." Uday shouted at his friends...

Veer was running far ahead of them... his thoughts were only taking him towards his fight with Ranga and his men... the more he thought the more he aggressively ran faster...


Uday was about to faint... "look at him..." he pointed towards Veer... "we are pissed unnecessarily because of his mistake and he doesn't even care..."

Sameer was still pulling Nakul when his phone rang...

"hey sweetheart" Sameer said while running...

"how are you...still running..." Sheetal said worriedly...


Aarti jumped off her bed... "who is running??"

Sheetal looked at Aarti "Veer and his friends have got a punishment of completing fifty circles of the ground..."

"wow... really..." Aarti quickly ran towards the bathroom...

Sheetal nodded her head at her friend who was completely going bizarre...



After some time...


Aarti ran towards the ground... her eyes scanned around when she saw Veer running with heavy weights on his back... he didn't looked tired though the frowns on his forehead as usual showed he was angry, she looked at his other friends who were literally dragging themselves... she laughed out...

She walked inside the ground... "hello..." she looked at Veer who had no effect ...

"i am talking to you" Aarti rushed after Veer...


"get lost" he said without looking at her...




Veer turned angrily towards her "i don't think its important to answer your why??"


Aarti quietly looked at him while he started running again...




It was late afternoon when all the students almost finished their classes and walked towards their hostels...

Nakul and Uday lay on the bed "oh God...why did you do that with us...what wrong did i do in my past life..." Uday screamed while Arjun applied the hot bottle on his back...

"it our fate brother..." added Nakul...

Veer came out of the shower... "stop complaining now"  he threw his towel away... "i will kill that Ranga... "


Uday looked confusedly at his angry friend "isn't this punishment enough for thinking about that man..."


Veer picked up his hockey stick "well...not yet... i have to clear my account with him..."

Nakul nodded his head in despair...




"Aarti just forget it... why do you even talk to him, when he doesn't even look at you..." Sheetal tried to explain...

Aarti smiled... "because i love him... that's all i know..."

Kirti was listening to her sister's stupid talks... "i think you must do something useful rather than thinking about that ruffian..."

"don't you dare say anything about him " Aarti pointed her finger...

"really??" Kirti smirked...


Aarti walked out of the room, banging the door behind her...


There was a small tear that occupied her eyes...

"i know you don't love me...but one day you will..." she smiled and wiped her tears...




Veer was practising with his punching bags when Aarti came towards him...

"Hi" she smiled at the angry face...

"what do you want??"

"you" she answered...

"what?? He shouted back

"i i be your friend??" she said quickly...

"no" Veer replied with the most rude attitude...

"why?" Aarti asked innocently

Veer angrily pulled her towards a corner... "whys the hell are you after me..."

Aarti felt his hands snaked around her arms... even though it was hurting she closed her eyes

and felt his strong touch ...

Veer had no clue why she was doing that...


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Kareena1994 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Was missing this ff so much.
Pls continue soon.

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Radhikerani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Loved It !!! Do Update Soon !!!

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loved it. thanks for the pm

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very nice update...

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