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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 33)

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
awww feeling bad for arti nowas she is not getting any love by veer hope veer will start to atleast like her...update soon...

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
very nice update dii

but it was too short

but loved it alott...wow!! what a punishmentBig smile

except veer all were crying ha ha ha LOL

n aarti she is so cute but i hate tears in her eyes...she is so charming why veer always avoid her...let me guess

he loved someone else?agar aisa hua to i kill himAngrywaise aisa hoga nhi i knowEmbarrassed

second reason ummm...shayad wo usse like karne lagegaBig smile

yahi reason h na di

no more claps please 

i know im very smartBig smile

hehehe

just kidding

ud soon dii

n please long one this timeOuch

love u
muahhh

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
thanks for updating
nice update .. Clap   Clap   Clap
liked it
but why veer is always angry on her ..
the punishment was realy  big.but  it  seemed  that  for only made as fuel to fire to his anger
 
.last scene between veer n Arati was very nice ..n she dissolve in veer strong touch Blushing
 
update soon
 
love u

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Superb update!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged
thnks di for updating this afta long...
i ws missing veer...
but missed aartu the most...
childnes, all frivolities...

god they all r so sweet that cud melt any stone..
but this rude veer..
god, cant he see how cute she is???
like chubby bubbly kid...

i dnt like it at all wen he shout on her...
just like ma 12th cls chemistryy prof use to..
i  hate such ppl...
and veer, pzl stop being rude...



day n night u think of ranga...how weird..

u hav aarti, more beautiful den anyone...think of her man...

why demon loking man ranga...


i hav a shairi ready wid me...

jo lega veer se panga..
wah wah wah..
 jo lega veer se  panga...

veer kardega usse nanga...
let it be ranga...

wah wah wah...

i m gr8.


loved the scn- WHO IS RUNNING...
god this gal is so similar to prithvi and sanyogita na,,,
evn they eloped.

hahaha...


lovly update.
lov u di

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
It's awesome update but too short... But I m happy that u r back

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
awesome part <3

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 5:24am | IP Logged
di thanks for nice and lovely upd.Smile
di upd is realy amazing
i read that part many times i feel bed for arti Cry
becoz she luv him lot and he have no idea about that
plz god dono ko jaldi milwa do
last scean is raly nice
thank u di once again
luv u lot.
i m wating for next upd
happy new yearSmile
always keep smileSmile


Edited by soniaparte90794 - 31 December 2012 at 5:23am

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