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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 30)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:06pm | IP Logged

simply amazing..

awsum n adorable part..

loved it so much...

aarti is really naughty...

making him do something...he didnt even dreamed of...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
Superb update

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
chapter 6-

hehehhe..
 her hero.. beating all oder zeroes..
 mastt line thi ye di..
 lovd the whole ud like blast..
 superbo dis ws just the i say- dhanvi di types..
full of a roler coaster ride..

arti is unpredictable..
 seriously..
 bechari sheetal..
 really lucky to hav a friend like arrti,...ROFL..
 yes di, dis is really wat i m sating..
 dnt call it joke..
 such character.. crack r necessary in life..
 juzz like me..
 dey make u love ur life..

dats wat ma friendz say aba me..
 dey say.. dey cmt imagine deir life widout ma pranks n idiot stuffs, non sense joke, n specially ma fights n skirmish wid teachers..


ooo...
 veer k daday trusty h.. good ..
 verna beta tumhe kabka out of colg kerr dete..

wen i shouting madly in class on a girl.. teacher( bad timing) entered..

den i did OUTSTANDING PERFORMANCE...

((that is, standing out of class..))

since den, i hate dat gal like everything n nothing..

o ma god, sammer is big flirter..
 i likd him..im sry, but i m not...
hahhahahha...

aarti, u r amazing..
 god she is bestest.,
 she kissed him all ovr his face..
 n he ws mesmerzed..
lovely wrk aarrti,
 u r juzz blasting..

amaing di..
 dnt know wat will veer do if she cmnt like dis..
 hope he kisses her in fruestation..
 finger crossed..
 reading next part...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
chapter7-

 i m done wid chapter 7 also..
 yipeeeiii!!!,...
 it ws magical..
 though it ws not veer n arti..
 but...sameer n sheetal r complete opposite to veer n arti..
 i found it sooperbo..
his really lov sheetal.. but she is nervous..

cute couple...

but our arrti is cutest...

lovely shovely oye..
aarti had a sleepless nite..

if the reason wud hav been dat she ws doing studies.. den i wud call it a big fake..
hahaha..
 but reason is veer..
 so i cn understnd..

bechari ko sone bhi nhi dete h...
:P

oops! sachi main.. uss ladki ka kya jo veer ki life main aayegi...

n uss ladke ka kya jo aarti ki life main aayega..
  A BOY FR ARTI- dats more woorying..
 cn anyone endure dis crack jack nuts...

but want eva it is..
 veer the warrior is title..
 but i read dis ff fr AARTI- THE CRACK JACK.. more...

i lov her more..

reading next nw


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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
chapter 8-
u noe di wat..
 i like vikram..
 reason one- he consider arrti as sis..
 good.
 reason two.. he is cool, juzz like veer..

but why is veer a enemy of him.. i wonder..
things to exopose soon i wish..
 stry is a complete roler coaster ride..

sheetal is so shy, she luks such a sweet dis way..
 arjun n kavita... big doubt.. cn lov bloom here too??
wat eva,,
 but i m in lov wid dis stry..
 such a awesome blast dis is..
 lov is in air all around..
 so much lov lov n lov...
every kinda a lov stry is here...

but di.. punch of dis ud ws-
Veer and Vikram watched two sisters fighting...they nodded their heads and walked away...

its really funny to imagine dese sisters here..
 god dey r perfect...
cn anyone say, dey lived in same womb fr 9 months...

lovely wrk di, dis is ur creation.. juzz amazing..

aarti n veer pool scene..
oye hoye..
 kya hot h..
 mastt h...

dis gal. crack jack... she pretended her being unconcious to catch his arm longer..

''oops! her bum...!!...'' ROFL..

veer will not leave her dis time..
 yes veer, catch her, n dnt leave her eva eva...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
chapter 9-
so now i m on track.. just to be not on track again...i mean, ma cmnt to dius ud is early.. but lets see wat aba oder coming up...
so todays last cmnt..
 but di, u made ma day here...
thnx fr dis lovely shovely stry..

dis is d best subject fr boyz i think..

''bra hooking!''

veer, so hw ws ur first expirence of BRA HOOKING class..
u liked it??

i noe u will say a BIG NO..
 but u lovd it na...
u will think abt it..
 i m sure..

so, in dis lecture of BRA hooking... u learnt to hook a bra..
 NEXT LEESON.. be ready for unhooking the bra...Blushing..
 sry di.. naughty gal i m..
 but,.. wat to do..
 i ducnt hold dat joke..

but, veer, ur dedication in clas.. ur concentration is really wonderful...

so were gazing her back, scrutinized her curves of glowing back...

u loved it???

sameer n arjun..
y r u so bothered fr veer..
he is busy in lecture.. vry imp lecture...

sameer., sheetal is waitng..
 go dude..

hope sameer is not it fr his sweet selfihness...

sheetal will be broken i feel..
 arti..
 chappy i lov u cho cho much...

sachyy muchy i lov u ...

''god save him!..''.. ~~FROWN~~

god save u both..
veer n arjun..
 i dunno hw u living on dis earth wid out a girl in life...

:P

lov u di..
 cmnts wil be late..
 but wil be der...

lov u.
tata

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
awsome part..

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
amazing one
ha ha ha...fighting is more easier than handaling arti...oh veer n arti mahan tumhe shat shat pranam,she is expert in irritating veer
n sameer n sheetal...haye cute but what will happen to arjun the girl hater n kavita the boy hater...bhagwan inkin lovestory ka kya hoga
n kirti is annoyed with arti...aye chal re u urself is in luv n u r getting annoyed with arti...huh badi ayi
but di veer n arti k scene badao,we want more scenes of them plzzz
update soon
luv u :-)

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