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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 28)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
chapter 9-
so now i m on track.. just to be not on track again...i mean, ma cmnt to dius ud is early.. but lets see wat aba oder coming up...
so todays last cmnt..
 but di, u made ma day here...
thnx fr dis lovely shovely stry..

dis is d best subject fr boyz i think..

''bra hooking!''

veer, so hw ws ur first expirence of BRA HOOKING class..
u liked it??

i noe u will say a BIG NO..
 but u lovd it na...
u will think abt it..
 i m sure..

so, in dis lecture of BRA hooking... u learnt to hook a bra..
 NEXT LEESON.. be ready for unhooking the bra...Blushing..
 sry di.. naughty gal i m..
 but,.. wat to do..
 i ducnt hold dat joke..

but, veer, ur dedication in clas.. ur concentration is really wonderful...

so were gazing her back, scrutinized her curves of glowing back...

u loved it???

sameer n arjun..
y r u so bothered fr veer..
he is busy in lecture.. vry imp lecture...

sameer., sheetal is waitng..
 go dude..

hope sameer is not it fr his sweet selfihness...

sheetal will be broken i feel..
 arti..
 chappy i lov u cho cho much...

sachyy muchy i lov u ...

''god save him!..''.. ~~FROWN~~

god save u both..
veer n arjun..
 i dunno hw u living on dis earth wid out a girl in life...

:P

lov u di..
 cmnts wil be late..
 but wil be der...

lov u.
tata

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
amazing one
ha ha ha...fighting is more easier than handaling arti...oh veer n arti mahan tumhe shat shat pranam,she is expert in irritating veer
n sameer n sheetal...haye cute but what will happen to arjun the girl hater n kavita the boy hater...bhagwan inkin lovestory ka kya hoga
n kirti is annoyed with arti...aye chal re u urself is in luv n u r getting annoyed with arti...huh badi ayi
but di veer n arti k scene badao,we want more scenes of them plzzz
update soon
luv u :-)

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
read all parts till now
Awesome <3

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
nice update!!!!!!!
Continue Soon!!!!!!!!SmileSmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Cute update...loved it.
continue soon.

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Loved The Update !!

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
sry di im late

bt i loved it

i mean what type of writer u r?
Every scene is just like happens in front of ma eyes

love ur writing n ur stories

its so good n intresting

loved the veer n aarti's scene she is so cute

omg she went there 4 her dress

hahahahaha

he hooked her bra...what a scene,


how rude he was...ek baar pyaar se dekha bhi nhi

bt di mein abhi bhi blushing really

veer ki jagah aarti ne hi usse ek naya lession sikha diya

veer sikh gya hoga na

overall i love this ud

di ud soon
im waiting

luv u



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fantastic banner...
 claps fr maker.

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