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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 27)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
fantastic ud dhanvi...continue soon

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Nice update dear...
Ooh wht happn veer? U r going to teach a lesson to artina then wht happn? I must say that arti teach a lesson to u that never try to think to taught a lesson to her..she is much smarter than u ...
Nw wanna see her more naughtines towards veer...
Waiting for next
update soon
luv u

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Thanks 4 pm nd waiting 4 next

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
Oh god arti is gone insane in love

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:06pm | IP Logged

simply amazing..

awsum n adorable part..

loved it so much...

aarti is really naughty...

making him do something...he didnt even dreamed of...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
chapter 6-

hehehhe..
 her hero.. beating all oder zeroes..
 mastt line thi ye di..
 lovd the whole ud like blast..
 superbo dis ws just the i say- dhanvi di types..
full of a roler coaster ride..

arti is unpredictable..
 seriously..
 bechari sheetal..
 really lucky to hav a friend like arrti,...ROFL..
 yes di, dis is really wat i m sating..
 dnt call it joke..
 such character.. crack r necessary in life..
 juzz like me..
 dey make u love ur life..

dats wat ma friendz say aba me..
 dey say.. dey cmt imagine deir life widout ma pranks n idiot stuffs, non sense joke, n specially ma fights n skirmish wid teachers..


ooo...
 veer k daday trusty h.. good ..
 verna beta tumhe kabka out of colg kerr dete..

wen i shouting madly in class on a girl.. teacher( bad timing) entered..

den i did OUTSTANDING PERFORMANCE...

((that is, standing out of class..))

since den, i hate dat gal like everything n nothing..

o ma god, sammer is big flirter..
 i likd him..im sry, but i m not...
hahhahahha...

aarti, u r amazing..
 god she is bestest.,
 she kissed him all ovr his face..
 n he ws mesmerzed..
lovely wrk aarrti,
 u r juzz blasting..

amaing di..
 dnt know wat will veer do if she cmnt like dis..
 hope he kisses her in fruestation..
 finger crossed..
 reading next part...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
chapter7-

 i m done wid chapter 7 also..
 yipeeeiii!!!,...
 it ws magical..
 though it ws not veer n arti..
 but...sameer n sheetal r complete opposite to veer n arti..
 i found it sooperbo..
his really lov sheetal.. but she is nervous..

cute couple...

but our arrti is cutest...

lovely shovely oye..
aarti had a sleepless nite..

if the reason wud hav been dat she ws doing studies.. den i wud call it a big fake..
hahaha..
 but reason is veer..
 so i cn understnd..

bechari ko sone bhi nhi dete h...
:P

oops! sachi main.. uss ladki ka kya jo veer ki life main aayegi...

n uss ladke ka kya jo aarti ki life main aayega..
  A BOY FR ARTI- dats more woorying..
 cn anyone endure dis crack jack nuts...

but want eva it is..
 veer the warrior is title..
 but i read dis ff fr AARTI- THE CRACK JACK.. more...

i lov her more..

reading next nw


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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
chapter 8-
u noe di wat..
 i like vikram..
 reason one- he consider arrti as sis..
 good.
 reason two.. he is cool, juzz like veer..

but why is veer a enemy of him.. i wonder..
things to exopose soon i wish..
 stry is a complete roler coaster ride..

sheetal is so shy, she luks such a sweet dis way..
 arjun n kavita... big doubt.. cn lov bloom here too??
wat eva,,
 but i m in lov wid dis stry..
 such a awesome blast dis is..
 lov is in air all around..
 so much lov lov n lov...
every kinda a lov stry is here...

but di.. punch of dis ud ws-
Veer and Vikram watched two sisters fighting...they nodded their heads and walked away...

its really funny to imagine dese sisters here..
 god dey r perfect...
cn anyone say, dey lived in same womb fr 9 months...

lovely wrk di, dis is ur creation.. juzz amazing..

aarti n veer pool scene..
oye hoye..
 kya hot h..
 mastt h...

dis gal. crack jack... she pretended her being unconcious to catch his arm longer..

''oops! her bum...!!...'' ROFL..

veer will not leave her dis time..
 yes veer, catch her, n dnt leave her eva eva...

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