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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 21)

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
chapter 4-
okies, see i m back di..
 rtmc ffs, i cnt resist them for long..
 dats why i completed all ma assignment all nite, came to cafe to read all ffs..
 lovely shovely prt ws dis,
veer is seriously so much in dese fights..
 day nite, fights fights n fights..
 dude, chill up...

oops!, she hates dis college,
 let see kab tak hate karegi...

veer ko dekhte hi madam tulli ho gyi..
 orince charming.. oye hoye.. kya baat h..
 chaa gyi tum tho artii.
 he indirectly embraced you..
 now, dis is d bestest welcome u cn get..
ab bolo,...i hate dis college..
 ab kyun bologi..
 ab tho iss college ne tumhe tumhara prince charming de diya h...

di, d scene, veer saving her frm glass bottle ws gud, lovely scene...

n artii, dancing in her dreamland wid veer, ws evn more bestest...

truely marvelous...

veer is not so connected to his father, sad...

hope arti helps him understnd his relation ...other den friendzzz...

veer dnt like jokes..
 oops!...

so di, plz dnt let veer read ma cmnts..

coz ma cmnts r ussually funny..

he will kill me fr dese rotten joken...

lov u di.

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
i m late again..
 i noe..
 but cnt help it..
  me too new to hostel...
so, lack of time...

so di, lovely shovely ud, just mastt as usual..
 dil jeet liya aapke ud ne as usual...

maaze aa gye by god..
 arti hv guts..
 she is mindblastingly perfrecto  frveer.
 god, she is amazzzing..
 do her character is one... which no other mc's on if cn compete..
 she is marvellous..
 yes, keep up d spirit..
 one day he will fall fr u arti...
or may be he has already fallen fr you...
your suit salwar idea really wrked...

she is not evn blinking..
 wow...
guts...her guts..
 i salute it...


vikram ki bahen h.. thnk god... he consider her a sis...

dats fine...

relief...

only veer n arti now...
balle balle yaar...

wat a business...so hard working ..
 needs so much efforts.. gazing lover...
..
 its not a joke..
 it is really effortful..
 specially wen love is like veer...

staring him is disaster..
 n she is doing it...

arti, gud luk... i m alwayz wid u..
 lov u arti...

ranga... pungi ranga...
 he is d villian...

oye, arti se dur rahiyo...(keep space frm arti..)
verna veer wil mince u seriously...

lov u di, sry fr late cmnt..

hope u r nt annoyed wid me..
 hope u got ma pm telling u dat i m in ma hostel .. so wnt be regular...
i thoght u r annoyed coz u need reply ma pm too..
n dinn cmnt on lovetsory supernatural...

plz di, dnt be... gussa frm me...

lov u..


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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kareena1994

Superb
thanks for the wonderful comments...Smile
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetnandu

Simply superb
thanks dear...Smile
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mddmayuri

awesome cs...
and superb uds...
ud soon
thank you so much dear...will try and update soon...Smile
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aru_86

wow great
thanks aru...Smile
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sultanahabeeb

hi itne jaldi up wow,ist sight mein love nd 2nd sight confession hmmm. . . . .  . 
thanks dear ,thank u ,thank u so much itne jaldi up ke liye
next day kya hoga hame aur ek up chahey 
plzzz
thanks for the lovely comments dear... will try and update soon...Smile
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rukmini13

Sorry for late commnt...
But all parts are awsom...awww ma heroin ki entry was so cute...she is so lovely dovely...
My my whta first meet..just awsom...love the way u described it...
Awww...ma princess fall in love to her prince charming...why not after all they are made for each other...
Omg wht she say nd that too in front of whole students!!!! Really she had that guts...veer kele liye perfect hai...
Ab kaha jaoge bachhu aur kitni during bhagoge vapas to anahihe humari princess kele pas...luv the all parts...
Waiting for next one...
Luv u
thanks for the wonderful comments Ruku... i will try and update soon... luv u Hug

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