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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 15)

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
superb update

so the  credit of this superb update goes 2 our aarti

love her 

me n my friends big pani puri franatics n shamelessly ask for extra "sukha puri"(dry puri with sev garnish)LOL

me n my friends r classified pani puri "bhukad"

so aarti is wearing blue shorts n top so her attire will b modern n traditional . me likey. hope veer will like too

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yeh dosti hum nahi todenge....

this song comes 2 my mind wen u described veer n his friends bond

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Kirti kirti kirti

so u r hopeless lovesick in here

hope  vikram is a nice
ROFL
ROFL

whom i m kidding ,just wish he is not classified "beep"

don't worry kirti if vikram turns to b a "beep"

u have other options like prithvi... i actually typed it subconsciously...
i mean veer's friend

unless  dhanvi di makes vikram an angel ,then the case is different
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so all in all aarti is strong not timid n shy 

so can expect faceoffs between "VeeRti" (veer +aarti)
certainly  there is gonna b misunderstanding's heavy dosage with vikram's courtesy 
but i guess there r gonna be nice moments too
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so let me await 4 wat happens next

so buckle up
next stop kasuali


Edited by pranita1202 - 17 August 2012 at 7:02am

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Very nice ud dear..
& thanks so much for listening our request..Smile
Well Veer get up late everyday..
& all scares lot frm Veer..
even his frnds...too..
ha ha ha...LOL
& at other side...
Kirti & Aarti..
Aarti is jst opposite to Veer..
Veer is angry young man..& at other side Aarti is bubbly..naughty
what??Shocked
Aarti wants to marry wid a guy who will follow all hr orders..Big smile
oh my God..!
Aarti doesn't like violence...very nice..
bt Aarti dear u don't know...u may b in luv wid d prson who is violent..Wink
well! let's see...Who will listen to whom?
Veer will really listen to Aarti or Aarti will listen to Veer...
finally Aarti is agreed to go to Kasuli..wow!
waiting for Veer & Aarti's first meeting..
giv d nxt ud soon plz..

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Dinka Chika...   Dinka Chika...  Dancing    Dancing

Finally most awaited person has entered in the story... 

Aarti... Veer's lady love, lady luck, his queen of heart... Heart

It'll be fun to watch Kirti nd Aarti's fight ( me nd my sister also fights alot LOL)

nd I am waiting for first meeting of Veer & Aarti Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming

plz update soon and I was right "first hate nd den LOVE..."

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Hey...I have a request from u..
plz give d character sketch of Veer his frnds & Aarti & Kirti..& their parents..
plz

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
reserved :) 

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
superb update loved it

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 2:33am | IP Logged
thanks for udpates!!
sorry for late comment
beautiful both parts!!
loved veer as the worrier!1
he din't like any injustice n he fights for tht!!
so kirti loves vikram!!
and her sis arti must be our mugz!!
exciting abt their first meet!!

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Mugdha's entry was awsum...i really love ur writing style...the way you place each and every word is fantastic...i can clearly visualize the characters...
Veer love sleeping till late just lyk me [:p]

update soon

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