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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 (Page 11)

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pranita1202

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  this comes 2 my mind  after enjoying this action packed update

(Heeyyy..
Tali bajawe naache gaawe

Heeyyy..
Tali bajawe naache gaawe
Rab howe sarik jeene ke jasan mein) '- (2)
Apni tho baat margar kuch nirali hai
Apne toh khoon mein ishq ki lali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)

Dhoop tashan hai, raat tashan hai
Apni tho har bath tashan hai
Kaise bhi halat tashan hai
Waise insaan hai
Tede apne karam huye hai
Hum suraj pe garam huye hai
Kabhi sharam pe sharam huye hai
Thode naadan hai
(Humpe hai rahe teer sikandar ka
Humpe kurban ha neel samundar ka) '-(2)
Hum jaise hai, kismet ke lakh sawari hai
Apni tho baat magar kuch nirali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)

(Tali bajawe naache gaawe

Heeyyy..
Tali bajawe naache gaawe
heyyy
Rab howe sarik jeene ke jasan mein) '' (2)
Apni tho baat margar kuch nirali hai
Apne toh khoon mein ishq ki lali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)


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That was sooo goood

so apart frm stating the obvious how gr8 it was lets see how feel abt the update


so action was gr8


i loved veer's entry especially the sarcasm abt hockey stickLOL


veer is full of attitude , the way he says vikram to take rahul's place


i love to u  named veer   archenemy   'vikram'

 (i don't know if people remember the in PRC who had bad 4 sanyo n kidnaps her i.e her almost fiance was also vikram , i that track i soo wanted prithvi 2 kick the crap out of vikram but that didn't happen , )


so cooming back 2 now

the way u said he caught basket ball without seeing , i had  a drool worthy rajat's image in my mind Embarrassed


so he is a fighterClap



so the gal is mugs or not

might b or not


i guess not


so veer gets punishment to do hostel chores

hope wen mugs will enter he gets duty at gal's hostelWink


hey sweetie...thanks for the lovely comments... no that girl is certainly not Veer's love... will update soon... Wink

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shraddhamurat

Veer stands for injustice thats really cool nd nice Smile

now and then he enters into a fi8 against injustice.

The man harassing a gal iz such a coward
well veer taught hm a nice lesson
thanks for the wonderful comments dear...Smile
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by disha15

reserved :)

EDITED.

Tell me something,is there any genre in writing that you're not good at? LOL you've mastered everything!romance mein toh aap bhai kamaal ho hi(tum mero ho bein its brand ambassador) and horror (now with shikar Embarrassed.romance+horror-deadly combo!) and now action also! Big smile bas ab comedy baaki hai Tongue(btw many ppl have been telling me that they want an RT-MC comedy ff.start kardo na woh bhi Embarrassed )

This update was fully action-packed(ofcourse u already know that,you only wrote it afterall! ROFL ) I loved Veer's character! He is so righteous!You've done a great job in showcasing his characteristics.

Super update!Btw ahem,humaari heroine kab aayegi? Tongue  or wait,was that girl in the market her only? Shocked
hey sweetie... i am too useless to master anythingWink... thanks a lot for appreciating Veer... well the girl in the market was certainly not the heroine...Smile...i will update soon...thanks for such lovely comments...Big smile
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aru_86

wow great update..m feeling like watching a film
thanks dear Smile
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swati_prithvi

wow nice ud..
full of aggression...fight..anger..
Veer fights against injustice..
well this make him different..
he is strong..brave..fearless..  & gud frm hrt...Tongue
bt he doesn't wanna show d soft part of his heart to any1..
got punishmnt of purchasing vegetables...
ha ha ha...LOLLOL
thn agn he saved a gal..
gud..Veer is gr8..
luvd d ud..
waiting for d nxt part..Smile
thanks for the wonderful comments dear..Hug... will try and update soon... Smile

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tejjo

Vry dishum dishum update di

kya ff h
rt is angry young man just like my aarav

awesome part tha di
first action scene is my fav...i visualise that scene...vikram enemy of veer huh!
Veer ke samne koi kuch nhi h

awww so sweet our veer fight 4 injustice n helped everyone

mera action hero h veer toh

wow punishment v mast h vegetables lana h market se

wo bhi girls colg ke pass se

omg usi hostel me mugs v hogi

kitna maza ayega jb veer roj fight karega
or roj usse punishment milegi
roj wo market jayega
roj mugs se milega
roj romance hoga or roj mugs pyaar se uski injury par ointment lagayegi

oh god mene kitna kuch imagine v kar liye

di u know na me a crazy fan of urs n rtmc

di market wali ladki mugs h na
chalo first meeting hone wali h rt mc ki

im waiting di
jaldi ud dena

wait hota nhi h mujhse

luv u
thank you so much darling...your comments are much appreciated... i will try and update soon... luv u Hug
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridzzi

oh what a nice great part di...
veer is in his full too tashan...professor k wajah se vikram bach gaya...otherwise we will able to see super dangerous fight...dhishum dhishum
n wah re what a punishment...but the girl whom he saved is his heroine or some random girl ?
update soon
luv u   :-)
hey sweetie... thanks a lot for your wonderful comments...i am glad you are liking the story... no the girl whom he saved is not the heroine...Smile... will update soon... lov u Hug

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

res will edit 2omorow
 
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 u noe di.. wat ma cousins say..
 if u r mad at some one due to sm reason..
 to it to fullest...
 
wat wrding dey use is- pitoo pitoo...AAPNE BAAP KA MAAL SAMJHKER PITOO...!!'''
 
(consider the man u beating - a property of your father...)
 
amzing know..
 so here to , i ws cheering veer wid dis.. AUR MAARO AUR MAARO. AAPNE BAAP KA MAAL SAMJHKE MAARO..
 haq se maare, lath(leg) se maaro.. punch se maaro, chate se maaro..
 aapne baap ka maal samjhke maaro...
 
lovely dhisum dhisum update.. i lov all dis stuff...
 
but why did it end..
 god dese tearchers hav such a bad timing..
 local h sab k sab...
 
aieee...vikram... beta yeh aatitude kisse dekha rahe ho..
humare veer perr koi  farak nhi padta..
 u r flop in frnt him...
 
lovely update di.. loved it..
 is it our mugzz...
 
but di, i dnt want mugz LIKE TOUCH ME NOT...
 
i want me equal dashing n smashing as veer.. TAKKER ki bandi honi chahiye.. plz...
 
ud soon di..
 lov u..
 
 
maaro maaro, apne baap ka maal samjhker maaro
 
 
 
 
thanks a lot baby...i don't know why i always wait for your comments Wink...may be cause you make me smile...  as usual loved reading your sweet comments...no the heroine hasn't made her entry yet... will surely update soon... luv u sweetie...Hug

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